This is the first chapter of what hopefully becomes an ongoing saga. It tells the tale of Blair, a kinky transgender witch who fights crime using the alias 'Sultry Girl'. She mostly faces off against hypnotic and BDSM themed villains.
Every chapter is designed to entrance the reader. I'm still learning how to write in that style, and any feedback you have is greatly appreciated.
I created this character accidentally while writing on a different story. I wanted to post this story first, but I probably won't continue it until my other story is finished.
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Chapter 1: Dr. Sonic
Deep in his secret lair, Dr. Sonic was putting the finishing touches on his latest creation. His steady hands moved with patience and precision as the final gear clicked into place. He held the two devices next to one another to scrutinize them. They needed to be in perfect calibration, otherwise his mind could be melted by his own creation.
In his right hand he held a clock, designed to vibrate at a hypnotic frequency. A single Tick could stop all thought and every Tock made the listeners more pliable and obedient. In his right hand he held a pair of earbuds designed to cancel out the effect. They seemed to be in perfect alignment, but there was only one way to be sure. He inserted the earbuds and wound the clock a single step.
Tick Tock
His thoughts appeared to be intact. Either the earbud was working, or the clock wasn't. He'd find out momentarily.
"
Martha!
" He called out for his assistant. He stared at her as she sauntered into the room, watching her hips sway back and forth.
"
Yes Doctor. What can I do for you?
" said Martha. She wore the same disapproving look on her face. She always wore that look when she caught him staring at her ample chest and curvaceous ass. That look told him that she secretly despised him, and only showed up to work because the pay was double what she'd get elsewhere. The jokes on you Martha, he thought to himself. Soon your mind will be empty, and you will be my helplessly obedient slave.
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I wrote a poem about this clock. I'd like you to listen and tell me what you think.
" Dr. Sonic Replied.
"
Tick Tock goes the clock, rhythmically when wound. Tick Tock time slows down, focus on the sound. Tick Tock victims hear, they cannot resist. Tick Tock thoughts dissolve, like a cloud of mist.
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I think you're wasting my time on silly nonsense, Martha thought to herself. And I think you're a misogynistic creeper with an unhealthy obsession for-
Tick Tock Tick Tock
She lost her train of thought completely. There was something weird about the way that clock sounded, but she couldn't quite put her finger on-
Tick Tock Tick Tock
"
Well?
" Dr. Sonic asked with an amused look on his face. "
What are you thinking?
"
"
I, um
" Martha stammered unable to think of a response. There was something she wanted to say to him, but she couldn't quite remember what it was. She just needed to focus and-
Tick Tock Tick Tock
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That's okay Martha. You don't need to think anything anymore. You just need to focus on the sound of my clock and let me do the thinking for you. Doesn't that sound nice?
"
Alarm bells sounded in Martha's head. No. I can't let this lecherous slime ball tell me how to thi-
Tick Tock Tick Tock
What was going on. Dr. Sonic was looking at her like he was waiting for a response, but she couldn't quite remember the question. It was so hard to think right now.
"
Martha. I asked you a question. When I ask you a question you should respond with 'Yes Master'. Now let me ask again. Doesn't it sound nice to just let me do the thinking for you?
"
Wait. she thought, that's not-
Tick Tock Tick Tock
The clock was working perfectly. Martha's will was growing weaker by the second. Soon she would be kneeling before her master.
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The ticking sounds so nice doesn't it Martha?
" asked Dr. Sonic. Something about that question sounded so familiar, but she couldn't think of what it was.
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