NA: This is my first ever story, so I would appreciate some constructive criticism.
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The sunlight woke me up from my sleep as it peeked into my window. I sighed and looked at my digital clock that I kept on my cabinet beside my desk, it read 6:30. I was about to groan in disappointment, but then I realized that today was the day!
You see, when I was a child, I discovered that I had the power to control people if:
People looked into my eyes
I directly willed the command.
I found out about the rules later, but I discovered the ability when I desperately wanted a mobile phone for my birthday, despite being 6, and got one. It was strange my mom and dad were like robots, they just straight up bought me a flip phone. They had no memory of it after, and soon confiscated the phone.
Now that I'm older, I could chalk it up that my powers weren't as strong because I was too young. As I grew, I experimented on people every now and then to test my powers. I found that my power had reached the point to where, user could almost completely control the subject, but could not make them do any actions once out of the hypnosis: For example, I couldn't say, "When I drop my control, you will scream as loud as you can." Or something similar to that, I calculated that by the time I reached 18 years, I would have full control over the subject.
I planned that on my birthday, June, 8, I would do some, "experiments," on my family. I started to get ready for the day. I looked at my reflection in the mirror as I brushed my teeth. I had short, messy brown hair, and a nice tanned tone to my skin, that brought out the brown in my eyes. Occasionally I go to the gym to work out, so I wasn't overly muscular, but I wasn't fat.
I put on some shorts and a white t-shirt, and began to start my experiments. First, was my parents so they wouldn't wake up until I was "ready." I walked into my parent's bedroom, and saw that they were already awake, just sort of chilling in the bed before getting ready for the day.
I approached them and my mom saw me, she smiled and sat up, "Hello, James, what do you need?" My mom was what people called a "10." She had a perfect hourglass figure, nice sizable breasts and a fit athletic body. Her bright blue eyes stuck out from her blonde hair, which was dyed black, she didn't like her hair color for some reason. Her name was Kelly.
"What'cha need, champ?" My dad had brown hair like mine, but it was flecked with grey, he had a clean shave, and was a little muscular, he jogged sometimes. I gestured to my eyes, and they both fell for it. His name was Marcus.
"Sleep."
They both visibly slumped down, and started lightly snoring. I said a command to them to make sure they wouldn't wake up prematurely. "You will only wake up when I say so. Until then, you will be in a very deep sleep, you won't feel anything." After I finished my sentence, Kelly and Marcus relaxed and let themselves drift off to sleep. I was very nervous, did the hypnotism work, or would they wake up at any moment, furious and confused? Only one way to find out. I looked at my mom, Kelly, and gave her right breast a big squeeze. She didn't stir.
It worked!