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Denise Saves Beth For Steve

Denise Saves Beth For Steve

by ciclavitapress
19 min read
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All characters in this story are older than 18.

Let me introduce myself. My name is Jim Richardson. I had the pleasure of meeting the love of my life, Denise. Our relationship started during a ski trip under unusual circumstances. That is covered in another, earlier submission. We are both students here at the university. We currently live on campus in the student dorms, but plan to move off campus, into an apartment, at the end of the second semester. We both look forward to living together.

At the present time, all our close friends live in the same dorm as we do. Our proximity to each other keeps our social circle tight. It is always easy to find something to do and someone to do it with. And we can look after each other, just in case some sort of problem arises.

Denise and I went shopping recently and one of our friends came up as a topic of our conversation, while we walked downtown. Her friend, Beth, had been seeing an acquaintance of ours, Matt, on a regular basis. Matt is our age and lives in a dorm a few blocks away from ours. We always thought that Beth and Matt had a solid relationship. They had been dating for a couple of months and everything indicated they were a happy couple. We had gone out with them and met for several social events. We never saw any behaviors that would raise any red flags.

Denise noticed that Beth's outlook had changed in the past week. Beth wouldn't say anything was wrong, but it was obvious she wasn't the same happy woman we had known for the past six months. Three nights ago, Denise found Beth quietly crying in a dark corner of the library. Beth didn't want to talk, but Denise sat down anyway, just to keep her friend company. She sat quietly with Beth. Finally, Beth decided she needed to talk. Denise was the perfect friend and listener.

Beth told Denise that she had broken up with Matt. Their relationship had soured and Beth decided she needed to get out before she was hurt any more than she already was. Denise immediately thought about physical abuse. Her anger boiled up to the point of exploding. She took one of Beth's hands and put her arm around Beth's shoulder and pulled her close.

"What did that fucker do to you?" Denise seldom spoke like that, but she was angry. She had shifted into full defensive mode for her friend's well being.

"He didn't hurt me. Well, not in a physical way. He never touched me in anger." Beth was almost defending Matt, but Denise wasn't buying any of it.

"Bullshit. My friend doesn't sit in the library and cry to herself in the dark. Not if nothing is wrong." Denise held Beth tighter and leaned her head against Beth's.

"What did he do to you? Why are you crying?"

"Matt never hit me. He's never gotten physical with me. It's... just... well, he...he's just being mean to me."

"But Matt's not hitting you?"

"Oh, no! Nothing like that. Nothing physical...he just...well, he's fucking...he's fucking with my brain. I'm going out of my mind. I'm so confused." Beth was starting to sob and shake in Denise's arms.

A girl a couple of tables away looked up at Denise and Beth and came over.

"Is everything okay? Can I do anything?" she asked. She had a very concerned look on her face.

"I think we could use some Kleenex if you have any." The girl spun away and disappeared for a few minutes.

Denise held onto Beth, helped her to breathe deeply and settle down. She was really distraught and out of control.

A box of Kleenex arrived.

"If you need anything, anything at all, I'm just over there. I'll help." Denise thanked her and said she would ask for help if she needed anything. The Kleenex were a welcomed start.

After Beth settled back down, she began to confide in Denise. Things with Matt had been going great up until recently. They enjoyed each other's company and spent time together doing different activities. Matt was always considerate of what Beth could or could not do. He was never pushy. Their intimate times together were very enjoyable and he never got rough with her. But things changed a couple of weeks ago.

"Matt became different. He became more domineering. He was demeaning. Less flexible. He began to treat me like was inadequate and had no value. He didn't treat me like an equal person anymore. Everything I said was wrong. He said I had no idea how the world was supposed to work. I knew there were bad things in the world, but if two people could get along, the world would be better. He told me I never grew up. I never learned my purpose in life. I didn't know my place. If I listened to him, I could learn what I needed to do."

Beth was getting caught up in her growing emotional distress and was beginning to sob and shake again. Denise shushed her down and told her to relax and breathe. Denise tried to get Beth to ease her mind.

"Matt's just being a dick. He is trying to play some kind of mind game with you. Maybe he wants to brainwash you into being like a mentally submissive slave or something. Maybe he never wanted a loving relationship. Maybe he wants you under his control so he can make you do anything he wants. You won't have a say in anything. You'll just have to obey and not question him. I think you found him out before he really hurt you."

You always hear about the vulnerable woman caught in a one-sided, mentally abusive relationship. She is just a decoration, or a woman he can order around to do his bidding. She becomes a slave. The woman is never physically abused. But if she offers up a thought, the man will mentally beat her down. He puts her down because he thinks she is not worthy of having valuable thoughts or feelings. She becomes a Stepford Wife. Sometimes the woman succumbs and ends up believing his shit and is mentally compromised for life. Is this the kind of trap Matt was trying to build for Beth?

"I'm glad you found me tonight. I don't know what to do. I can't go to the dorm, 'cuz Matt could find me. If I go to the dorm, I'd have to lock myself in. Then the phone might ring. Or there'd be a knock at the door. I don't want to be alone. I can't shake all those dark ideas Matt was putting into my head. I don't know what to do!"

"You are coming home with me. You won't be alone. And we're going to figure out how to get rid of Matt, get him out of your life. You'll get your life back. I'm calling Jim. He'll pick us up out front in a few minutes."

Denise called me and I got the car and met them at the library. Beth was a mess. Denise loaded books and packs in the back seat and put Beth in the car. Then she slid into the backseat with Beth and closed the door. I drove us all back to the dorm.

When we got to the dorm, Denise got Beth out of the car. She told me to get all the stuff and bring it to her room. Denise and Beth walked into the dorm. I parked the car and got all the books and packs and bags and headed to Denise's room. I knocked softly on the door.

Denise answered the door and told me to put everything on her desk. I walked over to the desk and put everything down. I looked to smile and nod at Beth, but Beth looked scared and shrunk into herself.

"What the fuck?"

"I think you'll need to leave. It's going to be a girl's night. Maybe two." Denise gave me a kiss and a hug and pushed me back into the hall.

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"I'll text when Beth settles down. Love you." She gave me another kiss and closed the door.

My phone buzzed as I was walking back to my room and Denise was already texting.

"Matt mentally fucking with Beth."

"Beth is scared to death."

"Call campus security."

Whoa. This sounds crazy serious. I called campus security dispatch and they said they would send an officer over. As I waited for a call from the front desk, Denise sent more details of what was going on. Shit. Matt was going to be in trouble.

It was about 20 minutes before my phone rang and the girl at the front desk said a campus security officer wanted to see me. I went to the front desk, met the officer and we went to the common room for a cup of tea. The officer got coffee because he wanted caffeine for his shift. We got the drinks and sat down at a table. Others in the commons room checked out me and the officer.

I showed him Beth's texts about what Matt had been doing. He said there was nothing in the texts he could act on. Beth did not want to talk to the officer, so that complicated the process even more. The officer had seen this type of behavior before and understood completely what was going on. He said the best thing to do was start an incident report claiming abuse. That way, if anything else happened, there would be a record showing that Beth had concerns for her safety. The officer also said that Beth should contact student medical services in the morning and make an appointment with a councilor. He said he has seen a lot of this during his years of service and there was usually an acceptable and successful resolution to the problem if you got help early enough. He stressed that Beth needed friends around she could talk to and be with for comfort and a feeling of security. With that, he gave me his card and ended our incident reporting session.

I texted Denise what the officer recommended.

"Anything else you need?"

"No."

"I miss you. I love you." I replied. It had only been a few hours and I already missed. I felt bad for her because she felt bad for Beth. Denise was caught in the middle of a shit storm.

"Me too." Hearts emoji.

"Talk tomorrow." Sleeping emoji. Time to turn in.

I went back to my room and was to wired to sleep. I recalled what Denise and I talked about on our shopping trip. I had no idea Matt had been so mean to Beth. It was fucking criminal. No one should ever be allowed to treat someone else like that. How do some men turn into such fucking bastards.

I got out my bottle of scotch, poured a shot and dumped it down my throat. That was a waste of 15 year old scotch but it made my insides feel better. I got my kit and towel and went to take a scalding hot shower. I needed to relax and get ready for bed. In another 30 minutes, I was in bed staring at a dark ceiling, contemplating Denise, Beth and Matt.

It took a long time for morning to come. My mind raced all night. I never saw any of what Beth described in Matt. He seemed like a nice guy from seeing him occasionally in the dorm, on campus and in the rink. I guess first impressions can be misleading. People can hide behind a facade and not really be who they appear to be.

I got a text from Denise about breakfast.

"Girl's breakfast." Sad emoji

"Okay." Many sad emojis. I hate emojis.

While at breakfast, I saw Denise, Beth and a couple of friends. They were having breakfast across the room at a corner table. The conversation looked serious and I don't think I would have been a welcome participant. I would probably open my mouth and all the wrong words would come out. They didn't need that right now.

After breakfast I received another text.

"Going to the clinic with Beth. Lunch, maybe?"

"Good luck. Sure," Happy face emoji.

Lunch was good. Denise and I got to be alone for a while. Beth was with other girlfriends. It sounded like things were not too far gone and that Beth would be okay. She is lucky she saw through Matt and what he was trying to do. She broke off the relationship before any real damage had been done. Beth is a strong woman. Emotionally vulnerable, but a strong woman.

Our conversation circled back to our shopping trip and something I had said. I mentioned a friend named Steve. He was a fellow hockey player, not that I was a hockey player. I was more of a hack and knew it.

"Who's your friend at the rink? Is he a dick?" Denise was asking.

"That's a little pre-judgmental. Steve's a great guy. He plays hockey and loves the game. I can't skate with him, but I can sharpen his skates better than he can. I get my ass kicked by him at stick and puck and drop in. But he is really good natured and doesn't take anything too seriously, unless he needs to. What's up?"

"Remember when we were talking while shopping? Do you think he'd be okay with Beth?" Denise was playing matchmaker.

"Well, it depends on how messed up Beth is. I don't know how she would be. Is she on the rebound? Is she looking for breakup sex? Is she after revenge against men? Is it too soon after dumping Matt? Does she even want to be around another man? Are there trust issues here?" I asked.

"There's a lot to process. There's a lot going on. Steve may not want to be a charity case worker."

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"From a girl's perspective, I think Beth is embarrassed after being sucked in like that, not knowing she was falling into a trap. She didn't have a clue what was coming. There will certainly be trust issues. She may not want to meet another guy for a long time. I was just wondering. Are there options?" Denise answered.

It could be hard to get Beth back into another relationship. She might need time to get her head and heart back together again. There might be some serious scars for her to deal with. Going out with another man could be a problem. The man might end up being a victim himself. Maybe simple double dates would be a possibility. Denise and Beth would have to take some time and figure things out. They needed to think things through and not make any rash decisions.

"Let me talk with Steve tomorrow at the rink. He might have some input about this whole thing." So, we left it at that for the time being. In the meantime, Denise would keep herself close to Beth and slowly try to bring me into the group. That way, Beth could see that not all men were fucking bastards. Healing takes time and understanding. And a little compassion. I would be the test dummy for now.

I found Steve at the rink. He was at a practice skate with his intramural team, the "Mother Puckers". Half the members of the team were juniors who didn't get scholarships to the national powerhouses, like DU and Boston. They were getting ready for an intramural game with another team, "Lightning Strikes". That team also had some juniors so, they were a good match for Steve's team. They were playing Saturday night. The stakes were: the loser buys the beer. Keep hockey simple.

I got on my gear and went out on the ice to talk with Steve. He saw me coming. He was sending wrist shots at the goalie. The goalie was making him look bad. Steve spun around and sent a puck into my cup.

"Hope Denise doesn't notice anything wrong in bed tonight." Steve laughed.

"Mother Fucker." Was my reply.

I skated, bent over like I was hurt and threw a cross check into him. I just bounced off and we both chuckled. We exchanged fist bumps and a slashes across our shin pads. That got all the pleasantries out of the way.

"What's up? I never see your sorry ass out here on the ice unless you're looking for a beat down. Feeling like a tough guy?" Steve was joking with me.

"Denise wanted me to talk to you. Otherwise, I wouldn't be wasting my time." I replied.

"She's still keeping you around? Well, if she's ready to dump your ass for a real man, give her my number as you're walking out her door!" Steve jested and pushed me in the chest.

This is the way we messed around on the ice. Keep it light. Our hockey "attitude". You can't take anything to seriously until you have refs, the puck drops and the clock starts.

"You seeing anybody these days?" I asked.

"Well, I see the guys in the shower after practice and there's a couple of guys from Canada. They're pretty hot, but nothing to serious...yet. Why?" I think Steve was kidding.

"Denise has a friend, Beth, and she just broke up with her boyfriend a few days ago. She's thinking about getting back out in the dating scene. I don't know if she's willing to throw all her standards away and meet you, but I thought I'd ask to see if you were up to the humiliation of going out with a person with class." Steve listened graciously to my insult.

"Well, I don't know. I would have to check my schedule. Dick heads like me are pretty busy. What do you have in mind?" I had piqued his interest.

"It will probably be a double date. Simple meal, maybe Chili's or Red Robin. Me and Denise, you and Beth. Just and introductory get together kinda thing." I offered. I let it sink in for a couple of seconds while he thought about it.

"What does she look like? Do I have to bring a leash with me?" Steve was cutting to the chase pretty quickly. He wasn't much into charity.

"Do you know "Murphy" Matt?" I asked.

"That Matt? That Beth and Matt?" Steve thought he knew them, especially Beth.

"Yeah, that's her. She just broke up with Matt a few days ago."

"Beth is one fine woman. Matt didn't deserve her. She dumped him? Shows she's got a brain." Steve was chuckling.

"Yeah, that's her. Matt was fucking with her mind. Broke her up pretty bad. Kinda messed her up. Denise and I want to help her get her head back on straight and meet a good man. I thought about you. What d'ya think?" It felt like kind of a big ask.

"I know Beth. Known of her for a long time. She's good people. I don't even know why they got together. Word is, he was a dick. She's way better than shit. She didn't deserve what Matt did. I'd be happy to meet her on a double date. But let's not do anything until she's ready. I don't want to be any part of messing her up even more. This rebound thing can be tricky. Beth's to good a person to be hurt even more. I don't want any part of that kind of drama." Steve was genuinely honest and concerned for Beth.

"That's good to hear, man. Denise and I really want to help her and I think you would be good for her. So, if you're willing, we'll put it together." It feels like we may have a plan here.

"Okay. Great. Now, get your sorry ass off the ice before I repaint the red line with your face." Steve still loved me.

I got one more puck to my ass as I skated to the door. I spun, pulled off a glove, flipped him off, caught and edge and fell on my ass. Steve pointed his stick at me and I knew we were all good. I went into the locker room to change back to my street clothes. I texted Denise.

"Steve is in." smiley face emoji.

I went back into the stands to watch the "Mother Puckers" practice. Steve's puck handling skills were as good as ever. He stood the goalie on his head as he crossed crease and buried the puck in the back of the net over the nearside shoulder. Goalie never had a chance. The goalie stick made a loud slap on the ice. The next time Steve was in the front of the net playing defense, the goalie put his stick blade on the back of Steve's skate and, with one big push, Steve was looking at the lights and the goalie's twinkling eyes. Hockey was definitely more fun than volley ball.

I met Denise a couple of hours later in the dorm. We discussed Steve's willingness to meet Beth on a double date. Denise was encouraged that Steve wanted to take a slow approach to the date. She was happy he did not want to hurt Beth further by rushing things. She felt better about the prospect of introducing Beth to a mutual friend. Denise was going to offer choices to Beth. But Beth would have to make the final decisions.

Denise received an update on Beth's session with a counselor in the clinic. Beth came back much happier than she was the day before. The counselor did not believe that Beth had suffered anything worse than hurt feelings and disillusionment from a failed romantic relationship with a man who was a dick. Beth now understood there are men preying on women who are vulnerable to that kind of attack. It can go terribly wrong for those women. But Beth was smart enough not to get sucked into the trap. Beth was going to be fine.

Beth hated men right now. Even me. She had to relearn that there were men out there who had good intentions and were actually decent human beings. She needed to regain some faith that not all men were going to try and take advantage of her. Beth is a good woman. She just needs to find a good man.

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