A note from Joey: Hi there! This is my first Literotica story, and admittedly, I feel that I have much to learn as an author. Your comments and constructive critiques are most welcome.
In this case, I wrote what I wanted to read but wasn't finding enough of: a sweet, romantic hypnofetish story, which, while certainly a fantasy, leans more realistic than not.
I hope you enjoy it.
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Hey. So, since I'm gonna be telling you this story, I guess I should start by introducing myself. My name is Sirin, or at least, that's what got written down when my family came to the States. You can pronounce it 'she-reen.' I think there's supposed to be a little dangly thing under the S, but when we came here I was too young to say so. What can you do.
Other than that, I don't really know what to say about myself. Hmm... I play for the Serpents, which is an adult coed recreational league softball team. And I'm pretty much a certified bad bitch. What else is there to say?
It's not like the story is all about me, anyway. It's mostly about Evie.
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I jogged up in front of my best friend Evie's house: the world's smallest mansion on a little hill overlooking the road.
Okay, so she had told me it wasn't technically a mansion. But, I mean, come on. It had a turret. It had wooden siding which I'm pretty sure was blue, but it was hard to tell for all the ivy. It had a fence
on the roof
. It was the world's smallest mansion.
A gull was standing up on that fence, looking every which-way as if something amazing was happening all around it. I could relate. This was going to be a special day. We were going to the Fruit Festival, after all.
Mental checklist time. My clothes were cleanish, my boobs were sweaty (god
damn
it was a hot one today), and my bag was right where I left it - in my hand.
I stuck my nose down the collar of my tee, and decided that I smelled acceptable. Finally, I felt the back of my shirt, right between my shoulder blades. Well, it
was
dry there when I left the facilities at the field, so I felt like I deserved a pass on that one.
Beyond the house, the sun was hanging a little low in the sky; behind me, the coastline was bathed in orange-pink. The scent of the sea was distant, but still palpable. By the time I looked back, the gull was staring at me. Hmm... it might have already been staring at me.
As I passed the black walnut tree in the yard, I smiled at its wild-looking limbs, grasping in all directions, ending in spindly twigs. Its fruit hung plump and green, but those were only the husks. The walnuts were inside. Last fall, Evie and I collected some of them and made a pie! Well, Evie mostly made the pie, because she's good with things like that. But I totally helped.
Maybe we would do the same thing this year, I hoped, in a few months.
I let myself in, as usual. The inside was slightly less scorching than outside - slightly. The windows were open, the curtains ebbing and flowing gently. From the entryway, I spotted Evie's housemates - Brian, Rob, and Jackie - sitting at the dining room table, enjoying some beers over a game of some kind.
"How the hell are ya!" I hollered.
"Hey, Sirin," said Brian. Rob gave me a quiet nod, staring intensely at the board. Jackie gave a brief chuckle at my greeting.
"What's that?" I asked.
"Ah, this is
Architects of Kazan
. It's kind of a..." he trailed off. "...Well, it's European."
I looked over the board, which seemed to be some kind of strange geometrical map covered in little wooden goats. Hmm.
"Neat. So, have you guys been to the Fruit Festival?"
"I haven't. Rob and I were thinking we might go over tomorrow."
"I was there earlier," Jackie remarked. "Scored this sweet - here, let me see if I can find it..."
She dug around in her backpack to produce a bottle of fancy-looking golden murk, which she held up proudly.
"Dandelion wine! You know how hard to find this shit is?"
"No," I said. "How hard to find is it?"
"Like... kind of hard."
I gave a hearty thumbs-up. "Nice!"
"Mmm hmm." She went back to considering the game.
Brian waved me closer. He only began to whisper after a furtive glance around the table, ensuring that the others were totally engrossed in the goat trade.
"Is, uh. Is everything all right? You know." His voice dropped to where he was just mouthing the words. "With Evie."
"Yeah," I whispered back. "She's fine. Really."
He raised an eyebrow, but nodded.
"I just hope she knows, ya know, she can hang out with us whenever she wants. And not just on board game night. I think we'd all like that."
"She knows," I told him.
"Good," he said, as we each gave a mildly awkward smile to the other.
Brian was a sweet guy, but he didn't know Evie the way I did. Speaking of which - as fun as it always was to chat up this crew, I remembered that my friend was waiting for me.
"See you later, guys!" I gave them a big wave before heading up the stairs.
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Knock, knock.
I heard her say something that was probably "Come in."
"Hey, Evie!" I burst into my best friend's room with perhaps a bit too much excitement, probably bouncing up and down more than I should have been. She looked up from her desk and softly giggled at me, looking like a total cutie, as usual, with an emery board in hand.
Her bedroom never ceased to amaze me. It was full of so many plants, and the fresh botanical aroma permeated everything - on a day like that day, it felt like a greenhouse in there. Between the plants and the kitchenette, I didn't understand how Evie managed to keep everything so neat and clean. Her bed occupied the center of the room, with a stately desk and an enormous bookshelf nearby.
My eyes were drawn to her bed - plush and enormous. A huge pile of pillows sat upon it. Personally, I was a one-pillow kind of person. But when I looked at the sheer luxury before me, I was tempted to throw away my old lifestyle and become a shameless pillow hoarder as well.
Even with the heap of pillows, her bed was easily large enough to fit three Evies more than comfortably. Or one of Evie and one of me.
Well, that was silly. What was I thinking?
Then I noticed Evie pointing to the door behind me, smiling patiently.
Oh, right.
Evie kept on giggling as I flailed my arm behind my back, trying to grab the door handle without having to take my eyes off her. I watched her put the file away and uncap a bottle of cuticle oil, brushing it onto her fingers.
And, at some point, I found the door handle. Finally I tugged it completely shut - it fit very snugly against the foam soundproofing that was all around the door frame. Hell, Evie was stronger than she looked, otherwise she'd never be able to shut this thing by herself. I had to put my body weight into it.
When Evie finally spoke, I realized she had been waiting for me to finish, which was just like her.
"Hey, Sirin." She was smiling calmly, but warmly. "It's good to see you."
Her voice was as light as air. As I was drawn closer, I could see her smooth, shiny nails.
"Hmm," I said, in mock appraisal. "Your nails are short but very elegant. Just like the rest of you!"
"I am not short!"
I stepped closer, partly because I wanted to hear her better, and partly because I just wanted to.
She stood and craned her head to look up at me with the same modest little grin as usual, and I noticed that she was wearing a short summer dress I hadn't seen before, one with a colorful floral print.
"You look nice!" I said. "And the dress is nice, too."
"Mmm."
I bent a little to give her a big, friendly squeeze while she put her arms around me with all the strength of a gentle breeze. I enjoyed the warm, spicy scent of the fragrance she wore - cinnamon leaf oil, I happened to know. When we parted, she was smiling just a little more broadly than before, and that made me happy.
"Someone's friendly today," she remarked.