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Not Just An Idol Promise

Not Just An Idol Promise

by ladytiff
20 min read
4.72 (21600 views)
adultfiction

For those who know me, know I seldom write stories from a man's point of view. The reason? Well usually it's because I'm imagining myself as the protagonist. I like to picture myself as the one doing all the naughty things that lead to the conclusion of my stories. It's also just easier I think to write from a woman's point of view vs. a man. Regardless of my reasoning I wanted to write something different. If you have read my other stories, then you know what turns me on. I love the whole concept of Incest, truly this is because of my sister, not just because she's pretty or that she is my sister but the fact that two people are so sexually attracted to each other that it knocks down all social/moral taboos? And it doesn't matter that they are related. That's what gets me going.

My other interest's? Lesbian sex, Anal (love it) and non-consensual (mutual if there is such a thing meaning eventually it becomes that but maybe doesn't start that way). All told I have a wide range of interests... yet one of the genres that I have never tackled is the whole mind control thing. It certainly fits into my ideas around sexual attraction so strong that it can't be contained or even readily explained. Weird huh? I tend to want to explain myself in these stories. Which I why I usually write a prologue. For you dear reader, understand this is part of my process, my startup, my happy little tree, to quote Bob Ross. I also like to add motives and commentary to my stories. I know, I know Tiff, people read erotica for the sex. Not for the character study. But me? I do it for both. I mean a good backstory leading to hot sex is why I do this. That and it gets me off. Hopefully you too. So, sit back and enjoy.

Love Tiff.

First let me say that I didn't start out with the intention of fucking my sister. Unlike most guys in these stories, I have never lusted after her. Never spied on her or even saw her as anyone but my sister. Don't get me wrong, I mean I knew she was... is beautiful. Sarah is a solid 10 on the hotness scale. Red hair, green eyes, firm breasts and an ass that would make a dead man Tube Snake Boogie, all packed into a tight little 5'4" package. I know what you're thinking, I must be a nerd right? A dweeb? A 90lb virgin? She got all the looks, and I got all the brains?

Inevitably in these sordid tales of Brother/Sister sex, the hot sister feels sorry for the pathetic brother and decides to throw him a pity fuck. Well, I hate to disappoint you but that's not the case. I'm reasonably well built, not bad looking. I don't have any disfiguring features or a hunchback or anything that would cause anyone to feel sorry for me. The best or worst that could be said about me is that I'm average. I have had a few reasonably attractive girlfriends. Even been laid a couple of times. I play sports and my current high school ranking is 398 out of 700, but I digress. I was telling you the story on how things came to pass. How I, Scott Leavens ended up living a dream? Maybe it's a nightmare.

For my parents 20th wedding anniversary, they took us on a trip. It was a once in a lifetime tour of Indonesia and some of the 1000's of islands that make up the region. You can picture the scene. Wonderous exotic sights. Fascinating foods and cultures. Gorgeous beaches. After several days in country, we somehow ended up taking a boat ride to a volcanic sliver of rock known locally as Peka Kualu (Pe-ka Koo-ah-loo). Don't bother looking for it on a map, it's not big enough. The local tour guide, a small brown guy with stringy hair and exactly 3 teeth, paddled his Kano, a kind of small canoe, with practiced ease and spun us a tale right out the Compendium of Ancient Cliche History. His ancestors were of course good and noble. Enlightened warriors muscled and built like Chris Hemsworth and one scientific advancement away from flying cars and world peace.

As almost always the case in these stories, they were at war with another tribe of inherently evil, mean spirited, puppy kicking, small penis having jerks, bent on domination. Inevitably the evil warriors got the upper hand, but before they could wipe out our good guys, a deity rose up from the ocean and punished them. This deity destroyed the island of the evil assholes in a volcanic fire, thus saving the good warriors. Ostensibly this was so that one day they could manifest their destiny by acting as fishermen, tour guides and selling seashell necklaces to tourists. He went on, telling us how lava and small eruptions made Peka Kualu, impossible to visit except for a few years every decade or so. Truth be told, I wasn't really paying too much attention.

I had broken up with my girlfriend a few months prior and for the last 6 days, I hadn't a single vision of female beauty other than my mom or sister to look at. All the local women and girls looked as rough and appealing as extras in a period monster movie. No porn (since my phone was useless there) and only limited opportunities to jerk off, had me ready to chew a hole in the boat. I found myself staring more and more at my sister and truth be told my mother. Sarah had brought a number of bikini's and while not technically thongs, they all seemed designed to show off an extraordinary amount of her ass cheeks, I mean these things had been made to specifically draw a man's eye. Honestly, it would have been insulting had I not been staring, I mean with all the money she must have spent on them and what not. My father was either made of sterner stuff than I or far more circumspect. Or maybe he was simply keeping himself in check with my mom. Her bikinis weren't much better, and they would often sneak off for some 'alone time'. As if my sister and I didn't know what they were doing.

Any rate, there I am the hero of this story or maybe the villain, I will let you decide, being paddled across the ocean, like George Washington crossing the Potomac. All to look upon a natural smoking wonder of beauty, the whole while staring at the natural wonder of 2 smoking hot females, wearing practically nothing, who just so happened to be related to me. Life wasn't fair.

The island was a smoking crag of rock, desolate, stark and stinking in some places. In others? Majestic. Breathtaking. Amazing. All the vegetation seemed to be on the west side of the island, and it was all very young. Ignoring my parents' admonishments that we stay close and to be careful, my sister and I wandered off to explore a little. We were walking along the beach, my sister slightly ahead of me. Her gaze was on the sand, looking for seashells and such. Every once in a while, she would bend down to pick something up, and I would hold my breath, hating the guilt that came with staring at that fabulous ass but unable to not look. My gaze, when not on my sister's body turned inland. There were, pumice, rocks and crevices and dried lava flows that had obviously never made it to the sea. It was in a small, square recessed formation that seemed almost man made, that I found it. Trapped in part by sand washed in from the sea. I guessed that it wouldn't have been too much longer before it was buried. Lost forever or at least until the next eruption. I had brought a small backpack filled with water and a few snacks, I set it down and carefully dug the object out.

The object was a moderately small statue (idol is the word that came to mind), made of pumice or some other volcanic rock. Depicting a man, with heavily muscled arms, sculpted torso and powerful legs. The right hand was raised, with his first 2 fingers pointing straight up. His left hand was wrapped upon a huge penis, which if made to scale would have meant his cock was big enough to be considered a weapon. The first 2 fingers on that hand were also pointing out. Around the neck was a small necklace of aquamarine stone that appeared to have melted into the idol. I reached down and drew it out.

You ever lay down in the sun? Eyes closed, there's this black halo behind your eyes. When you look away and open them it's there for short period until it fades away? That's what happened to my vision. My left hand, holding the statue was tingling like it had fallen asleep. My right hand was raised, like I was staring at the sun, in unconscious imitation of the statue, my first 2 fingers were raised. When my vision cleared, I was staring straight at my sister's ass. The tiny scrap of white material that bisected the cheeks of her ass, had all but disappeared as she bent over and peered into the juncture of shore and sea. I could see some of her pussy tight and small lipped. Time stretched out as I beheld the vision of beauty before me and for the first time I voiced the desire in my head. Man, I would so love to fuck that! My sister shifted her weight from one leg to the other almost as if she knew what I was thinking and was silently daring me to put up or shut up.

With a start I shook my head and placed the statue, carefully in the backpack. For some reason I wanted to keep it secret. Like Gollum with his ring, I knew it was precious. Slinging the pack on my shoulder I headed over to my sister, who for some reason was still bent over staring into the sea.

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"Sarah?" I queried.

Her eyes cleared and she gave me a pure unguarded smile. "Hey little brother! You get lost?"

"What?"

"I said. Did you get lost? You disappeared for a while there."

"Uh no. Come on, let's head back."

The place we were staying, a collection of small little individual Shacks, was right on the beach outside a little tourist trap destination. Our Bungalow? Hut? I needed to come up with a name for it, whatever you wanted to call it sat twenty yards above the high tide water line, near the village of Keya Ketu (Kay-yah Keh-too). The place consisted of a sitting area with musty, moldy furniture and a sleeping area with a couple of small beds. The only door was to the outside. My sister and I shared one of these, Tiki huts? - and my parents had another one right next door, presumably theirs was a luxury suite - it had a double bed as opposed to two singles. We all shared an outdoor shower/bathroom behind, that actually had running water. I was lying in a hammock, slung between two palm trees, listening to the waves, dozing. My sister was inside our two room... Hooch? My parents were at a romantic dinner for 2.

I was in that state where the mind wanders, dreams really, but you're not fully asleep? Does that make sense? Well, if not, it doesn't matter this is my story and I'm telling it my way. I imagined that I was walking along a tunnel (a lava tube?) it was dark but there were torches to light my way. Somewhere, someone was banging on some drums. I mean really going to town, Tube Snake Boogying a staccato beat that had me nodding my head in time with the rhythm. I entered a chamber, and the beat went even wilder. Drum solo, anybody?

Along the walls were 4 sets of chains fastened by crude iron rings. 3 of the sets were empty, the first set had a shadowy female figure that I couldn't quite make out. Instead of struggling she appeared to be chaining herself willingly to the wall but never really completing the process. In the middle of the room stood an alter with various items strewn about it and another figure sitting cross legged in front of it. He was a little guy, with a big beer belly, wild hair sticking out in all directions, a necklace of small stones about his neck. He smiled as if he had been waiting for me, jumped to his feet with surprising nimbleness and then spouted a bunch of gibberish. When I didn't immediately answer he nodded his head. He pointed at me, then at the girl, then back at me, then back at the girl and then finally at himself. I raised my hands in the universal gesture of - I have no fucking clue what you're saying cowboy. He in turned raised his own hand like the figure on the statue and raising the first two fingers on that hand... smacked me right in the forehead.

I looked up at the sky. I was back on the hammock, my forehead feeling like I got stung by a bee and the memory of that badass drum solo echoing in my ears. Only I wasn't in my hammock, I was looking down at myself swaying in the breeze to that invisible beat. Behind me I heard my sister.

"I really need this." She said with a sigh.

When I turned, she wasn't there. Instead, I was heading up the few short steps into our hovel? Shithole? I turned back and saw myself still on the hammock. Whoa! Trippy. I made my way towards the room I shared with my sister. Entering, I found her on her bed sitting on a towel, she was just dropping her recently removed bikini top on the floor. Sighing, she brought her legs up in front of her and rested her back against the wall. Her red hair glowed like fire, and her skin was kissed by the sun. She looked beautiful. Her eyes were closed as her left hand came up and caressed her left breast, teasing one perfectly taut nipple.

"Oh shit! Sorry sis!" At least that is what I meant to say, but no words came out. Her eyes opened and there was no way she could have missed me standing there, only she looked right past me or more accurately... right though me. With a slight smile she peeled off her bikini bottoms.

Her pussy had a little landing strip of bright red hair. Her opening was pink and swollen, her clit already peeking out. Moisture was beading on her folds, as she gently ran her right hand down over her inside thigh and then back up over the lips of her pussy.

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"Oh fuck!" The words were clear as day, but I knew that she hadn't said them out loud. It didn't take a genius to know that I was hearing her thoughts. I was rooted to the ground watching as my sexy sister played with the most beautiful pussy I have ever seen in person or porn.

She moaned and whimpered quietly, as her left hand gently pulled her nipple, her right hand turned little circles on that dripping pussy. Just like I knew I was hearing her thoughts, I knew that the moans and whimpers were out loud, expressions of desire and pleasure she was unable to contain. My cock felt huge and hard enough to chop down a tree.

"Oh my god!" Her body moved and writhed in time with the rhythm of her actions, her hips in circles like a dancer. "Fuck! This feels so good." Her fingers dipped inside of her little pussy, and I could hear the squelching as she gently fucked herself. I couldn't look away even had I wanted. Her moans got louder. "Oh god. I need to be quieter. I hope Scott doesn't hear me!" Her movements became even more frantic. "Mmmm... what would he say if he could see me like this? Oh, fuck that's so wrong. He's been staring at my ass for a week straight. If he saw this his dick would explode. Oh, fuck that's so bad. Shit I need cock so fucking bad. Damn it Sarah, you need to stop thinking about your brother. But it's so hot knowing he's checking me out. So wrong. Oh fuck, fuck, fuck."

I saw her hips roll up and her toes point and knew she was close to cumming. "Oh, fuck I'm cumming. Fuck!" Her juices squirted from between her legs, soaking the towel and her body spasmed and shook, before finally coming to a rest. Minutes passed. "Holy shit! What the hell was that all about? What the fuck is wrong with me? Thinking about Scott like that. I so need to get laid... but fuck that was amazing!" She got up from the bed and grabbing the towel she wiped the inside of her thighs and then her pussy. She threw the towel on the floor, snatching up her bikini top and tying it in place. When she stood, I got another fabulous view of her hot little body. She sauntered over to her suitcase and grabbed a pale blue thong and the shortest, tiniest pair of jean shorts that she couldn't possibly fit into. I was wrong.

Back outside I looked down at myself, lying on the hammock. Hey good looking. I saw that I looked pretty cut, obviously island life suited me. I also had a huge hardon tenting the front of my trunks. Could you blame me? I wondered how I was going to get back into my body. Should I just attempt to lay down or.... Turning I saw my sister meander down the steps, she was staring at me. No, she was staring at my boner.

"Holy shit, little brother. Having a good dream?" Again, her thoughts were clear as day to me. "Not so little. Oh fuck! What the hell is wrong with me? You're sick, this is your brother you're talking about!" She cleared her throat.

"Hey Scott!" she said out loud shaking me.

My eyes shot open. One minute I had been standing next to my sister the next I was being rudely awakened. I felt like I was falling as my body instantly sought to right itself, then I was falling. I rolled to the side and the hammock dumped me like the proverbial sack of potatoes. My sister started laughing. I attempted to get up but then got tangled in the hammock and ended up back on my ass, which only caused Sarah to laugh even more hysterically.

"I'm glad you find this amusing. Sneaking up on me like that!" I said finally beginning to feel normal.

"Sorry little brother." The color was high in her cheeks. She looked beautiful. "What do you say we head into town for a bit. Get something to eat... maybe shop?"

"Uh yeah sure. I'm starved let me go get changed. I will be right back!" I headed into our... hermit hut? Fuck it! Hovel seemed the best description. Then into the bedroom. Since there were no interior doors, my sister and I had established the stay out of the bedroom rule unless we were sleeping. Looking at my sister's bed, I wondered. Had it been a dream? A weirdly erotic, vivid dream? I moved around to her side of the bed. The towel was just where she left it in my dream. I picked it up and brought it to my face. It was soaked. The unmistakable aroma of a delicious pussy wafted in the air. Damn did it smell good. I stood there with that wet towel in my hands, thinking about my sister playing with herself. How? How was I there but not there? And she was dressed just as I had dreamed.

"Hurry up Scott!" My sister called from outside.

We called it the town because there really wasn't any other way to describe it. Keya Kutu was a small collection of homes, shops and restaurants. Straddling the main road that led to other more tourist friendly, less authentic (as my dad would say) locations, it was bigger and sadder than one would expect. It had a provincial police department just outside of town, literally a stone's throw from our beachside hovels (that's the word I'm deciding on) and we as the only whites in the area, were something of a novelty. Which all contributed to the fact that my parents were fine letting their 18- and 19-year-old children explore on their own. The odds were, that we would run into our parents when we stopped to get something to eat, since there was only one place in town to actually eat, the other was so filthy and disgusting we avoided it like the plague. The people are for the most part, small, brown and genuinely harmless. Harmless in the way that to your face they are all smiles and self-effacing, almost sub servient in their demeanor. But also, In the same way that the witch in the woods was when dealing with Hansel and Gretel. I wouldn't be surprised if at some point we came across a house made of gingerbread, candy and gum drops. It set my teeth on edge but maybe I was the only one who felt that way.

Moving though "town", it was easy to imagine that I was on vacation with my girlfriend rather than my sister. Sarah was happy, bubbly even. I guess a nice orgasm can do that for you. Amazing is what she had called it in her mind. I thought back to the erotic display I had witnessed and how my mind processed what I could only assume had been her thoughts and transposed them as her speaking out loud. I had a hard time discerning between the two. But her carefree and fun mood was infectious, and I found myself again, thinking of her in a very unbrotherly way. That white bikini top I knew encased a pair of firm luscious breasts and those tiny little shorts; I knew hid a pretty little red-haired pussy. Sarah looks a lot like my mom, roughly the same height, her red hair is brighter, redder than my mother's, she also has a skin tone quite a bit tanner than most red heads. I however, take after my father, dark hair, grey eyes, about a half inch under 6 ft.

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