This is my first story I've ever tried to write. I always appreciate constructive criticism that will help me write my next story even better.
I'd appreciate any suggestions for this story's potential sequels, and I'll do my best to incorporate them into the next story.
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Lara just got out of bed on July 1st after another rough night. Stomping around in a nasty mood, she takes a brief shower and begins to look for a solution without resorting to sleeping pills. She is so sleep-deprived that not even the scenery from the enormous windows overlooking the nature reserve can make her feel better. She isn't kept awake by outside noises; she lives on the fifth floor, where there is no traffic or other unexpected noise. No, she just has trouble falling asleep and can't turn off her mind. Without resorting to pharmaceuticals, she knows she needs to find a way to calm her mind and get to sleep.
She searches the internet on her laptop while sitting in her comfy lounge sofa, hoping to discover a viable answer. She's reading suggestions like "Lower the room temperature," "Don't eat right before bed," and other things she's already tried. After clicking on a story that suggests "Yoga and Meditation," she eventually learns about hypnosis as a means to fall asleep.
She learns that hypnosis can help you relax before bed and even set tasks for yourself to complete the next day. After some time, she finds a website saying she can hypnotize herself and doesn't require a stranger for this. It makes tailored hypnosis films with sound and graphics for you to watch before going to bed. She merely needs to type in the keywords she wants, and the video will be created automatically. There are numerous presets available, including ones for "pain," "smoking," "sleep," "concentration," and other topics. As soon as she presses the "Sleep" button, a fresh list of alternatives appears, from which she chooses "Improve Sleep."
A quick loading screen is followed by a video of an inward spiral in calming colors. A pleasant male voice enters her headphones.
Lara downloads the movie to her laptop with the intention of seeing it tonight before going to bed. She continues to browse the website because she has nothing better to do right now and is interested in seeing what possibilities are available that she might want to try out later. It appears that you have the ability to add your own orders to the video, including many others like "Clean the kitchen" or "Mow the grass." Additionally, if you specify what you want to happen in basic commands, you can issue your own unique command. You can't learn a talent you don't already have, but you can use the skills you already have to follow instructions. For example, she may issue the command "Clean apartment" and then specify other activities such as "Clean kitchen," "Clean living room," "Clean bedroom," and "Take trash out." Then, using the information she holds, her mind will carry out these activities. Unless she needs to eat or drink, at which point the program will pause and continue once her basic needs have been addressed, it won't stop until the assignment is finished.
After some time, Lara discovers a button called "Erotic Hypnosis" near the bottom of the website. She must enter her credit card information after hitting the button to verify her age before continuing.
A fresh set of options emerges as soon as she submits her information. The list offers possibilities for fetishes and kinks that she has never even heard of, some of which are intriguing. Lara is aware that she is not an erotic woman, and she hopes that this will change that. Intriguing choices include "sensitivity enhancement," "anal play," "clitoral orgasm," "vaginal orgasm," and others. Lara flushes and gets thrilled, skipping over all the options. She's eager to put the video to the test tonight because if she has a good night's sleep and wakes up rejuvenated, she might be able to try some dirty things.
After spending a considerable amount of time at her computer, Lara finally looks up and notices the moon shining in her apartment. A quick peek at the time shows it is 9:42 p.m. She takes a quick shower, changes into her pajamas, and lays her laptop next to her bed. She starts the DVD, and the soothing male voice reaches her ears. It doesn't take long for Lara to slip into a trance-like condition as she watches the spiral. She simply listens to the sound, and her mind takes care of the rest, ignoring whatever the soothing voice is saying. The next thing she knows, it's 10 a.m., well past her usual 8 a.m. routine, and she's awake. As soon as she realizes the hypnosis is working, she leaps to her feet and begins to dance around her apartment. She can't believe it actually worked or how easy it was to overcome the months of bad sleep and the inevitable anger that goes along with it. She grabs her laptop in a hurry, sits it down on the coach, and eagerly searches the website for exciting options. She decides to be cautious because she's not sure how far things will go if she rewires herself, so for her second video, she only chooses "Sensitivity Enhancement."
Before watching the movie, she wants to go to the supermarket and buy some food and drinks for the next few days. It might not be a good idea to go grocery shopping if you're feeling highly sensitive. She leaves her laptop on the coffee table as she gets ready and leaves for the store.
At that very moment, the landlord is on his way to the building to repair her broken bath faucet. When she doesn't respond to his ringing her doorbell, he enters her flat using his master key. He quickly moves to her bath and replaces the outdated bath tap with a new one. After finishing his duties, he searches through the refrigerator for a Coke can. He sees her laptop on the coffee table as he scans the residence. He can't help but wonder if she has any naked images of herself on her computer. As he walks to the laptop, he sees the hypnosis website and the map with the downloaded videos when he glances at her screen. He quickly processes what is happening and plans to trick her by replacing the current videos with fresh ones. He realizes he needs to act quickly and takes a minute to understand how the website operates. He requests a fresh video and selects "Hypnosis Desires," "Sensitivity Enhancement," "Libido Increase 20%," and "Multi-Orgasmic." In an effort to mask the changes, he decides to start easy for today, and will come back tomorrow for another movie.
The movie is then downloaded, renamed to the original movie, and replaced.
He leaves a note saying he fixed the bath faucet and leaves before Lara returns from the store.
Lara is on her way back from the store, taking the elevator to the top floor. She enters her apartment after carrying the groceries there. She begins putting her goods away in the refrigerator after unloading them. Seeing the note, she reads it and exclaims, "Finally, I'm going to be able to enjoy a bath again."
The last video she downloaded is then opened, and she puts the headset over her ears. She observes the spiral as the peaceful colors have been replaced with vibrant colors that change quickly. She hears the calming voice, and this time, more quickly than before, she falls into a trance.
Unknown to her, she gets programmed to more than she intended. Lara wakes up horny after spending six hours gazing into the spiral. She glances down and sees that she is naked, worn out, and exhausted. Her arm hurts, and the sofa is sopping wet. She didn't even realize she masturbated for five hours.
Looking at her reflection in the big window wall, she realizes that anyone walking through the nature reserve may have seen her. Blushing, she immediately closes the screens and prepares the bath.
Lara gets into the hot, water-filled bath as soon as it is ready. Her lovely B-cup tits rise upward, exposing her hard nipples above the water.
She starts thinking about her hypnosis session to fall asleep and can't help but wonder what extra option she wants to add.
After the bath, she feels refreshed and still somewhat horny. Running naked through her apartment, she sits in the chair at her laptop again. Looking at the list of kinks, she selects "pierced." She's been thinking about getting a piercing even before the entire self hypnosis thing, ever since she was 14 years old. She never had the guts to do it, but figuring she has nothing to lose, she downloads the movie with the tags "improve sleep," and "Pierced." Heading to bed, she takes the laptop and stares at the spiral again the moment she plays the video.
