This story is a prelude to a longer story I'm writing. It's the first erotica piece I've decided to write down. I have a story outlined and drafted but I wanted opinions, ideas and suggestions before I continue. Any ideas in the comments will be considered so please give me your feedback. All comments and critiques are welcome. If I get positive feedback you'll be getting a lot more very soon. While the first part mostly is establishing the background for the story I think you can see where I'm plan to go and I hope that you'll be looking forward to more.
All characters are over 18.
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You can't go home again. Or, perhaps more accurately, you shouldn't go home again. Josh had no choice in the matter though, and no nostalgia for home or family; the absent mother, the cruel and dismissive sister, the family that had, quite literally, abandoned him. Almost two years of his life had been wasted thanks to them, two years of his life because the people who were supposed to be on his side wouldn't back him up. Now the prodigal son was returning and there was no welcome or fanfare, only his sister waiting at the bus stop texting in her car. She didn't look up as he tugged open the door
"About time you you go here, idiot."
"Thanks Beth, I'm sorry I couldn't make the bus run any faster. Good to see you too. I can see that you managed not to gain any more weight. "
"Yeah, well because of you I had to cancel a night out with Meg, all because mom couldn't bother to pick up her own delinquent crotch fruit."
Josh put on an insincere smile, "The fruit doesn't fall far from the tree. I had to ride that bus for 6 hours without anything to eat."
"Like I give a shit. They may have let you out but I still think you're defective. You could have done us all a favor and just left. You're 18, what's stopping you? I could have had your room. Instead I get to 'take care' of you while mom is away."
Nothing stopping him but a lack of a diploma, money, a job, hell, any options. Josh though. "I'm such a disappointment, I know it." He said, "At least mom has one child that's a super hero, Beth Herman," Josh puffed out his chest and shouted in a dramatic voice, "Super sen..." Josh's bellow was cut off as Beth's fist slammed into his stomach. Josh wheezed, turning to the window to not show Beth the tears that welled up in his eyes.
The ride home was long and the music loud. Neither of them talked.
Josh had taken some small comfort while he was away when he heard that Beth had failed and been forced to repeat her senior year. Josh stared out the window and imagined Beth as Super Senior, the 19 year old with the power to repeat her senior year, the amazing ability to be mediocre and somehow still feel superior to her brother and be favored by their mother. Josh had always been the smart one and Beth had always been the one to torment him. His mom would say Beth was just jealous, as if that was supposed to make Josh feel better.