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Burning Man Ch 02

Burning Man Ch 02

by neonrabbit
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((Note: There is no sex in this chapter, but it's still a good one and you have to have a set-up before the punch.))

In the middle of the night Key sat at the foot of his bed. His cigarette smoldered down to the filter as he watched the window. Nothing was happening outside, but the traffic lights washed the ceiling. They shifted from green to yellow to red.

Almost a month ago Key was sitting at his desk staring out the same window. It was hot, but the children were out and several were outside in a near empty parking lot. The lot was a near barren field with scrub weeds growing through cracks in the asphalt, a few hedges flanking it, and a single yucca tree hovering over the lot without offering much in the way of shade.

In the lot two children carried sticks and held them like rifles and fired them at each other pantomiming the recoil as the imaginary bullets left their imaginary barrels. Each was shot several times but they continued to fire on each other. Their war raged on and three other children burst into the fray pushing these adversaries into an uneasy alliance. They made the stuttering sounds of gunfire with their mouths and threw the occasional invisible grenade, which each member of the group reacted to without prompting.

The war outside subsided, the five children were huddled together looking at something. One of the children was on the ground holding his head. The other four stood a few feet away clustered together watching the boy with rapt attention. Something smoldered next to the child on the ground. The boy's body shivered and became ashen, his hands dropped from his head and he curled into a fetal position. A small woman ran into the lot and began shrieking. Her hands were gesturing wildly as she spoke into her cell phone. The other kids just watched dumbstruck.

Key felt his guts churn and knew it was time to act or the child would die. He pulled on some latex gloves left over from an ex girlfriend who was a tattoo artist, tied a bandana around his face and went to the street level. Others joined the congregation by the fallen child. The object was still next to him, Key walked over ignoring the broken down woman. He carefully picked up the artifact. It looked like a small lump of iron with the Hebrew pictogram for "destroy" etched into it. The reek of sulfur pushed past the thin fabric around his nose and mouth. He made a quick scan of the area and tossed the smoking medallion to the side as he looked over the boy, the woman shrieked, but did not stop him. The boy's eyes were rolled back in his head and yellow drool pooled on the asphalt below him. Key pushed the child onto his back and crossed him arms. The boy's limbs were stiff from seizure. He turned to the mother, "Are you a religious woman?" She looked as if he spoke an alien language. "Christian, Buddhist, Muslim are you religious?" He yelled.

She nodded, "Yes, yes are you a doctor?"

"No, your son has been poisoned and I can fix it," she seemed to accept it, Key could hear the sirens now, he didn't have much time. "I need you to pray. Out loud!" she nodded and put her hands together in prayer.

Key lit a cigarette and began chanting. He blew a big lungful of tobacco in the boy's face and pulled a rattle composed of dried leather, bones, feathers, and small tortoise shells from his pocket. He shook the rattle as he chanted and blew another pull of tobacco in the boys face. The woman was reciting the Lord's Prayer behind him, others joined in. Key increased the volume and speed of his chant as he shook the rattle. Sweat beaded on his forehead and he could feel heat in his face and hands radiating inward to his heart. One more pull of tobacco and another round of chanting and Key's nose began to bleed at a light trickle. The ambulance was behind him he could feel it but he couldn't stop now he was very close. The boy's body shuddered and convulsed. A paramedic put his hands on Key's shoulder about to pry him away. As the paramedic hefted Key to his feet a plume of black oily smoke poured from the boy's mouth and rose into the sky. The plume subsided after some thirty seconds as the paramedics and surrounding observers watched the spectacle unsure of what they were looking at. Key collapsed and the paramedics pulled him out of the way to check on the boy.

Key was facing the child when he opened his eyes. The boy was blinking and alert, coughing up a lungful of mucus. Key stood slowly and picked up the medallion. The woman stepped in front of him, "I don't know what you did, but thank you."

Key nodded, "You're welcome," he could smell the phantom remnants of the odor in his bandana and it was making him nauseous. He took his leave quickly and with as little explanation as possible got back to his office wrapped the bandana around the medallion and put it in a small safe below his desk.

His cigarette had burned down to the filter while he sat silently remembering the boy. He moved in the dark to his safe and opened it. There were several things inside, but he wanted to look at the medallion. He pulled it from the safe and carefully unwrapped the object. It was just an inert hunk of metal with a symbol carved into its surface. There was little impressive about it. but it was still dangerous, probably more dangerous than the gun next to it. He felt weary from looking at it so he put it away and crawled back into bed. Noami moaned quietly as he put his arm around her. He closed his eyes, but didn't sleep.

* * *

Margaret Primrose worked her way through labyrinth intricate alleys to find the address in her hand. It was above a flower shop that looked as though it had been closed for a decade. She reluctantly pulled at the door to the ascending stairwell. The smell of chocolate and mothballs greeted her as she stepped upward. The air was heavy and hot and Margaret felt her adrenaline rising. This was the place where women like her died on police dramas. This building and everything about this place felt like a different country, like a different world. As she got to the top of the stairs a tattered piebald man rounded a corner and nearly crashed into her. She screamed, the piebald man merely ignored her and descended. She sat down at the top stair and cried to herself embarrassed by her own fear. She nearly turned back.

Her daughter had called and told her she was leaving for a while but something was wrong and her heart felt it. She talked to the police. They ignored her citing her daughter's phone call. She hired a private investigator only to be told the next week that her daughter was safe and didn't want to see her. So now she was here in this horrible place to find a man who could help bring her daughter home.

She stood slowly regaining a modicum of courage and looked down a short hallway of glass office doors. She walked down the hallway until she came to a door labeled:

#6

Key Investigations Ltd.

Margaret Primrose carefully turned the handle and opened the door. The room was covered in books on every available surface. The only open space was an empty chair. A door to her left opened. Noami entered with a cigarette dangling from the corner of her mouth as she struggled with a necklace. She was speaking as she entered, but abruptly stopped when she saw Margaret. "I'm looking for Mr. Key," She said, trying to sound as professional as possible.

Noami's eyes grew wide "Key?"

Key was pulling a tank top on as he loped into the room. He greeted Margaret quickly. "Sorry, I haven't checked my messages, I didn't realize I had an appointment this morning," she recoiled as he approached. Between the horrible part of town and the homeless man who nearly knocked her down the stairs this was too much. Her instinct was to walk out but something stopped her. It wasn't the detective, he looked like he had come straight from some drug den with his tattooed face, and his patches, studs, and the dog collar. It was the point of no return. She had come this far into the underworld and now she needed to finish.

She resigned herself to her fate and took a quick breath before speaking. "I didn't make an appointment. I'm sorry for coming here unannounced but I'm desperate Mr. Key."

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"How noir..." Noami joked.

"Ami, could you, um, please, grab me a cup of coffee?" Key asked.

"Excuse me?" Noami bristled.

"Yeah, uh just give us a second, please. Do you need anything miss, uh..." He stammered.

"Mrs. Margaret Primrose, I don't need anything, but your attention," Margaret answered.

Noami was instantly on the attack, "Let me ask you something," Key nodded, "have I filled out a W2?" Key tried to speak, "Uh uh, do I look clerical in any way shape or form?" Key shook his head, "and you want me to get you coffee?"

"Yeah, Ami it's just that there is some potentially sensitive stuff, I just thought..."

"You thought wrong."

"Could you please just grab me a cup of coffee, please, wind beneath my wings, Noami, please?" Key pleaded.

Noami frowned, "Fine," She grumbled as she left.

"Sorry about that. We were just heading out for breakfast," Key ingratiated.

"I won't take much of your time. My daughter has gone missing," she said. Margaret went on to explain her attempts to get help, about the phone call and the feeling of something wrong about the situation. Key quietly listened. "My husband had a stroke two months ago," she went on, "Morgan made a point of coming over every weekend. Her father means the world to her."

"Maybe she's just growing distant? You know college is a time..."

"No Mr. Key!" Her volume elevated, "it's more than that. She sounded different over the phone, like someone else," Margaret Primrose was pleading.

"Why did you come to me?" Key asked.

"I've heard you deal with these sort of things."

"What sort of things?"

"Possession, Mr. Key. I believe my daughter is possessed and I believe you can bring her home. I pray that you can bring her home," tears were choking her words. "There's something else. I hired a detective once already. He took the job, a week went by and then he suddenly quit. Told me he had located her but then he abruptly returned my money and quit the case."

"Really, what was his name?" Key asked.

"Henry Goddard."

Key was silent while he pondered. His limbs were still heavy and sore from his previous venture. "Three hundred a day, plus travel and hard expenses. I need her address at school, the names of all her professors, a recent photo and the names of any friends. Mrs. Primrose I will try to find your daughter, and if she's possessed I can help, but you have to prepare yourself for the possibility that there is nothing unusual going on. Can you do that?"

Margaret Primrose nodded slowly. "Thank you." She cried quietly and let out the breath she'd felt like she was holding since she stepped into the building.

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He smiled gently. "Can I get you some water or something?" Margaret nodded. "Now, please tell me about your daughter."

Key got her glass of water and sat down with his notepad. "My daughter's name is Morgan. She's a junior this year majoring in Mathematics," Margaret sipped her water and told Key everything she could think of about her missing daughter. "She never talked about any friends. She was always such a shy girl. She's on the Dean's list. Very focused on her studies."

"Is there anything else you can think of?" Key asked gently.

"She sometimes watched a band at a bar near the college. I didn't approve, I told her it was best to steer clear of bars."

"Okay, this is enough to start on. I'll call when I get something more."

"Thank you and please don't quit. I'm begging you, a mother knows when something is wrong," Margaret set the glass on his desk as she left.

Noami quietly seethed at the interruption. Not just the interruption she realized but something more. Key was holding something back from her and all his talk about honesty and openness suddenly seemed like one big lie. Noami placed a cup of coffee on his desk. "What was she talking about?" Noami asked as the door clicked from Mrs. Primrose exit.

"Business." Key answered.

Noami shook her head, "No, not just business, what about the other stuff? The possession stuff?" Key sipped at the coffee and stared into the black-brown liquid as steam curled from it. Noami punched him on the arm. "Don't ignore me," He looked up at her with sad eyes and put down the cup.

"I tell the client what they want to hear. She's distraught and I don't..."

"Bullshit!" She yelled, "You talked about," She flustered, "The way you spoke it was like you knew. You know things," Her face was a contorted in frustration. "I've always known you were special Key but please don't fucking lie to me."

"I don't know anything, just what do you mean know things?"

"I can read you like a book Martin Key and you ain't no fucking bible so you had better let me in or so help me I will walk and never look back!"

Key fidgeted in his seat and clicked his tongue against the roof of his mouth before he finally spoke, "There are things in my world that can hurt in ways I can't even describe. I don't want you exposed."

"How noble of you Key. Do I look like a delicate fucking snowflake?"

"No."

"Then don't treat me like one," Key nodded his acquiescence; she tugged at his mohawk and looked him in the eyes. "My safety is my issue."

He nodded, "Right up until it bites you in the ass. Please understand when I tell you there are reasons I keep this part away from you. I compartmentalize. I separate the worlds otherwise it never stops. It bleeds into everything."

Noami shook her head. She moved in close enough to kiss and she took his hand and looked him in the eye. "I love you. I am asking to be part of your life. Please let me in," He closed his eyes and let his forehead break the distance between them as he took a deep breath. "Talk to me," she said at almost a whisper.

"I handle demons. Possessions mostly, but occasionally I fight an honest to God monster. These creatures hate, they are bred from hate, they live in hate, and they die in hate."

"Demons exist?" Noami asked incredulously.

Key nodded, "and sometimes they come after me."

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