Summary:
A police officer wants to make her name dealing with the goth raves. But an encounter with some cybergoth girls makes them seem very enticing...
Author's note:
I started writing some goth fetish fiction because there wasn't too much out there, and I thought someone should fill the void. It turned out there was a bit of a market, and a few people have come at me with ideas they wanted to be written -- this is one such example.
To the originator of this story, who asked to be credited simply as 'non y mous', thank you so much for the idea, and I hope that matter people out there enjoy your story!
Our Girl in Blue
The young woman, dressed in a dark grey business suit with black hair pulled back into a ponytail, looked at herself in the mirror - she looked tough and official and ready.
Today is going to be a good day, she thought.
Today is going to be the day that my life changes.
Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
Today is the day I make Inspector.
Her name was Melissa Sharp. Well, to be more precise, Detective Sergeant Melissa Sharp - she may have been young, a fresh-faced 23 in comparison to many of her older, more world-weary colleagues. but Melissa had been making a name for herself in the force. A high-profile arrest of a notorious drug dealer had increased her stock with her bosses but, after the case had been processed and sent to court, and the dealer sent away for an extended vacation at her Majesty's pleasure, Melissa fell into a lull.
The big cases weren't falling her way, and her superiors didn't know what to do with her. Melissa was being wasted on small-time burglaries and muggings, and she knew she could use her brain and her police skills far more effectively if she just moved up the ladder a little bit.
Detective Inspector Sharp, she smiled. DI Sharp - that had a ring to it.
And that's where the raves came in.
Over the past few months, the city and its surrounding areas had seen an outbreak of random, occasional goth raves. A big group of goths turning up on random occasions, partying and raving for a night in a random location, and then vanishing into the wind. Whenever the police turned up, everyone had gone, and no-one knew where - there was hardly a big goth subculture in the city.
Perhaps it was a case of people just letting loose, putting on some elaborate outfits for an underground party and letting off some steam. But that's not how Melissa saw it - she was convinced there had to be more to it.
Her colleagues weren't overly worried by the raves. There hadn't been any major complaints, as the goths chose abandoned buildings, and they didn't cause any damage to the structure. Sure, there were some grumbles about the noise level, but the general attitude around the station was 'kids will be kids' and 'it'll all blow over soon enough' - her superior officers thought there was no sense escalating an unnecessary police response to something that was barely causing any trouble.
But that wasn't how DS Sharp saw it, not at all.
Ignoring her orders, she'd conducted her own investigation into the raves, and had quickly focused upon the drugs angle. It was hard to pick up any witness testimony - every time she heard that a rave was taking place, the building was empty by the time she'd arrived. But she'd heard whispers of drugs being used at these raves - she
knew
it - and she was convinced she'd detected the lingering smell of drugs after processing one of the rave sites.
Melissa had it all worked out in her mind.
It had to be drugs. Why else would people go to the middle of nowhere, dressed like freaks, unless they were high on something?
And so, Melissa knew what to do. She'd get to one of these raves, and she'd arrest some of the goths there - they'd be high, undoubtedly. She'd work on them and get them to reveal the names and locations of their suppliers, and then she'd take them down. With the suppliers off the street, she'd be taking another step in dealing with the city's drug troubles, and she'd be killing off the raves at the same time. It was a win-win situation, and there's no way the Super would refuse a promotion after that.
Enter DI Sharp, and enter cases worth her calibre.
Pursuing the case had proven a challenge because there was so little information - no-one was talking and there weren't any known criminals associated with the raves. The only time anyone seemed to know anything about the raves is when they were already over, and that didn't help deal with them in the first place. She thought the drug angle would be the way in, but all the dealers she knew appeared to have no knowledge of what was going on. She'd been around them enough to know when they were lying, and they certainly weren't lying.
But then, one day, after all of her vigilance, it was a lucky break that put her on the right track.
She'd been conducting some uniform work on the tip line when, out of nowhere, she'd hit upon the lead she needed - an anonymous caller had phoned with a suspicion that one of the goth raves would be taking place that Friday at the Old Hall, beginning at nine and running on until who-knew-when.
It fit the pattern - it was an old crumbling building in the middle of the surrounding countryside, unlikely to attract any attention or prompt any complaints. The ravers could rave all night without any fear of reprisal - or so they thought.
Tonight, they were going to find out what happened when you wound up on the wrong side of DS Melissa Sharp.
* * * * *
Melissa arrived at the Old Hall a couple of minutes before nine, leaving her car in one of the copses near to the building's main entrance. It would be the perfect vantage point to take some photos of the ravers before heading in, shutting everything down and making a few arrests.
She sat in her suit, enjoying a brief moment of peace before she got to work - she had her camera to hand, and she was ready to capture and arrest some revellers.
She sat, waiting.
Waiting.
And more waiting.
She checked her phone - it had passed ten-past, and no-one at all had turned up.
Where were they all? Could they have suspected an officer was here, she wondered, before dismissing the idea - no-one knew she was here, not even her fellow officers.
She was a little annoyed by the turn of events - indeed, the lack of any event at all - but she thought she'd take the opportunity to investigate the building, just in case she picked up any useful evidence. Maybe they had been there already - it wasn't a desirable outcome, but she'd be remiss in her duty if she didn't check it out.
Melissa took her torch from the dashboard and got out of the car.
She flicked it on as she made her way up to the Old Hall, scanning the outside of the crumbling ruins in the hopes of picking up any sign of life. Nothing.
The Old Hall was a mansion in its former life, but it had fallen into disrepair more than a century back - now it stood in ruins, a vague haunted house-feel to it. It was the perfect place, Melissa thought, to have found gothic types - so where were they?
Melissa forced open the door - it made an awful creaking sound, as if it hadn't been opened in years.
That wasn't a good sign, she thought, if she was hoping to find anyone there.
She clicked on her torch, and began a methodical sweep of the downstairs rooms. Every room, she was confronted with old-fashioned and long-forgotten furniture, coated in cobwebs and rotting away, without a sign of life anywhere.
Melissa had been keeping silent, trying to make no noise to avoid tipping off any potential trespassers (even though she knew that none were there). But, as she panned around one of the rooms near the back of the house with her torchlight, she realised she could just about make out a noise in the near distance. A kind of metallic, almost industrial sound, with a beat. A beat - could it be the rave?
Where was that hint of music coming from?
If not inside the building, it had to be in the back of the grounds outside.
For a moment, there was a little leap of excitement in her mind - perhaps the rave wasn't taking place literally within the Old Hall, but just in the grounds. She could still have a successful night after all.
Torch in hand, she made her way through the Old Hall to one of the crumbling, doorless back entrances, and looked about.
It was hardly a rave. In fact, it was hardly anything at all - she saw a solitary caravan in the grounds, which had to be the source of the music. It was a larger model, but certainly not large enough to hold a giant rave with hundreds of people. It looked a little rundown, old and worse for wear, and Melissa imagined it probably belonged to some travellers - no doubt settling illegally, but hardly something worth pushing any further.
She thought she should wander down, knock on the door and see who was there, just in case. If it was travellers, a police warning to move on normally did the job. It wouldn't be a total waste of an evening, if not far from it.
Melissa walked across the grass towards the caravan, scanning the grounds as she did but turning up absolutely nothing new. The closer she got, the more she could hear the music - well, she supposed someone else would call it music. To her, it was horrendous, industrial-sounding rubbish that sounded painful - she'd come across some of it during her research into the raves, but she couldn't stand the stuff. No wonder half the people were high, she'd thought, because there's no way you'd stand the noise otherwise.
Thinking of drugs, when she was nearby, she noticed that fumes were escaping the caravan window seals. Immediately, her mind started processing - it was the kind of thing typical of a drug set-up and, coupled with the music, she wagered it was entirely possible she may have hit upon a big break after all.
She took a few photos of the caravan with her phone, and then a little video, intended to capture the music too. On their own, they weren't much, but every piece of evidence counted.
Then, those jobs accounted for, she marched up to the door of the caravan and pounded heavily.
"Police, open up!"
Melissa heard the shuffle of activity inside the caravan - no doubt hiding some incriminating evidence, something to that effect. A little smirk crept onto her face. This was a caravan, so whatever they were hiding wasn't going to go very far - she was looking forward to the challenge of finding it, holding it over her suspects and making them crack.