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Seduced By Salvation Ch 02

Seduced By Salvation Ch 02

by mad5226
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Trigger Warning: This chapter, and really the entire serious deals with some really dark themes. I try my best to tackle all of them in a tasteful manner that doesn't make light of or glorify the behavior.

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The dark-robed figure loomed over Jacob, his face obscured by his hood. His raspy voice seemed to emanate from everywhere at once.

"Brother Jacob, you stand before the sacred waters, ready to begin your purification. Say yes, and I shall guide you along the path."

Jacob swallowed hard, chest tightening. Across the moonlit clearing, he could see Emily being led away by George. "I...yes. I'll do whatever is required."

"Wise choice," the hooded man hissed. "Now let us cleanse you of your transgressions, starting with Lust. Speak aloud each act of carnal indecency you have committed. Only then, will you be able to properly atone for your sins."

Shame burned Jacob's cheeks as flashes of intimate moments with Emily played through his mind - her soft gasps, the heat of their mingled bodies, his worshipful caresses along the curves he knew by heart.

As each salacious memory passed his lips, the hooded figure grabbed him by the scruff of his collar and plunged his head beneath the icy waters, holding him under until his lungs burned. Just as his vision started to strobe from lack of oxygen, he'd yank Jacob up, allowing him a thin whistle of air before the next confession.

"The rear parking lot after Emily's senior prom...her mouth around me after too many wine coolers..."

Dunk, churn of water filling his senses, explosion of bubbles as he was hauled up again, spluttering.

"I have touched her... most sensitive areas until she reached climax."

He was dunked into the icy water again. His lungs burning for air. "I've allowed her to touch me, also until climax."

Another dunk. This went on for the next fifteen minutes while Jacob thought about every possible act of lust they had committed.

"Enough sins of the flesh!" The rasping voice seemed to wrap around his mind like a thick tendril. "Let us move on to Greed. What materialistic temptations have caused your soul to stray from righteousness?"

Jacob racked his brain, desperate to appease. "I...I've been selfish with money before. Spent Emily's hard-earned cash on stupid stuff instead of saving for our future."

The bone-chilling laughter made his skin prickle. "Trivial, but we must abolish all sin." Another vicious shove, explosive dunk.

Across the water, Jacob caught a glimpse of Emily, her white dress now thoroughly soaked and plastered against her trembling frame as George held her head beneath the dark waters. He watched in horror, fueled by his own desperate gasps for air, as George's hands slowly crept up her thighs, parting the thin fabric with each dunk.

The ritual seemed to stretch for an eternity of excruciating humiliation and struggle, the sins becoming more abstract the longer it dragged.

Wrath - "I've...I've wanted to punch Emily's asshole father in the face every time he told me I wasn't good enough for her."

Envy - "I resent how easy other people's lives look. How they were born into money and had everything handed to them instead of having to scrimp and fight for every opportunity."

Pride - "I'm...I'm too arrogant. Too sarcastic and convinced of my own cleverness at times."

The confessions weren't just dunkings in cold water. Each one cut deep into his mind and soul, stripping away layer after layer until only the rawest, most basic part of himself was left. By the time the hooded man finally let him go, he collapsed into a shivering, soaking mess on the muddy bank, choking and gasping for air. His view of himself was suddenly much lower after hearing every wrong thing he'd done listed out loud.

Just moments earlier, he had faced this judgment feeling confident and defiant. But hearing his own confessed sins and mistakes thrown back at him was like staring into a harsh mirror, showing him an ugly, twisted version of himself that he didn't recognize. The arrogant self-assurance he had armor plated himself in crumbled away, leaving him desperately uncertain about who he really was under all those sins and failures laid bare. For the first time in his life he wondered if perhaps Emily's parents were right about him all along.

A soft hand stroked his face as George leaned in close, his warm breath raising the hairs on Jacob's clammy neck.

"Well done, brother. You have endured the rite of purification with humbling dignity. The Father will be most pleased with your commitment."

As George helped Jacob to his feet, he turned to find Emily huddled nearby, her eyes glassy and unfocused. Her white dress, now thoroughly transparent, clung to her curves in shredded remnants of lace. Even from a distance, Jacob could see the contours of her body through the sheer fabric, her form exposed and vulnerable for anyone to see.

His gaze shot toward George, a silent accusation burning in his stare. But the older man's face was serene, seemingly oblivious to having done anything wrong.

"The females undergo a more...intensive ritual," George explained calmly. "Our sisters must seek the depths of their divine feminine energy if they are to earn the Father's favor. A process not meant for male eyes or understanding. I assure you, no harm has come to her. In fact, she reacted quite positively." George's pervasive smile sent chills up Jacob's spine as he tried to understand what exactly that meant.

Emily didn't react or speak, her thousand-yard stare and shallow breathing suggesting she was mentally adrift, locked in a zone of disassociation.

Jacob ached to run to her, to hold her in his arms and whisk them away from this depraved place. But the cloaked men had closed ranks, eyes glinting from the shadows of their hoods like feral dogs cornering their prey.

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Pushing back the dark tide of rage and helplessness, Jacob forced himself to hold his tongue. For now, all he could do was endure whatever fresh Hell this island delivered. He would find a way to reach Emily and break her from this trance. Even if it meant risking his own life in the process.

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Jacob tossed and turned on the thin mattress, sleep eluding him as doubts and worries about their situation on Holy Isle swirled through his mind. When morning finally came, he was jolted awake by the relentless blare of a horn.

Harsh sunlight filtered through the grimy windows, catching dust motes swirling through the cramped bunkhouse Jacob now called home. The other bunks were empty, his roommates already roused and departed for their daily activities.

Jacob threw off his musty blanket, squinting in the bright rays. He still wore the rough brown uniform from yesterday, the fabric chafing skin rubbed raw from being submerged and violently dunked for what felt like hours.

With a groan, Jacob swung his legs off the bunk and shoved his feet into the scuffed leather boots, grimacing at their stiffness. He'd need to soak them later if he planned on marching any significant distance today without destroying his heels.

As if on cue, a sharp rapping came at Jacob's door, causing him to start. "Brother Jacob!" The muffled voice carried a tone of impatient authority. "You're overdue in the fields. There is a bowl of oatmeal waiting for you at the dining pavilion. I suggest you eat it, you'll need the energy. When you're done, assemble at once in the fields if you hope to earn extra sustenance today!"

Jacob rolled his eyes at the threat, but he knew better than to defy the order. Begrudgingly, he snatched up his wide-brimmed hat hoping it would offer at least a little protection from the blistering heat of the sun as hurried out, squinting against the bright morning sunlight.. The small compound pathway was already empty, the other men having departed for their daily chores.

Jacob set off at a jog, cursing under his breath. The sooner he jumped through their ridiculous labor hoops, the sooner he could check on Emily and formulate a way out of this waking nightmare. Hopefully, the distance and isolation would help clear the fog of whatever brainwashed stupor had seized her mind.

At the dining pavilion, Jacob found his meager meal- a small wooden bowl containing a paltry portion of oatmeal gruel. The bland, gluey mush held little appeal, but he knew the consequences of turning up to the fields without having eaten. He'd need his strength for what promised to be a long day of manual labor. Pinching his nose, Jacob shoveled it down, feeling the sticky lumps slide down his throat with each labored swallow. When the bowl was finally scraped clean, he cast it aside and started toward the fields, hoping his promptness might prove to Emily that he was following through with his word.

The path curved past a dense shrub line, leading Jacob into a small clearing where over a dozen men were already hard at work, bent at the waist and pulling crops from long rows of neatly tilled soil. The air hung thick and heavy, a wet heat that immediately set Jacob's shirt soaking through with sweat.

An older, wiry man with a high crew cut glared at Jacob as he stumbled toward the workers, raising a callused hand to point at the nearest row.

"Brother Jacob, you're late!" The man's fiery eyes glared into Jacob's very soul, daring him to get out of line. "Fall into a column and get digging. I expect this entire field to be cleared by lunch if you expect another meal."

Jacob swallowed hard, suppressing the urge to snap back. With a curt nod, he hurried toward the rich, brown furrows and knelt, digging his fingers into the welcoming earth. Sweat soon beaded on his brow as another voice cut through the grunts and groans of exertion.

"Well, well, if it isn't the greenhorn stumbling in late."

Jacob looked up to find a thick-bodied man with a dirty blonde buzzcut grinning at him from the adjacent row. The man paused to wipe the sweat from his brow.

"Name's David," the man said with a friendly smile that didn't reach his haunted eyes. "You just get tossed into the deep end after last night's 'festivities'?"

Jaw clenched, Jacob attacked a stubborn root with aggressive yanks. "Could say that. Not exactly the marriage preparation retreat Emily and I were promised."

David chuckled knowingly. "We all say that at first. But you gotta trust The Father. His divine wisdom will set you on a righteous path, whether you like it or not."

Jacob groaned at the cultish platitudes, his mind wheeling. How could no one else see the evil festering here? As he tossed a weed aside, he met David's gaze pleadingly. "I need to get Emily out of here."

For a moment, David's smile faltered, a flicker of regret and sadness passing over his face. But then the vacant look returned. "That's the poison talking - the sickness of the outside world polluting your mind. You gotta let go, brother. Say yes to The Father's teachings and blessings. It's the only way to rid yourself of that filth."

Shaking his head vehemently, Jacob clutched the rock in his filthy hands like a lifeline. "You've been through this whole 'purification' process then? With the...sins and depravations?"

David's expression darkened as he busied himself digging, refusing to meet Jacob's eyes. "Yep. Purged myself real good...Amanda too, though her experience was more intense than mine."

A cold knot twisted in Jacob's gut at the implication. What horrors had Amanda endured? "What do you mean? What did they put her through exactly?"

"Oh, it wasn't as bad as it sounds," David said with a sickly smile, clapping Jacob's shoulder. "In fact, it worked out wonderfully once The Father helped me overcome my greatest sin and put her well being first."

Jacob's brow furrowed in confusion. "Your greatest sin?"

With a heavy sigh, David pulled up his sweat-stained shirt, revealing the damning word "Greed" inked in harsh block letters across his chest. Jacob recoiled, horror creeping back in.

"They... they branded you?" The words barely escaped Jacob's lips as he wondered what other horrors were in store.

"Not branded, just helped remind me of my most mortal sin. You see," David continued softly, "even here, I continued indulging my selfish greed, putting my own desires above Amanda's spiritual destiny. The Father opened my eyes - she has become one of the chosen."

Jacob froze, the rock slipping from his numb grasp as the world seemed to tilt. "The chosen?" he croaked.

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With a wry smile, David gripped Jacob's arm and gently guided him toward the forest's tree line. "It's better if I show you," he said as they disappeared into the forest before anyone would notice they were missing.

A sense of dread mixed with intrigue washed over Jacob as they rushed through the heavily wooded forest. The coarse branches tugged at Jacob's clothes and whipped his exposed skin as they pushed deeper into the dense foliage.

Finally, David halted and pointed through a screen of long leaves, indicating Jacob should peek through. As he did, Jacob felt his heart plummet into an icy pit of dread.

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From the shadows of the trees, Jacob watched as a woman made her way into the clearing. The sunlight filtered through the leaves, casting a warm glow on her golden hair and highlighting the curve of her naked body. She moved with a grace and confidence that was impossible to ignore, her every step filled with purpose.

"There she is, that's Amanda," David whispered boastfully beside him, his voice dripping with the misguided pride of a father.

Jacob's jaw went slack as he drank in her beauty. Amanda's delicate features stirred a gut-punch of grief as the pieces clicked into place - she bore an unsettling resemblance to Emily. His gaze traveled down the swell of her belly, and his breath caught in his throat. The world seemed to tilt violently.

"Is she..." Jacob's voice cracked as he swallowed hard. "Pregnant?"

A warm smile spread across David's face. "Around five months along now. I'm told the baby is quite healthy and blessed beyond measure."

Tearing his eyes away, Jacob searched David's expression as his stomach churned. "Are you...the father?"

David threw back his head with a booming laugh, clutching his belly. "Me? Good heavens no! This child is the heir of The Father himself - the prophesied one who will continue to lead us to salvation."

Jacob's brow furrowed as he turned back to Amanda, trying to process David's words. His eyes traced the gentle curves of her swollen abdomen, and bile burned the back of his throat. "But she's your fiancΓ©..."

Placing a comforting hand on Jacob's shoulder, David gave it a soft squeeze. "Such greed fuels your possessiveness, brother. Amanda belongs solely to The Father now. I've embraced the wisdom of prioritizing her sacred destiny over my selfish wants."

Words failed Jacob as he turned back to the clearing, his grip on hope rapidly slipping away.

In the center of the clearing stood The Father. His large protruding belly hung freely from the opened faded blue tunic he wore. Despite his age, he seemed to be moving with the speed and agility of someone twenty years his junior as he attended to the other women around him.

As Amanda approached, the other women in the clearing seemed to fade into the background. They were all beautiful, their bodies on full display as they serviced The Father in various ways. Some knelt before him, their lips wrapped around his large penis as they took him deep into their mouths. Others lay on their backs, their legs spread wide pleasuring themselves as The Father's eyes feasted on their most intimate parts. But it was clear that Amanda was his main focus.

Jacob watched in revolted fascination as The Father caressed Amanda's belly with perverse reverence. She leaned into his touch with a blissful sigh, then he crushed his lips to hers, his gnarled hands roaming her flesh as she trembled with desire.

The Father then stood up and removed his tunic completely, his large penis now on full display. Jacob couldn't help but gasp at the sight of it, a sudden sense of inadequacy washing over him.

The Father took Amanda by the hand and guided her to a soft patch of grass. Laying her down possessively. Jacob watched, transfixed, as The Father positioned himself between her legs, his eyes never breaking contact with Amanda. He pressed his penis against her womanhood, and Jacob watched with a sense of awe as her lips parted for the obscene piece of flesh. He heard Amanda release a soft sigh as The Father's penis slid over her lips against her clit. The Father repositioned himself, again pressing against her small opening and was rewarded with the warmth of her desire. He pressed his hips forward entering her slowly, his movements deliberate and controlled.

Jacob's entire being screamed in anguish as The Father's bloated cock disappeared inside Amanda to the hilt. her back arched wordlessly, her face contorted in a rictus of ecstasy as the women swarmed around them.

As The Father began to move inside her, the other women in the clearing continued to service him. They rubbed their bodies against his, their hands stroking his chest and arms. They took turns kissing him, their tongues dancing together as they vied for his attention. But The Father's focus remained on Amanda, his eyes locked on hers as he brought her closer and closer to climax.

Jacob watched as Amanda's body writhed beneath The Father, her hips rising to meet his every thrust. He could see the way her breasts bounced with each movement, her nipples hard and erect. He could hear the soft moans that escaped her lips, the sounds of pleasure that filled the clearing. At one point he looked to David, afraid this all may be too much for him. However, David was just as lost in the moment as Jacob was. His eyes never left the clearing. The tent in his tight pants made it obvious to Jacob that he was enjoying it way more than Jacob thought he should.

When Jacob looked back to the clearing, The Father had grabbed Amanda by the waist and pulled her onto his prone body. She reached down, running her fingers through his thick gray chest hair as her hips slammed against his thighs.

As The Father increased his pace, the other women in the clearing became more frenzied in their efforts to please him. They took turns straddling his face, grinding their hips against his mouth as he licked and sucked their most sensitive parts. They moaned and cried out, their voices mingling with Amanda's as they all reached the heights of pleasure. Amanda barely even registered their presents. Her entire focus was on The Father, and the orgasm she felt beginning to stir from deep inside her.

Jacob could feel his own body responding to the scene before him, his arousal building with each passing moment. He longed for Emily, to feel the touch of her hands on his skin, to taste the sweetness of her kiss.

As The Father and Amanda reached their peak together, the other women in the clearing cried out in unison, their voices rising in a chorus of pleasure. Jacob could see the way their bodies shook with the force of their release, the way their limbs trembled as they collapsed onto the grass.

Jacob was jolted out of his daze by a soft hand on his shoulder. As he turned away from the scene in front of him he was face to face with the smiling face of David.

"We should get back now. Before the others discover we are missing."

All Jacob could do was give a soft nod as he looked over his shoulder one last time to see Amanda lying breathless on the chest of The Father. His manhood still lodged inside her.

As they hurried away, Jacob's mind whirled, grasping for any handhold of hope. But David's parting words lanced through him like a barbed sword:

"They'll be seeking a new member of The Chosen soon...perhaps you and your pretty fiancΓ© can earn that most sacred blessing."

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