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Remarkable People Ch 01

Remarkable People Ch 01

by caerwyn
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Martin

It was around the age of nine that Martin Sandoval discovered a shiny golden nugget in the cold silver waters of a local stream. Granted, it was but the size of a pebble, yet Martin was convinced that it was pure gold throughout, and was correspondingly thrilled. And who knows? Perhaps it was indeed pure gold.

Whatever the case, when he raised it up and watched it glint and glimmer in the sunlight, the tiny treasure had an immediate formative effect on Martin's mind, planting in him a seed that swiftly grew into a powerful desire: to seek out and take possession of rare and beautiful treasures.

At the time of his find, Martin had already developed a secretive streak, and so he revealed the treasure to no one, instead stashing it away in a small box he kept hidden behind a carefully loosened piece of skirting board in his room.

Over the course of numerous ensuing years, he hiked alone into the hills behind his home countless times, hoping to reprise the experience. Although he almost invariably returned home empty-handed, or at least having discovered nothing of any great interest, nonetheless nature yielded enough of its secrets to him that his enthusiasm never waned. This held true until the day our tale properly begins, when whatever minor deities watch over the efforts of amateur prospectors rewarded the now legally adult Martin with a true nonpareil.

Martin couldn't categorise the jewel-like stone he found that day - he had never seen or heard of such a creation - but he was instantly fascinated by its kaleidoscopic, multicoloured facetry, discernible even through obscuring waters. Just as it had with his golden pebble, the joy of taking possession sent a euphoria of hot blood rushing through his arteries.

His hand shaking with excitement, Martin raised the jewel out of the burbling stream, waded toward the bank and, once on dry land, lifted it up between thumb and forefinger for closer examination. It was then that his find displayed its most remarkable property. As the rising jewel intersected the line of sight between Martin and the westering sun, light streamed into it, broke into a million whirling facets of colour, then entered his eyes...

***

Later reflection could cast no clarity on the period of time between this event and the returning of consciousness to Martin's mind. His next memory was of standing in twilight, the hand holding the jewel still raised, the arm aching deeply and quivering with exhaustion. With a groan of pain, he let it fall to his side. The jewel slipped from his hand and fell to the river bank.

Confused, Martin looked about, trying to make sense of the alteration in his surroundings. The sun, he saw, had dipped below the horizon. A bare sliver of its disc remained visible. The light of day had faded to dusk.

What the double deuce? he thought. Where had the daylight gone? A fair measure of empty space had still been apparent between the sun and the horizon when he had lifted his find into the light.

He picked up the jewel again, this time with his left hand, carefully pocketed it, then squelched slowly and thoughtfully homeward through the gathering dark, massaging his aching arm, and pondering.

At last, in a flash of insight, it came to him.

Damn thing hypnotised me! he thought excitedly. Jehovah's jolly green junk! I must have lost... I don't know... two hours!

The subject of hypnotism had a particular significance for Martin. Some years earlier, he had taken more than a passing interest in that morally somewhat grubby practice. He had read widely in the subject, familiarised himself with a range of techniques, and had carefully considered how he might use his knowledge to influence the behaviour of others, to his own advantage.

Despite having achieved some moments of moderate success, he had at last given it away as substantially a waste of time and effort. Sure, you could get a subject to do a post-hypnotic trick or two, but you couldn't subvert their basic character. Worse, trying to convince people to agree to be hypnotised fairly quickly got you a reputation, first as a weirdo, then as a creep. No matter how subtle you tried to be, people seemed to know, instinctively, that you were up to something.

The youthful urge to hypnotise others generally seems motivated by a lust for power. Martin's had grown out of his dismal experiences with the opposite sex.

At around the age of thirteen, Martin had rapidly developed an unusually muscular libido, which in turn had naturally engendered a powerful desire for female companionship. Unfortunately for him, his best efforts at entering the mysterious universe of girls - and girlfriends - had resulted in a series of painful rejections. Why, he couldn't fathom: he had insufficient insight into his own social deficiencies to do so.

A low shrub lay in Martin's shadowed path. He kicked at it in frustration. It wasn't fair! What did they expect a lonesome, horny geek to do? Go steady with his dominant hand?

Upon reviewing this thought, Martin reflected sourly that he was effectively doing precisely that.

But now, he thought excitedly, with this jewel, any hypnotic subject would go sooo deep! Maybe deep enough to overcome the traditional limits of hypnotic influence. Maybe, nothing would lie outside the bounds of possibility. Nothing!

The very idea gave him a feeling akin to drunkenness, and it was in this inebriated condition that Martin reached a fateful decision: he resolved to make the attempt.

The obvious next question was, who should he choose as a subject?

The rest of the homeward trek he spent mentally reviewing the qualities and attributes of every female he could readily recall that had ever struck him as hot... or even moderately warm.

Martin hadn't yet made a firm decision as to the recipient of his mesmeric attentions when the dark bulk of his family home hove slowly into view, perched atop its solitary hillock, some miles outside the limits of the nearest town. Only the kitchen window was lit, making the house look like the head of a high-browed cyclops in Martin's imagination. He removed his sodden shoes and socks, leaving them on the back verandah, and quietly entered the house via the rear door.

Padding silently along the carpeted passage that led past the kitchen door, he swivelled his head to see who was home.

He was greeted by the sight of his older sister, Deborah, facing away from him, seated on a tall stool at the breakfast bar, head inclined forward, a steaming cup of something or other within easy reach to her right.

Martin came to a halt.

Probably flipping through social media on her phone, he surmised.

Deborah showed no sign of being aware of his presence. Accordingly, as was his wont with every attractive female who came within his field of vision when he thought he was unobserved, he paused to savour the delights of Deborah's body.

From this angle, the highlights of his appraisal were restricted to two in number: a bountiful cascade of hair displaying the colours of autumn leaves, hanging unbound to a point between her shoulder blades; and a deliciously female torso, narrowing at the waist, flaring out generously at the hips, forming an hourglass, a prominent devotional object to the male psyche. And oh, how he envied the fortunate barstool!

Deborah's frontal aspect was currently inaccessible to his eyesight... but not to his memory.

In the eye of Martin's mind, Deborah's seat began gradually to rotate, until it had passed through all the degrees of the compass. He visualised every aspect of the slowly turning Deborian landscape, maybe even better than Deborah herself could have.

Imagine the most beautiful young female you know of, and double it. Now you have some notion of how Martin thought of his sister. Never mind the details; suffice it to say, Martin found her fucking gorgeous.

Even better, she was a sight that never grew stale. Every time he conducted his appraisal was like the first time to Martin, though this configuration of Deborah had graced the world for several years.

Prior to the bountiful blossoming of her body, Deborah had existed in a less curvaceous form. During that time, she had been the closest thing to a real friend the socially inept Martin had ever known.

Things had changed once Deborah had passed through the portals of puberty. She had done so naturally and gracefully, like a juvenile peach swelling into fragrant, tawny succulence. At the same time, the easy affection she had displayed toward him altered to a slightly distant politeness. Once he had been her confidant. Now no more. He didn't understand why she no longer wanted to play with him, spend time with him. He only knew that it hurt. Effectively, Martin had become friendless in the world.

Martin's own entry into adolescence had taken place some two years afterward. In his case, the word 'graceful' applied less than the phrase 'head-on collision.' Wispy hairs sprouted sparsely on his face, in odd locations. His limbs elongated disproportionately. A croaking amphibian took up residence in his throat. There were other unsavoury phenomena.

This state of affairs persisted for several ungainly years, after which Martin's discordant physique reluctantly began to metamorphose into something closer to harmony and sightliness.

It was when Martin had been at his least prepossessing that, tormented by loneliness, he had made a clumsy attempt to return his relationship with Deborah to its former closeness, by involving her in his exploration of hypnotism. In fact, she had been the most successful of his hypnotic subjects.

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At the time, Martin had considered the notion of entrancing his sister to be a laudable idea.

In this, he was sadly mistaken.

Initially cautiously cooperative, Deborah had quickly become suspicious. She hadn't fully understood his intent, but she knew he was trying to get her to 'do stuff.' She was too young and inexperienced to comprehend Martin's ultimate goal (he himself had not dared to allow his imagination to roam that far), but she knew instinctively that, whatever tricks he wanted her to perform, she bloody well didn't want to perform them.

Thus, the time soon came when she, inspecting him with the same level of delight with which she would have regarded a venomous toad, frostily refused to participate any longer.

In the face of such demoralising opposition to his intentions, a deeply disappointed Martin gave up the game. His hypnotic ambitions had struck an iceberg, and rapidly submerged into dark oblivion.

Martin's frustration was multiplied by an unfortunate fact. The few moments of success he had experienced in entrancing Deborah had engendered in him a powerful feeling.

Martin had conceived 'the hots' for his sister.

Deborah, he had decided, was a rare and precious treasure... like his golden nugget. But, he didn't possess her. She wasn't his. And that, as he was wont to reflect, was a dead-set pisser.

A more rational person would quickly have concluded that this feeling boded no good...

In the wake of this episode, Deborah's behaviour toward her brother, already at the cool end of the temperature scale, precipitously declined to within a few scant degrees of freezing point.

She was still polite to him on occasion, but it was the politeness of a police officer during a traffic stop. As well, it became apparent that she was making efforts to avoid physical contact with him, accidental or otherwise. There were no more sisterly hugs, no more fives, high or low, not even a handshake. Nothing. Ever.

This was a very sore point in Martin's thoughts, only adding to the strong suspicion that something was fundamentally wrong with him, something he feared would see him living a long, miserable life without a vestige of female warmth.

Yet Martin's hots didn't diminish on this account. No, sirree! On the contrary, they continued to seethe within him unabated.

And that is why, now regarding his inaccessible sister from behind, Martin felt fully justified in heaving the mental equivalent of a deep sigh of longing.

Oblivious of Martin's scrutiny, Deborah lifted her drink from the counter and took a sip.

The quiet slurp she made was evocative. Martin imagined the liquid passing her lips, flowing over her tongue, sluicing down her throat.

It wasn't the first time Martin had visualised his sister imbibing hot fluids of one sort or another.

In response to this mental image, Martin's cock, never a deep sleeper, stirred in its repose. His cock had never experienced slurping. His cock *wanted* to experience slurping.

Martin drifted back into the delightful fantasy that had brightened his homeward journey.

This time, however, every image he conjured was of Deborah herself, adopting various increasingly risque postures at his direction, like a photographer's model.

Snap! Deborah, glancing over her shoulder at him, smiling coquettishly.

Snap! Deborah with her fingers interlocked behind her head, elbows akimbo, causing a noteworthy increase in the prominence of the contents of her blouse. Head tilted back. Eyes closed. Lips parted.

Snap! Deborah, smiling and blushing, eyes shyly downcast, her fingers now engaged in releasing the buttons of said blouse.

Snap! Deborah, blouse now hanging entirely open, exposing the inner curves of her breasts, kneeling before him, gazing up adoringly.

Snap! Deborah, still kneeling, her hands raised, working on something out of the frame, her eager lips already forming a preparatory circle...

"Hey, Martin!"

Martin started violently. His sordid fantasy popped like a gum bubble.

Deborah, he saw, had spun the stool ninety odd degrees and was regarding him quizzically and, it seemed to him, with a fair amount of suspicion.

"Nothing!" he denied hotly, then blushed as the realisation dawned that he was not, in fact, being interrogated.

The right hand corner of Deborah's mouth twitched.

"Having another episode?" she asked sardonically.

Without waiting for an answer, she gave her marigold locks an insouciant toss and turned back to her phone, apparently putting him out of her mind with disconcerting ease.

Martin grimaced, then turned away, sloping off toward the staircase that led to the upstairs hallway, and thence to his room. On the way, he found himself fingering the hypnotic jewel. Just give him one chance, he thought. He would show her. He would change her snooty attitude. He would...

Encouraged by the thought of the jewel, his imagination revved up again. Possibilities whirled in his mind. A seductive fantasy took shape.

Martin came to a sudden halt. Hot blood rose to his face. His respiration rate accelerated. His hands clenched into fists. He felt the presence of an incipient *decision.*

The necessary components were all in place: Deborah, Martin, and the jewel, in an otherwise unoccupied house.

Martin thought quickly. He knew the pros; they were the fabric of illicit dreams. Now he considered the cons.

Assuming she went under at all, he could foresee two undesirable outcomes.

Possible outcome number one: he would give her some edgy instruction that would pop her trance on the spot, and she would confront him for being a creep... or worse.

Possible outcome number two: she would emerge from the trance normally, but remember his instructions, and confront him for a being a creep... or worse.

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Neither result could be considered optimal.

It was the jewel that carried the day, spurring him on, intoxicating him, giving him Dutch courage. Under its influence, Martin's internal meteorology coalesced into the emotional equivalent of a tropical cyclone.

The storm made landfall, tearing to shreds the flimsy structures of Martin's conscience and caution. Every restraint suppressing his lust for his sister snapped. Inside Frankenstein's laboratory, an unnaturally vivified monster rose from its slab.

Martin suddenly knew he was going to try it. In fact, he was going to try it this very instant.

Heart pounding, Martin fished the jewel from his pocket, turned and headed back toward the kitchen, where he quickly took note of available sources of light.

"Hey, Deb," he said. "Can I show you something?"

In response, Deborah looked up at the ceiling, sighed, turned slowly to regard him. She raised one incurious eyebrow.

"Yes, Martin?"

"See what I found," he said, holding up the jewel between thumb and forefinger, carefully keeping his own eyes from looking directly toward it.

Deborah's eyes lit on the glistening jewel. Her expression changed, seeming suddenly, achingly closer to that of Martin's lost childhood friend.

"That's pretty," she said. "What is it?"

"You have to look at it in the light to get the full effect," he said, then lifted the jewel so as to catch the light from the bright bulb overhead. Deborah's eyes followed it automatically.

She smiled in wonder.

"Where did you gaaa..."

Deborah's last syllable faded to nothingness as the light from the jewel filled her eyes. Martin watched intently as her body relaxed and her sweet face settled into repose, all expression draining away.

Jesus, that had been fast!

It made him feel incredibly powerful to influence her like that; yet at the same time, he was uncomfortably aware of a gnawing termite of guilt in his abdomen. He couldn't quite shake the feeling that he was taking away her personality, her vitality.

And that is the problem with being a horny, manipulative geek. Even a successful horny, manipulative geek knows deep down that he is a creep.

Despite this insight, Martin's newfound determination didn't waver. The excitement he felt quickly overwhelmed this momentary twinge of conscience.

"Can... can you hear me?" he stuttered.

No response.

"Deborah!" he demanded. "Can you hear me?"

He waited. He was aware of his heart, thudding away in his chest.

Deborah's lips parted with a slight pop. She gave a barely audible sigh.

Did that mean she had understood? He didn't know. But, maybe, she was at least acknowledging that he had spoken.

"Raise your arms above your head," he commanded.

Deborah didn't move. She sat quiet, her eyes on the jewel, mouth slightly agape. Nothing in her demeanour indicated that she had heard him.

This is useless, Martin thought, disappointed.

The jewel was powerful, that was clear. Maybe too powerful. Perhaps her mind was paralysed, rather than hypnotised.

He decided to try something anyway. He thought for a moment, arranging a short post-hypnotic script in his mind, then spoke.

"Listen up, Deb."

Within less than a minute, he had delivered his instructions, including a suggestion that she would forget the existence of the jewel. Having done so, he pocketed the stone and waited, watching her carefully.

Deborah's face remained expressionless a few seconds longer. Then, she blinked slowly. Normal consciousness seemed to trickle back in. Her eyes roamed aimlessly for a moment, then settled on his face.

"What... what were you saying?" she asked.

"Just thinking how lucky I am to have a sister like you," Martin replied with a smile. According to script.

Deborah regarded him quizzically for a moment.

"Thanks, Martin," she said tonelessly, then spun away, once more returning her attention to her phone.

Martin hesitated a moment, then turned away with the mental equivalent of a sigh. It hadn't worked. Damn!

"Hey, Martin."

He turned back to see Deborah looking at him. Her expression seemed a little confused for a moment. Then, it cleared... and she actually smiled at him!

Deborah rose from her seat, stepped lightly toward him, grasped his shoulder for balance, rose up onto her toes and planted a kiss on his cheek. It was brief, but soft and warm, and it sent a wave of delight rushing through Martin's entire body.

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