Thanks to everyone who has posted comments about this story! I'm glad so many seem to like it. I've decided to try something a little different.... I'm going to post what I have when I have it. It took me a YEAR to get the last chapter out. I don't want to wait that long. I was getting hung up on stupid stuff, especially writing the sex scenes (it seems I don't do that very well..... amazing since I read so many of them!). This chapter doesn't have any sex in it, and the future ones may not as well (although I fully intend for Jimmy to get his brains fucked out several times). Right now, I'm just trying to get this story out!
Please leave me feedback and let me know what direction you'd like to see this go. Especially when it comes to SEX!!!!!
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"Echo six, this is echo one. I have target in sight. Awaiting instructions"
"Echo one, Proceed with plan"
Corporal (Cpl) Burke, was looking through his spotting scope at his target. Hazzem Muhamed was a known terrorist, and was responsible for creating many of the IED's that had injured his fellow Marines in the last few months. Muhamed was walking along a semi-busy dirt road on the outskirts of Baghdad. There were several small houses on the road, witch led into the busy market district of the city. Muhamed was probably on his way to the safe house to hand out one of his bomb vests to yet another martyr who would try to take some more infidels with him into the afterlife. Cpl. Burke new that his successful completion of this mission would mean many of his fellow Marines would make it back home alive. Having been given the go ahead order from the "skipper" he initiated his target lock sequence. Cpl. Burke focused on Muhamed and began to send commands.
Stop. Turn around twice. Walk two paces to the left.
Muhamed stopped mid stride, did a complete 360' and moved two paces to his left. Other people on the road gave him some funny looks, but they were too busy with their busy lives to bother with someone who was "touched" and wasn't causing trouble. Burke was satisfied that he had control of the target. His acquisition dance was a bit unusual, but he had learned through experience that it was better to make the target look a little foolish than to not be certain he really had control of the target. That could get people killed.
"Echo six, target acquired. Beginning read"
How far are you from the safe house?
It is two houses down on the left.
How many others are there?
Six.
Are they all members like you? Any innocents?
No innocents. They are all members of the martyr brigade.
It was amazing that Cpl. Burke didn't need to know Arabic for this crucial interaction to take place. Somehow his link with the target worked like a 'babel fish' and he could understand everything that his target thought or said while he was linked.
"Echo six, target confirms location of safe house. Also confirms that there are no innocent souls at the location."
"Echo one, proceed with caution".
Given the go ahead, Cpl. Burke instructed his target to move at his normal pace to the safe house and re-verify that the other members of his "martyr's brigade" were present. Once the target had entered the house, it was much more difficult for Cpl. Burke to maintain his lock.
Tell me what you are doing Muhamed. Tell me what is there with you.
I am in the safe house. Abdul, Azeem and the rest are here. My bomb is stored in a covered pit in the back room.
Go get it. When you return to the main room, inform me.
I am removing the board over the pit. The bomb is where I left it. I am disabling the booby trap I left for the damn Americans.... I have the device. I am walking back into the front room.
How is the device fused? How long is the delay?
It is a simple pull handle fuse. There is no delay.
Pull the fuse
I am pull......