The feedback I got told me you liked the first one, but didn't have a lot of suggestions for the second one. So I just played by ear to come up with something I think is even better than the first one. I hope you agree.
Work. Ugh. Not that his job ever really thrilled him, but today especially Casey found it unappealing. The back of the counter of the Burger King had never looked so disgusting. His passionate afternoon with Erin yesterday simply refused to get out of his head. After that, looking at a cash register and a line of hungry customers was like following a delicious cheesecake with a plate of broccoli.
He and Erin had barely spoken at school today. In the classes they had together, they had exchanged a number of long, sometimes sensual glances across the room. They had met briefly during the lunch period, but that meeting had been filled by more awkward silence than actual words. They exchanged a little "Hi," and "Howād the studying go?" Neither of them seemed able to say anything important, no matter how hard they tried.
The afternoon had gone by equally uncomfortably. The task of homework had simply dragged on and on, as every few minutes he would look over to the phone, waiting for it to ring, wondering why he wasnāt going over to pick it up himself and call her. Everytime he closed his eyes, even if he just blinked, he could see himself just as he emerged from the thrall, hammering away at her, staring down her bare, beautiful chest, his equipment disappearing into her again and again. Then, hours later, it was time for work. There had never been a longer day.
Well, time to face the music and get on to the next customer. "Hi, what can I getā" He suddenly looked at his customer and went silent.
"Hi Casey."
"Erin, what are you doing here?"
"We need to talk."
"Yeah, I know, Iād love to, but now is really not the time for it."
Erin sighed. "Casey, Iād like us to say more than a few short sentences before itās tomorrow."
Casey was beginning to lose patience. "Okay, I think weāve done that now, and Iām getting paid by the hour here, so either order something or stop holding up the line." Erin scowled. "Look, Erin, donāt think Iām not happy to see you, but your putting my payroll on the line, okay! Weāll talk when I get off."
The guy behind Erin was developing a serious bug up his ass. "Hey, did I walk into some kinda youth club by mistake, or can I actually order something, damn it?"
Casey and Erin exchanged a look, and Erin moved aside.
As it turned out upon inspection of the time, Casey only had about a half hour left for the day, so Erin wasnāt kept waiting long. As soon as his uniform was packed up, Casey stepped out and said, "Letās go outside."
Their conversation outside the building started much like their previous meeting: silent. When the silence finally became unbearable, Erin said at last, "So what are we going to do?"
Casey looked at her questioningly. "Do?"
Erinās look turned incredulous. "With the machine!"
"Oh." Casey suddenly cocked an eyebrow. "We?"
Erin shrugged. "Well now that I know about it, you canāt expect me to just let you have all the fun, you know!"
"I see." Casey said. Then he said nothing. Neither did Erin. Silence again.
That is until Erin started chuckling. "You know something really ironic that I realized in school today, is that Iām a spaz who just had sex in a school with a lot of popular virgins!"
Casey thought, and began laughing with her. "Hey, that is interesting!" They laughed some more, then it died downā¦silence againā¦then an urgent thought came to Caseyās mind. "Oh, speaking of which, I wonder if, you know, we happened toā¦if youā¦as a resultā"
"Iām not pregnant," Erin cut him off. "I checked."
Casey breathed with relief. "Okay. But weāll have to be careful about that next time."
"Now thatās another thing I think we need to talk about," Erin added, "the possibility of there being a next time. We need to talk about us. Especially considering this mind-control gizmo we have that weāre more than likely going to end up using to get a bunch of other people in the sack."
"Is that your prediction?" Casey smiled. "Okay, well, I guess if weāre going to be fair about, you know, sharing this thing, we should probably alternate ownership of it every week, maybe on Monday or something, and we should probably blah blah blah blahā¦"
Casey was still talking, but his words were beginning to become incoherent. At least to Erinās ears they were. She found her mind beginning to drift. She wasnāt paying any attention to his words; it was his lips she was looking at. Those tempting lips. In a burst of unrestrained need, Erin suddenly grabbed Caseyās head and pulled him into a ravenous lip-lock. Her arms wrapped around him in a death hold, and she rolled them around along the wall, ultimately knocking into the trash cans and dropping to the ground. Her hand began rubbing his bulging crotch through his pants, while his hand reached down under her skirt.
"Erin? Erin, Iām talking here!"
"Huh? What?" Erin suddenly snapped back to reality. "Iām listening!"
Casey cocked an eyebrow. "What were you thinking about?"
"Umā¦nothing."
"Uh-huh."
"Look, whatever, just what were you saying?"
"What I was saying was we should probably take turns with the machine, like every week," Casey explained again.
"Yeah, I caught that part."
"And I said we should keep tabs on each other, and keep each other informed as to how weāre using it."