I've just finished Chapter 3, so it's straight into 4 and hopefully with time we can cut down on turn around time.
After a false start with someone else who gave the impression of being a great editor, but then unfortunately had to withdraw from providing me with help, I have finally found an editor to help me out, so you can all thank
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if this chapter seems a little more polished than others. If there are still problems, they're on me.
A note on the series, I originally envisioned it as a coming of age story where a slightly physically underdeveloped (apart from his cock) underdog inexplicably gets a huge amount of sex and lives happily ever after. What I originally planned, and am now unsure of, was that his mother, aunt and even grandmother sample him.
However, as time has gone by, I've realised that there may be readers who are repulsed or at the very least not interested in reading such stuff. I think that is a fair point of view. For that reason, I completely changed Chapter 3. At the end of the day, I'll write what I'm happy writing, but that change felt right.
However, I'm getting a few comments that want his mother or aunt to get involved. This series is a slow burn, so if such a thing happens, it won't be immediate.
If you like the series, I implore you to leave a comment on the end letting me know if you're for or against the incest angle for Tommy. If Tommy does go this way, I'll make sure it's segregated enough that your delicate eyes are protected, but I'm not going to waste my efforts on it if the majority would hate it. At the end of the day though, I'll write what feels right to me for the story.
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Dramatis Personae (Prior Chapters)
Thomas (Tommy) Johnson. Age 19. Due to a condition when he was a small child, his body's development was stunted, though doctors assured his mother that his growth would eventually catch up. He's the shy owner of a 6" dick that becomes 10" hard.
Amy Johnson, Tommy's single mother. Age 36. Amy has silky, shoulder length blonde hair and blue eyes. She works hard to provide a decent life for Tommy despite being a single parent and is extremely proud of her son's intelligence though she is over-protective of him physically. Tommy feels guilty for having checked out his Mum once or twice.
Pam Johnson, Tommy's Aunt and Amy's sister. Age 26. Her blonde hair hangs halfway down her back with light blue piercing eyes. She possesses high cheekbones, thin lips that are very rarely seen without a mischievous smirk, and a thin nose which makes her whole face very slender. Much more liberal than her sister. Currently looking for work in her sister and Tommy's area, requiring her to stay with her sister, and take up Tommy's bedroom.
Brian Cherry, Tommy's best friend. Age 18. He and Tommy have been friends for most of their lives. They're both into video games, science-fiction and fantasy. Brian's parents recently got divorced, and both Brian and his Mum crave for Brian to spend more time with his father.
Vicki Cherry, Brian's mother. Age 40. 38DD-25-36. Olive skin, wavy brown hair styled like Farrah Fawcett, with thick, dick-sucking lips, and brown eyes. Vicki appears to be the doting, reserved, single mother, but underneath that is a wild child. She took Tommy's virginity.
Brenda Bush, Tommy's teacher. Age 27. 34DD-26-34. Dark brunette hair, brown, almost sleepy-looking eyes, slightly thick nose, high cheekbones, pouting lips. Brenda has a weakness for students that has resulted in her getting fired a few times. Most recently, she's taken a strong liking to Tommy, and was the second woman Tommy slept with.
Ms Stern, Tommy's principal. Age 48. 52F-28-38. Honey blonde hair with highlights, hanging loosely down her back in a sort of wavy, 50's style when free, but normally bound up in a bun, and soft, green eyes. She behaves much as her name, sternly, but once she had Tommy in her office, it became quite obvious that she is a submissive, wanton cumslut. She is the third woman Tommy has fucked.
Heather Hancock, Tommy's neighbour and his Mum's best friend. Age 31. Recently, Tommy spotted her through her bedroom window in a very sexy outfit, apparently arguing with her husband.
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On Wednesday night there was a letter addressed to Tommy in the mail, and the return address was some kind of fancy firm in the city, Sadler, Chisholm & Associates.
Tommy almost never got any mail.
He opened it up and noted that it was thick paper, with a letterhead and everything, very official looking.
Dear Mr Thomas Johnson,
We are writing on behalf of the estate of Mr Richard Johnson --
Grandpa, thought Tommy --
in relation to several stipulations in his Last Will & Testament.
Tommy's Grandpa had died... eleven years ago, probably; Tommy had definitely been 8 at the time. Why would they be contacting him now?
Under instructions left by Mr Richard Johnson, several trust funds were created to withhold funds from the pool and allow for future...
The letter went on and on in very strict, confusing, legal terms. Tommy wasn't really sure what it was all about, but if he had to guess, it sounded like Grandpa had left him some money which he was about to receive. Grandpa had always been wealthy, and he did remember his Mum being very worried and stressed around the time of Grandpa's death. Now that he thought back on that time, he wondered if perhaps his Mum had been hoping to receive a lot of money from his Grandpa.
He left the letter where he knew his Mum would see it, and then went off to do his homework.
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When his Mum got home, he listened to her movements, wondering what her reaction would be. After shouted greetings, he could hear her go to her bedroom to change out of her work clothes, and possibly use the bathroom. Eventually he heard her go to the kitchen and a chair scrape on the floor, it would only be a matter of time until she saw the letter. She gasped, and then called out to him as she came down the hall, "Tommy, when did you get this letter?" She was clearly agitated when she got to his room.
"It was in the mail today Mum." He looked at her, waiting for her response so he could gauge if she was excited or upset.
"Well... do you know what it means?" still not revealing her emotions.
"I think it means Grandpa left me something?" She grinned and rushed forward to hug Tommy.
"Yes, yes Tommy. Oh I'm so happy for you Tommy."
"You mean us, happy for us right Mum?"
She stepped back and looked at him seriously, "No Tommy, this money is for you. You must use it wisely for your future. You must use it to go to college, or buy a house. You're not to use any of it on me. Besides, the letter doesn't even say how much money you have." He could see a tear forming.
He stepped forward and hugged her. There wasn't anything to say. He knew her well, and knew that she wouldn't allow him to spend any money on her if she could help him. He was already planning something though.
They had a nice dinner and Tommy's Mum said that she'd ring up the law firm tomorrow and find out what it was all about.