This is a work of fiction. None of the characters are underage or any age. You don't know them, no matter how much you think you do, because they are not real people. I made them up.
What I am really looking for here is feedback. I want to know if it entertained. If it did not, I would like to know why. Was it incongruities? Was it unrealistic size? Was it that girls would never say that? I just want to know if something popped you out of the story. I'm trying to become a better writer and this kind of feedback is helpful. And please VOTE!
The ending here is somewhat abrupt. That is on purpose. I wanted to write about the start of a relationship, not the whole thing. So, as they move into something long term, I end the story. I give a summary and someday, I may write more about them. But for now, this is the end. Thanks for reading and I hope you enjoy.
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I had several hours to kill, so I started with a workout. I had gotten plenty of exercise the last forty eight hours, but I liked to do my machine rotation and focus on my lower abdomen at least twice a week. So, I went to the gym and did my machines. On my cooldown, I usually walked a slow mile, but my mind kept drifting back to Vicki. By the end of my walk I had to sit for a couple minutes to try and reduce the swelling in my shorts, but it wasn't working. I couldn't shower yet, so, I went to my locker and pulled out my phone.
"Hello?" came her voice, kind of quivering and quiet.
"Hi Victoria," I said, and, detecting something in her voice continued, "Are you okay?"
"No Alex," she said almost whispering, "can you come here?"
"Is someone there, baby?" I asked.
"No, well, I think there is someone outside," she said, "I am so scared."
"I'll be right there, Vicki," I said, "make sure everything is locked. Stay back from the windows. I will call you when I am at your door so you know it is me. Do not answer the door for anyone. Okay, baby girl?"
"Yes Alex," she said with a whimper, "Please hurry."
I didn't bother to change, I grabbed my clothes and stuffed them in my gym bag, keeping out my wallet, keys and phone. I was about ten minutes away on a Sunday morning. So, traffic would be light. I would risk it and shave a few minutes off my time with speed. I timed it through the lights, going seven miles over the speed limit and was in the university district in about six minutes. Glancing at my radio display, the clock said seven thirty when I parked outside the house next door. Sure enough, there was a man trying to see in the window. He was youngish, maybe early thirties, dressed in dark clothes and carrying a camera or phone of something similar in his hand. I took his picture a few times with my phone and even got one good shot of his face as well as his attempts to look in the windows. I opened the car door and stepped out. Most truck drivers keep a stick in their cab for testing tires. I always thought something like that was a good idea. So, I kept a small bag of tools under my seat, one of which was a long handled, ball ping hammer. I slipped it into my hand and slid the keys between my fingers on my other hand, phone in my pocket and I walked forward.
He was rediculous. The opening and closing of my car door didn't even make him look. I was only about ten yards away when I said in a loud voice, "Hey!"
He startled and turned. Seeing me so close, he panicked and turned and ran. He was fast, and I didn't even try and chase him. I watched then traded the keys for my phone and snapped a few pics of him getting into a car and one good one of the license plate. Then I walked to the door and called Vicki.
"Hi, mija," I said, "I'm outside, come let me in."
The door opened and she slid backward with it, using it as a shield. "I heard the car door and peeked outside." she said as she closed the door. After bolting it, she turned and threw herself into my arms. "Oh my god, how could I be so stupid. It was a man I met and went out with a couple times. It didn't work out for me, but he said I was his..." then she broke down crying.
I held her and comforted her. She sobbed for a while before making a visible effort to stop. I dried her tears and said, "Do you feel better, Vicki?"
"No, I don't," she said, "I feel like I got that out, but I'm scared Alex, what if he comes back?"
"We'll work it out," I said, "In the meantime, you can come stay with me. I will call the cops and report the incident. I have some photos of him peeking in your windows and his face and car."
"Oh, but, won't that, I don't know, inconvenience you?" she asked, "I don't want to be a burden on you."
I teased her a bit, "You don't think daddy wouldn't do anything for his little girl?"
"Thank you, Alex," she said, relief in her voice. Then she kissed me, "Thank you so much."
I had her gather some of her stuff like she was taking a trip for a few days. Then, looking through her closet, I saw a hot looking medium dark blue dress and some matching heels. I had her put the outfit together in a separate bag along with jewelry and toiletries. I watched her grab stockings and a garter belt as well. She put on a pair of jeans over her nightshirt which was basically a huge mens tee shirt with a picture of Darth Vader on it. She also grabbed her uniform for the diner and shoes for that as well. She looked around the place and grabbed her iPod and chargers then turned to me.
"Will I ever feel the same about this place?" she asked, "I fell so in love with it when I moved in. It is in a nice area of town, has plenty of room, came with half the furniture." And she sighed, "I don't know," then turned to look at me, "can we go now before I cry again?"
I took her bags and her hand and out the door we went. She was walking a bit slower than me and I noticed she had on a pair of heeled ankle boots. At some point, she must have fluffed her hair and it was lifted just a bit around her face. She wasn't wearing any makeup at all and still looked gorgeous as hell. I threw the bags in back and sat her in front. I went around the back side of the car and there he was, sitting in his car down the street, watching. I pulled up my phone, opened the phone app and snapped a picture. He started his car and I pocketted my phone and let the hammer bounce a few times against my palm as I looked at him and stood threateningly. He pulled off and I got in the car.
I slipped the hammer under the seat and buckled up then spun around and cruised toward where he went. I spotted him a few lights up ahead, but he turned off while I was stuck at a red and I lost him. I quickly turned the other direction and took a fast straight shot back to my place, pulling into the garage and parking. I took a good long look around and didn't see him anywhere, so we went inside.
"Wow, this place is nice," Vicki said, "you have a little dust, but I can take care of that for you."
She stood in the living room and all I could think about was how hot she looked. She had a thin waist, with a very callipygian behind, and the tight stretch jeans showed off her shapely legs. I came up behind her and slipped my arms around her waist, pulling her back into my embrace.
"So, you have a couple choices, Vicki," I said as I released her and grabbed the three bags. "Come with me," I continued and we climbed the stairs. Up the stairs were four doors. Three for bedrooms and one for the bath. The two extra rooms were furnished and I dropped the bags near the top of the stairs. "Here is the deal. I don't want to assume anything, so I am offering you your choice. To the right is my bedroom. To the far left is the guest bedroom and the middle room is another room that I just recently finished and it is empty as well. You can choose a room. If you choose the right, we will sleep together. If we sleep together, I will make love to you, probably frequently. If you choose the far left, you will never have to come to my bed. If you choose the center room, it is more of a sometimes thing. I am good with all three. You tell me where and I will put your bags there."
"I... I don't know..." she said, "what if I make the wrong choice?"
"Oh, the choice is not irrevocable," I said, "If you decide you want to change rooms, you just tell me or move your stuff. But I would like to make sure we keep an open dialog. I think that you deserve to hear what I think and frankly, I want to hear what you think even if it is uncomfortable for me."
She stood for a moment then came into my arms and kissed me. "Move my bags into your room baby. I want you, right now." Then she stepped back and picked up the bag with the dress. I grabbed my workout bag and her other bag and moved into my room. We set our burdens on the dressing chair and when she turned toward me, I took her in my arms and pressed her against the wall. I untucked her shirt and put her arms above her head. I pulled the shirt up and off, revealing her unfettered breasts. Her C cup breasts were pert and natural with just a little sag and her areolas were the size of silver dollars with inch long engorged nipples. As I unbuttoned her jeans and slipped them over her hips, I took one nipple in my mouth proving they were as sensitive as they were sexy. She wiggled as I pushed the jeans down and stepped out of her three inch heels. Once they were at her knees she pulled me back up to her mouth and walked the jeans off. Naked except for her thong, she pulled off my shirt and pushed down my shorts and underwear, releasing the insistent monster inside them. As she pushed them off, she took me in her mouth pushing all the way past the back of her throat until I was completely inside her. She sucked me for about three minutes and rubbed herself through the thong until pulled her up and lifted her until she wrapped her legs around my waist. I laid her down gently, my hands and legs slowly lowering us to the bed. Her eyes locked to mine and we kissed again, eyes wide open.
"Make love to me, Alex," she said when we broke the kiss, "I've... sorry, I've never... asked that before..."
I made love to her, my hands gentle and caring, my kisses frequent and my motions slow and stimulating right up until the end. "Yes, so, beautiful," I said as I got close. She was moaning and responded.
"Now, Alex, right there, but fast and harder. I want to reach it when you do," she said.