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Give Up Give In A Short Story

Give Up Give In A Short Story

by jay_graham_cracer
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[Warning: Contains Scenes of Mind Break, Mind Control, and Non-Consent]

If there was one thing being a private investigator had done, it was solidify Gabriella's hatred of people. Whiny clients, the same stories of "Is my wife cheating on me?", and "What do you mean you don't find missing pets!" had slowly cranked her pessimism up over the years. It was a job that she loved, but lord did Gabriella hate it.

Today was one of those jobs she hated, but the money was good. The most recent request of "Is my husband cheating on me?" had brought her to a sketchy warehouse at three in the morning. The client in question was worried about why her husband kept leaving the house at this ungodly hour, which was fair. The cheating angle didn't make much sense; unless the husband wanted to be caught. Leaving constantly with no excuses wasn't exactly subtle.

It tugged at her nosy nature. The man had been inside for over two hours. Several other cars were parked outside the warehouse, lazily hidden in the trees. A group meeting then. Was he being blackmailed? It would certainly explain why he left in such a hurry every night.

Sitting in the car was getting Gabriella nowhere. She stepped out into the cold night air and pulled her coat tighter. The cold often made her regret her french bob cut, which left her neck exposed to the elements. She grimaced as her nipples hardened under her push up bra. Self sexualization was a great way to get an extra 20 dollars added to her hourly rate, but God was it uncomfortable.

Gabriella kept to the shadows and made her way up to the building. Her camera hung off of her neck, bouncing softly with every step. She peaked through a window and winced through the bright lights.

She gasped.

It was a goddamn orgy. Or at least the start of one. Five naked men and seven naked women stood in the room. Their clothes were neatly folded and placed on a table against the wall. Gabriella blinked a few times while looking at the women. Their proportions made no sense. They had the largest tits she had ever seen. Shapely asses and ridiculously thick lips. They almost felt like parodies, a flock of advertisements for scummy men's magazines. A well of disdain and disgust formed inside of her.

It appeared she had caught them at the foreplay stage. Even that was strange. They were using purple paint on eachother, though she couldn't exactly tell what they were painting. She pulled up her camera and used it to zoom in more. *Aw, there here he is* she thought. Her target was giving her a nice angle of a whore kneeling in front of his...cock...

She rubbed her eyes and looked again. The thing was massive! Impossibly so. A foot long at least, thicker then a soda can. How the hell did he have enough blood to pump into it? A brief scan showed that all of the male members had similar sized cocks. Her eyes almost fell out of her head when she saw one of the female members did too.

Something twitched inside Gabriella but she pushed those thoughts away. She took several pictures, making sure to get a good shot of her target holding the bimbos head.

"Oh? What do we have here? A nosy little pervert?"

Gabriella turned towards the feminine voice. Before she could see the source, there was a flash of purple light, and then nothing.

Gabriella came to slowly, the world taking shape around her. She was strapped to a table, wearing only her underwear. Why? Her head was fuzzy and she wasn't sure how she got there. A naked woman with huge tits painted with purple tendrils stood over her, and it all came back.

Gabriella strained against the cuffs holding her to the table. She looked around frantically "Who do you people think you are! My roommate knows I'm here, so you better let me go or expect the cops real soon!" A complete lie, but nobody would ever risk that right?

The woman smiled. Her hair was red, and she had stunningly green eyes. "I don't think so. Even if what you say is true, the police chief's wife is in the next room. A few sultry words and all of this will go away." Her smile widened, mocking Gabriella.

Gabriella paled. "OK OK, I'm sorry, you can keep the camera! Just let me go and we can pretend none of this ever happened." Also a lie. She was reporting these people for kidnapping as soon as she got out the door.

The green eyed woman sighed, "I can't in good conscience let you go. There's a very deep sense of unhappiness inside of you."

Gabriella's fear mingled with confusion. Was this woman trying to recruit her into something? "I can handle my unhappiness on my own thank you, though I'll take a pamphlet if that'll help." Being casual was the only thing making her feel strong in this situation.

The woman chuckled softly, a wonderful musical sound. "No no, that won't do at all. I mean, just look at these" the woman grabbed Gabriella's tits, causing her to gasp sharply. "Pathetically small, and you know this. Why else would you wear a push up bra?"

Gabriella wanted to scream. All of this and the bimbo wanted her to have plastic surgery? "Respectfully, I'm happy with my body. The bra is just a tool to make men give me more money." Gabriella blinked. Why had she admitted that?

The woman giggled, "Of course sweety, but imagine how much more you could make if you had *these*!" The woman lifted up her tits and dropped them onto Gabriella's stomach. They were heavy!

She had no answer. The woman was working on a sense of logic that Gabriella couldn't begin to understand. The only option left was to endure until she could escape. "I-i see.." she said softly, that twitching feeling appearing inside of her again.

The woman clapped her hands together "Hooray! Let's get you prepped then sweetie!" Without skipping a beat, the woman began painting purple tendrils onto Gabriella's arms and legs. "My name's Mckenna!" she said "Whats yours?"

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Gabriella once again wanted to scream at the absurdity of the situation. "Gabriella..."

"Such a pretty name!" Mckenna began painting Gabriella's stomach, just below her belly button. "I know you're confused, but you don't really need to understand. It all makes sense after the ritual!"

"The ritual?" Gabriella didn't like the sound of that, the last thing she wanted was to be drugged and forced to have a 'spiritual' experience.

Mckenna gave a sly smile. "I don't want to spoil it! Let's give you a taste by finishing up your runes."

Gabriella lifted her head and strained to look at what she had painted. The purple paint formed a strange symbol just above her womb. A twisting point from which all of the other purple tendrils came. Identical to the one on Mckenna"What..what the hell is that?" Gabriella said. These people were insane, they had to be.

Mckenna leaned down and whispered into her ear. "Its a new perspective sweetie.." Mckenna moved back and held a hand over Gabriella's womb. "Our great God, let this slave know your grace!"

Gabriella wanted to shout "I'm not a fucking slave!" But any ability to speak or even think was cut through with a sword of pure pleasure. Purple light shown off her body, and she could feel the heat off of the tendrils that it came from. She could see from the corner of her eye that the tendrils were actually *growing*. Expanding underneath her arms and legs, inside of her push up bra and panties, everywhere Mckenna wasn't able to reach.

Gabriella could only writhe on the table. The sensation was unlike anything she had ever experienced. Each tendril snaked over her skin with the sweet pleasure that stopped just before pushing her over the edge. It was hot and wet, tightening and hugging with just enough pressure to make her feel helplessly restrained.

As the tendrils expanded so did their effects. Her nipples felt so sensitive she just wanted someone to *yank* on them until she screamed. As if she wasn't already. She could hear her own voice in her head, wordless moaning and gasping.

Gabriella had no idea how long it went on. When it finally ended she was drenched in sweat, panting heavily from the effort. She realized the restraints had been removed at some point, the tendrils the only thing necessary to hold her captive. Mckenna was staring down at Gabriella hungrily, absentmindedly rubbing her own pussy against the corner of the table.

"Thats just a taste sweetie..." Mckenna said with a small moan in her voice. The table rocked every time she moved her hips forward. "The pleasure our God can give is infinite."

Gabriella stood up shakily. She needed to run. Whatever they had done to her was far too effective. If Mckenna was telling the truth about the infinite pleasure, Gabriella doubted she would last much longer. "Th-thank you I'm much happier now. I've had enough for today, I'll be sure to come back again tomorrow nig-"

"Kneel." Mckenna interrupted her calmly.

Gabriella fell to her knees. She couldn't move no matter how hard her leg muscles tensed. Anger and fear were whirling around inside of her. "What the fuck did you people do to me?"

Mckenna giggled and cupped Gabriella's face in her hands. She looked down at her with eyes akin to that of a predator to its prey. "Im making you happier sweetie. What kind of sad party pooper goes around spoiling the fun for guys like Raymond? Our God will show you just how silly you were being. Follow me, crawling since you tried to leave"

Gabriellas body did as it was told, as if the tendrils were puppet strings moving her to their whims. Crawling was humiliating, and Gabriella had to tell herself that the wetness at her crotch was just leftover from earlier.

How did Mckenna know she had been after Raymond? Had she developed the film and seen the pictures? That was insane but no more insane then the rest of it. They had to have drugged her while she slept, there was no other way to explain it.

They reached the main room where Gabriella had spied on them earlier. The men and women, now covered in the same purple tendrils, smirked down at her. Especially Raymond, who had a new woman kneeling in front of him. One with suspiciously familiar brown hair...

Her heart sank. Raymond's wife was happily kissing the base of his cock, worshipping it with her newly plump lips. Her tits had been nowhere near that size just the night before, and yet here they were. In the span of just 24 hours Sheila had become something entirely different.There was not an ounce of resentment in her eyes, only pure love and devotion.

"Was she in on it the whole time?" Gabriella said through gritted teeth. Intimidation was not easy while crawling like a dog. "Was this this just a sick ploy to lure me in you degenerate fucks?!"

The men and women laughed at her. Genuine, mocking laughter that made Gabriella feel small. Raymond patted the top of his wife's head and spoke "No no, I hadn't planned on getting Sheila here involved for a while. However after we found her phone number in your car, I had no choice but to bring her here for questioning..."

He looked down at Sheila, and Gabriella was surprised to see genuine love in his eyes. "I shouldn't have been so selfish, I should have brought her a long time ago. Now she understands the true joys of our lord and God, isn't that right?"

Sheila nodded eagerly, moving her kisses up Raymond's cock as she spoke. "His divine pleasure is delicious, I understand why you couldn't help yourself honey! I'm just annoyed you didn't bring me here immediately after finding out about our lord!" She playfully nibbled on the tip of his dick.

Mckenna chuckled, "You see sweetie? You would have broken up such a loving couple, while our master allowed them to become closer then ever! Don't you want to be like her?"

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Gabriella paled. They wouldn't be able to- No it couldn't happen that quickly. But Sheila was right there, undeniably transformed in mind and body. She shook her head "You bastards may drug me over and over, but you can't hold me here for-"

Lightning of pleasure. Gabriella writhed on the ground, humping the air instinctively. It was much shorter then the last, her breathing heavy as it wore off. While she had been...busy, the cult members had created a circle around her.

"Before the mind can take shape, it's vessel must be molded" Mckenna said, kneeling with her palms to the ground. The others did the same. Mckenna continued, "Lord, mold our new companions vessel, so that their soul may follow." Gabriella raised a hand, hoping to stop it somehow, someway.

Her body was suddenly a conduit for pleasure like electric fire. It burned through her and made her tense and shake where ever it moved. She could feel her chest tightening. Gabriella looked down and watched in horror as her chest expanded. The horror fought to stay above the electric fire, the heat and unending tingling pleasure that made her grope and claw at her expanding tits.

They finally tore through her push up bra, almost pouring out past the fabric. Each was larger then her head, and she couldn't stop grabbing them. Each squeeze caused waves of intoxicating pleasure, the twisting and pulling of her nipples made her scream in ecstasy.

She felt her ass and hips tightening in the same way, and with the same ripping noise her panties fell away. The electric fire subsided, and Gabriella collapsed in a sweaty mess. She looked at herself. Her body was no longer her own. It was humiliating and fetishistic but it just felt *right*. She hated that the larger tits, wide hips and thick ass all felt like an improvement.

Raymond stood over her. "On your knees."

Gabriella wasn't sure if she obeyed or if her body moved on its own. She kneeled in front of Raymond as he inspected her. Her eyes couldn't stop following his cock as it swung around her, half hard and still thick.

Raymond grinned and grabbed both of her nipples. Gabriella moaned in delight, ashamed but unable to stop herself as Raymond pulled hard on them. "Silly little private eye, you walked into the lions den, and now your mind will be devoured." He let go and returned to the circle. "The vessel is shaped, now her mind and soul are ready to bask in the presence of our lord"

Gabriella was still recovering, panting heavily. "Your lord? And what is he going to do that you haven't already done?" She wasn't sure what the point of that comment was. Was it confidence in her ability to resist, or did she just want more?

Mckenna grinned at her. "Have fun sweetie, I can't wait to meet the real you!"

Gabriella wanted to say something obscene, but a pool of purple light formed around her. A large circle interwoven with white runes that was just slightly large then her. Before she could examine it further, tentacles erupted from the purple light all around her. Her scream was cut off as one wrapped itself around her mouth and head. It was wet, slimy, but somehow smelled amazing! Like lavender and cinnamon!

This didn't quiet her terror as the tentacles wrapped around more of her new body. She moaned as her body was groped and restrained, dragged down into the purple light, passed it, until she was bathed in it. The purple was everywhere, and so were the tentacles.

Then they were inside her. First the one at her mouth, then her pussy and her ass. She squealed, or attempted to, in the inhuman ecstasy this caused. She was so helpless and yet her body rejoiced in it. She greedily swallowed the tentacle down, tongue swirling in the slime like the most delicious cum she had ever had.

Gabriella could feel another entity inside her head. A mass of pure desire and need, devoid of logic and hesitation. Her own thoughts were mere whispers next to this instinctual hurricane. The feeling of tentacles deliciously assaulting her became more abstract. They were not just caressing her womb, they were caressing her mind. Everything that she was, her very essence was being stroked and massaged.

It changed the very meaning of what it was to have sex. Sex wasn't just a physical interaction, it was a meeting of souls! Meant to be celebrated, and done as often as shaking hands. No, more so! Every moment of every day should be dedicated to stroking and fucking and sucking and kissing and licking and fingering and spanking and and and

Gabriella's mind raced with the new possibilities. Her essence continued to be spread out, every inch of her soul laid bare so that it could be absorbed in the otherworldly pleasure. She was melting like wax, filling the vessel of her new body in just the way her lord wanted. Of course that's what the entity was, her lord and God. Her master and owner. She had never felt such love and gratitude for another being.

The world was reaching a final rise, a climax as her soul was permanently marked by this ritual. Gabriella greedily sucked in more. More of the entity, more of the pleasure, more of the insanity that made her feel like an animal in heat. Everything moved faster and faster, pumping more and more until there was just a

*Pop*

Followed by waves of thick wet pleasure pumping through her being, tainting every inch of her soul. She wasn't just a servant of her God, her God was a part of her! Everywhere she went a piece of the lord would follow.

She screamed in pleasure, her soul and mind vibrating as they were wracked over and over with orgasmic waves. The waves increased in frequency and intensity, building and building until like glass in an earthquake

She shattered

Gabriella awoke on the floor, giggling and coughing up slimy cum. Mckenna and Sheila were licking it up off of her tits, grinning stupidly. Gabriella loved them both, and she loved her God. She could still feel the lord, attached to her mind, pumping away at her essence. It would never be enough, the lord would never let her have enough.

And lord did Gabriella love it.

*The End*

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