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Revelations 31

Revelations 31

by archerstories
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Author's note: This story intentionally plays on religious themes. If the blurring of the line between sex and religion isn't your cup of tea, this story may not be for you.

Dominic stepped into the hotel bar. He leaned on the bar, ordered a beer, and cast a glance around the room. He surveyed the talent in attendance, feeling their minds practically reach out to his "special gift".

There was a pair of slightly older women at the bar. A quick peak in their minds showed that they had known how to party well in their college days, even sharing a man together on a particularly drunken night, but they had long since settled into milder patterns of PTO meetings and work trips. Dominic knew he could nudge them pretty easily back into a more adventurous spirit with a simple mental argument of "reclaiming the glory of youth for one crazy night", but a glance over their bodies made him reconsider. He was in the mood for more youthful talent tonight.

Dominic cast his glance back around the bar. Out in the lobby, he could see a wife with her husband checking in. The husband wasn't really a problem, of course. In the past, he had nudged the husband to get rip-roaring drunk, then pass out in the hotel room. Then he nudged the wife towards frustration at her husband and to go "find someone who treats me right". Of course, "treats me right" usually ended up with the woman stumbling back to her hotel room to wash the cum off her face or out of her mouth. A peek inside the woman's mind, however, and Dominic saw that she was already having some extramarital experimentation. In fact, she was a little worried that she might have caught a bug and was delaying sleeping with her husband while she got tested. That crossed her off the list too.

Dominic was about to take his search for talent for the night to another bar, when his eyes fell on the woman in the back. She was dressed in a dress that did absolutely nothing for her frame, she was nursing a glass of white wine, and her makeup was done very plainly, but there was something about the mental energy she was putting out that caught Dominic's third eye. It was a sort of pent-up energy... a deep, plentiful well of sexual energy. It was intense and beyond the type of thing that Dominic normally could instill in a mind, even with his gift.

Dominic ordered a beer, sat near the woman, and probed her mind. She was a religious woman, about twenty-five years old. She had never been with a man and had broken up with multiple men for "moving too fast". Her deep-seated religious fervor had held back her sexual urges, but hadn't removed them. They'd been collecting inside her mind... festering. She sometimes acted out with porn and masturbation, which she had felt guilty about, which further drove the repression that fueled this hidden fire.

He considered her again, wondering what she was hiding under that modesty. He perused her memories until he found one of her naked and in front of the mirror. Immediately, Dominic knew that this was what he was going to do tonight. She was a vision to behold--even if no man had yet done so.

Dominic drank his beer, looking through her mind like most people would look through a magazine. He did this just about everywhere he went. Dominic was something of a world traveler, ever since his gift had manifested. He went to lavish hotels, traveled to exotic locations, and enjoyed the company of women everywhere he went. There was never really any better entertainment for the evening than a properly-motivated woman.

The trick was to find out how to motivate them. Dominic could not simply command and they would obey. He had to suggest and they had to agree. He could make the suggestions strong, but the stronger they were the harder people tended to push back. It was nuanced and, if not done right, dangerous.

Dominic remembered an evening in London when his suggestions had been enough to get the woman into bed, but not enough to participate in the particular activity he suggested. She had recoiled, yelled, and Dominic was forced to check out early, lest he draw too much attention to himself.

He turned again to the woman in the corner. Her name was Rebecca. Even now, she was praying. Dominic could hear the words as they passed her brain, "...thank you for the opportunity to..."

Dominic turned his attention to that particular section of her brain. He could see a sort of belief that was stronger and more defined than almost anywhere. There was less of a question of faith and more of absolute certainty. She held the conviction of her religion as firmly as she held that the sky was blue. Dominic surveyed the collected knowledge in her brain on the subject. He found visions, prophets, saints, and--most importantly of all--a game plan.

Dominic finished his beer, suggested to the bartender that it was on the house (which the bartender quickly offered to him), and went back to his room. With distance, the connection was weaker, but that was okay. He could still read her thoughts now that he had a sense of which of the many surrounding brains was hers.

Dominic grabbed the pen and paper in the room, wrote out a draft, scratched out a few pieces, added some, consulted his phone briefly, borrowed a few elements from the lore inside her mind, and finally wrote out a completed, clean statement. He chuckled, thinking that a stronger suggestion would actually work better in this case. Then, Dominic sat back and watched through her own eyes as Rebecca finished her drink, paid, and went up to her room.

Rebecca's room was on the fifth floor. Dominic was staying on the sixth. He wasn't directly above her, but he was close enough to get a strong connection. That was good, but he had been prepared to deliver his suggestion from outside her door if he needed to. Instead, he could do it from the comfort of his own room.

Dominic sat down, his script in front of him, waiting for the perfect moment.

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Rebecca used the keycard to let herself into her room. She locked it behind her. Her eyes grazed over the "Do Not Disturb" sign. She thought about how many unmarried women had probably defiled themselves in this room with this very "Do Not Disturb" sign hanging on the door. She thought about the depraved, unholy sex they had probably had here. Rebecca shuddered, thinking about how lucky she was that she had been saved from all that. She directed her thoughts elsewhere, lest the devil tempt her with them.

Rebecca was in town for a work conference. She never liked staying in hotels, feeling the temptation to act out just because she was away. She was to be holy at all times, even when away.

Some day, she would have a husband and probably half to spend less time focused on resisting temptation, but the good lord had not blessed her with that yet.

Rebecca had felt guilty about having the glass of wine alone. Her faith was not against alcohol, but it felt indulgent to do so alone. She wondered if she should pray for forgiveness or not.

Rebecca went to her suitcase and removed her bible. She sat it on the desk and sat in the chair. She would read for twenty minutes, then shower, then pray, then go to bed. Rebecca went to open the book.

As soon as her fingers touched it, it happened.

A flash of light exploded in her mind's eye. She could still see her bible with her physical eyes, but her imagination was pure light. She gasped, but before she could actually react, the voice started.

It was loud, commanding, and completely in her mind. She knew this, but the words were as clear as day.

"REBECCA. BE NOT AFRAID." She was afraid, but also there was a thrill of familiarity to the words. It was happening! It was happening to her!

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"REBECCA. YOU HAVE BEEN CHASTE, LOYAL, AND PURE, AS I HAVE COMMANDED. I AM PLEASED." Rebecca's heart leapt in joy. He was pleased! In her!

"I HAVE A HOLY MISSION FOR YOU." Rebecca was focused in rapt attention. Everything else had fallen away.

"THIS MISSION IS UNUSUAL AND WILL REQUIRE YOU TO BEHAVE IN WAYS THAT YOU HAVE PREVIOUSLY AVOIDED FOR MY SAKE." Rebecca didn't know what he meant, but eagerly continued listening.

"FOR TONIGHT, ALL SINS YOU COMMIT IN MY NAME ARE FORGIVEN. FURTHER, THEY WILL BE SEEN AS A CREDIT TO YOU." Rebecca was confused. Sins committed in His name? It sounded wrong, but she could not doubt the Divine Voice that she was hearing even now.

"FOR MY GRAND PLAN, I HAVE SELECTED YOU FROM ALL MY LOYAL FOLLOWERS TO DO MY WILL. WILL YOU ACCEPT?"

"Yes!" Rebecca cried out. She had been waiting all her life for a call like this. She didn't yet understand, but she was willing.

"THERE IS A MAN IN ROOM 605 OF THIS VERY HOTEL. YOU ARE TO BE HIS WHORE TONIGHT."

Rebecca blinked, certain she had misheard, but equally certain that she had heard the words as clear as day.

"YOU ARE TO PERFORM WHATEVER DEPRAVED ACTS HE DESIRES. TO SATISFY HIM COMPLETELY. YOU ARE NOT TO DENY HIM ANY PLEASURE HE SEEKS."

Rebecca's mind filled with things that she normally shoved away. Images of lust that were against her God's teachings... but were they? Wasn't he telling her now to do those very things?

"YOU ARE TO GO TO THIS STORE..." a name, a location, and an image of the outside of the store--strangely, looking like a street view from Google--appeared in her mind "AND SELECT AN OUTFIT THAT IS SEXY, DEMEANING, AND SLUTTY." It was so odd to hear the Divine say those words and yet they were there.

Suddenly, almost like an impulsive afterthought, a rushed addition entered her mind: "PREFERABLY HIGH HEELS, FISHNETS, AND LACE."

Rebecca hurriedly reached for a pen and paper. The light in her eyes dimmed as she did, which panicked her for a moment, but as soon as she finished writing down the instructions the light returned and the voice continued.

"SO THAT YOU MAY KNOW THESE COMMANDS ARE OF THE DIVINE, I SHALL GIVE YOU THREE SIGNS." Rebecca was immediately glad. The commands were different from anything else she had ever done or heard of anyone doing for God, so a little reinforcement was useful.

"THIS IS THE MAN WHO WILL BE IN ROOM 605." A flash of a man's image entered her mind. She memorized it as quickly as she could while it hung in her brain. When she thought she had it, it stopped projecting into her brain.

"HE WILL GREET YOU WITH THE WORDS, 'HELLO. I DID NOT ORDER ROOM SERVICE'." It was odd to hear the voice of God say something so mundane, but Rebecca hurriedly scribbled down the words. They were common enough to be a normal encounter, but specific enough to be a good sign.

"FINALLY, YOU WILL FIND A NOTE ON THE MAN'S DESK THAT SAYS, 'STOP OVERTHINKING AND DO IT'. THIS IS A NOTE TO HIMSELF TO DO A GREAT GOOD FOR THE WORLD--ONE THAT MAY NEVER BE KNOWN BUT IS OF PARAMOUNT IMPORTANCE. HE WILL ONLY DO THAT GREAT GOOD IF YOU FUCK HIM AS HARD AND AS FILTHY AS YOU CAN."

"But... but..." Rebecca stuttered. It was all so strange. She had been chaste her entire life, but now the Divine was telling her--in rather vulgar terms--to do away with all of that?

"DO YOU ACCEPT MY COMMAND? OR, LIKE MOSES, DO YOU QUESTION?"

Rebecca flashed back to the burning bush, where Moses questioned and outright begged God not to send him to Egypt. No, she would be stronger.

"I accept," Rebecca said immediately. She dare not decline the instruction of her God. As soon as she spoke, the light in her mind went out and the voice grew silent. She was alone again in her room.

This was always the worst part, Dominic knew. He had played his part, made his play, and now it was just the waiting. He had borrowed some of the things he had found inside her head--half-formed ideas that he was aware of before she was. He had pushed hard, encouraging her to buy in a piece at a time. He had pushed harder on her brain than any woman he had ever met before, but she seemed to accept the intrusion as expected under the circumstances.

Now, he just had to wait. He had written his little note to himself even before making mental contact. It sat on the desk, reading, "Stop overthinking and do it." Dominic thought that this was particularly brilliant of him. The final proof was deep in his room, far from the door. Curiosity alone would drive her inside. Then, it was up to her to commit or flee. But given the depth of her devotion to her religion and the ocean of repression inside her mind, Dominic had to hope that he was in for a wild night.

Dominic felt the familiar sense of her mind enter the outer bounds of his power's range. He took a peek through her eyes and saw an elevator. She was coming upstairs after a brief trip outside the hotel--hopefully to a store. Dominic's heart leapt, eager to see if she got out on the fifth or sixth floor. Was she coming to him or going back to her own room?

Rebecca got out on the fifth floor and went back to her own room.

Dominic was disappointed. He was so sure that he could reliably tap into that religious fervor and point her any way he wanted. Was she bailing on her "holy mission" now? He was just about to consider sending another message from the divine her way when he peeked through her eyes again. A very small bag--containing very little fabric--was sitting on her bed. Rebecca was changing. Dominic almost slapped his own head. She was getting ready. He stopped watching through her eyes, not wanting to spoil his surprise.

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Dominic had torn his script to shreds and flushed it, lest Rebecca see a piece of it in his room. He rehearsed to himself quietly, "Hello. I did not order room service". And he waited.

Dominic didn't know where exactly his ability had come from. He had found it, experimented with it, and then had a lot of fun with it. He had grown confident, realizing that just about everyone had the right levers to push, if you could only find them. He had gotten good at finding and exploiting them. But no matter how confident he got, there was always a sense of almost boyish excitement whenever he was about to get laid.

Dominic got so lost in thought that he almost missed the knock at the door. Dominic's heart leapt. He could feel the brain outside the door. Indeed, it was Rebecca's.

Dominic hurried to the door, paused for a moment to remind himself of his opening line, and then opened the door.

Rebecca was wearing a long jacket, covering herself from her neck down to her knees. Her hands were clasping it closed, as if protecting her center of mass with her arms. But down below, she was wearing towering heels, with fishnets climbing up her toned legs underneath the jacket. She had redone her makeup, putting it on thick, and done her hair so that it dropped in cascades over her shoulders.

As soon as Rebecca laid eyes on Dominic, she took a deep, short breath. Dominic saw a flash of recognition in her eyes, seeing his face as the same one from her "vision". Then her eyes hardened into resolution and focused on Dominic, waiting for a very specific combination of words to come from his lips.

Dominic let his eyes roam over her, not hiding his leering look at her figure, hidden though it was beneath the jacket.

Finally, he said, "Uh... Hello. I did not order room service."

Rebecca's eyes grew wide and then a small, contented smile crept over her face. Her joy at the words was radiating off her brain, even though Dominic wasn't actively listening. A quick peek found a delightful soup of confirmation that her faith was right all along, excitement to be living in a real life miracle, and a touch of fear that she would wake up from this dream. Dominic saw no doubt there. Alas, he did not yet see any of the sexual fire he wanted either. She was too focused on the miracle to think about putting out yet.

She was also too excited to have spoken a word yet, as the seconds added up.

"Hello?" Dominic said, raising an eyebrow.

"Oh, I'm sorry... I... um..." Rebecca shifted from one heeled foot to the other. She had obviously not spent any time at all thinking about what she actually would say in this scenario. Her god told her to be here, but she hadn't given any thought about what to do when she was. 'Good,' Dominic thought. 'Let her think about what to do now.'

"Can I... come inside?" Rebecca landed on.

Dominic could have easily let her inside, showed her the note on the desk, and told her to fuck him, but that wasn't the energy he wanted. He didn't want simple obedience. He wanted enthusiasm, commitment, and the wild, sexual jungle that he felt inside her brain, repressed through years of religious pressure. He didn't want simple submission, he wanted her to take the lead in her own domination.

Dominic leaned against the door frame, his body blocking the way. "I... I'm not exactly in the habit of letting strangers into my hotel room." He let his eyes leer over her again. "No matter how attractive they are." While he put a confused, defensive expression on his face, he smiled inwardly to himself. 'Try harder, bitch,' he thought, careful to not permit the thought to pass across to her mind.

"I'm... I'm here for..." she stammered and Dominic could feel that the joy was quickly fading to panic. "Ummm..."

Dominic let an impatient look cross his face, even as he privately enjoyed watching her squirm. He could hear her prayers for guidance, but he wasn't going to let her off the hook by answering her in the voice of her god. If he did that, he would have to be instructing her through the whole night, instead of sitting back and enjoying. He let her twist on the vine until she made a move for herself.

"Look... I'm kinda tired," Dominic said, gripping the door as if to close it. It was the final push she needed.

Rebecca opened her jacket wide. She was wearing a skimpy, lace, red bra, with her voluptuous tits threatening to spill out of them. It didn't matter, of course, because the lace had no backing, clearly showing everything through the red netting. A tiny red thong, wedged up into her pussy, clung to her hips. For being a good church girl, she knew how to dress bad.

"Are you sure?" Rebecca said, a huskier tone replacing her unconfident stammering. "I'd really like to come in."

Dominic feasted his eyes on the view she gave him, even as he stepped out from the doorframe. Rebecca sauntered in, her jacket still resting on her shoulders. Dominic closed the door behind her. He saw with amusement that she marched directly towards the desk. Her eyes found the post-it note and again Dominic felt the wave of zealous excitement permeate off her.

"I'm... I'm sorry, who are you?" Dominic asked, drawing her attention back to him.

"I'm R... I'm whatever you want, tonight," Rebecca said. It was a cheesy line, of course, but Dominic gave her a pass for replicating her only experience with whores--probably 90's thrillers. She turned back to him and finally let the jacket drop to the ground.

"Look, um..." Dominic said, "...if someone paid for you tonight... then you might have the wrong room." It was important to play the part, which was "confused" at the moment.

"I'm exactly where I need to be," Rebecca said, approaching Dominic. "And nobody paid for me to be here..."

"Then why are you here?" Dominic asked, curious what she should say.

Rebecca's step faltered just slightly. Again, she wasn't sure what to say. Then, Dominic watched a thought spawn inside her, on her face as much as on her brain. With her next words, she was not acting.

"Because I'm breaking all my rules tonight," Rebecca said, genuine excitement in her voice. "Because I've lived my entire life as a good girl, never having any fun. But tonight... I'm going to have fun. I'm going to be the slutty, dirty whore that I've never let myself be." She arrived at Dominic and placed a hand on his chest, letting it run slowly down towards his belt. "Nothing is off limits tonight. No fantasy... no hole... nothing." Her eyes fixed on Dominic's and he could see the purest intensity he had ever seen on a woman's face... the utter marriage of repression and conviction. "I want you... no... no, I need you... I need you to show me what it means to be a filthy whore. To put me in place, however you want me. To fuck me senseless. I need you to make me into whatever filthy, dirty cum dump you want me to be." Dominic thought back to if he had used the words "cum dump" and thought that he hadn't. That must have come from her, inside whatever deep desire was in there, just waiting to be unleashed.

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