This is a work of fiction. None of the characters are underage or any age. You don't know them, no matter how much you think you do, because they are not real people. I made them up.
What I am really looking for here is feedback. I want to know if it entertained. If it did not, I would like to know why. Was it incongruities? Was it unrealistic size? Was it that girls would never say that? I just want to know if something popped you out of the story. I'm trying to become a better writer and this kind of feedback is helpful. And please VOTE!
The ending here is somewhat abrupt. That is on purpose. I wanted to write about the start of a relationship, not the whole thing. So, as they move into something long term, I end the story. I give a summary and someday, I may write more about them. But for now, this is the end. Thanks for reading and I hope you enjoy.
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I had several hours to kill, so I started with a workout. I had gotten plenty of exercise the last forty eight hours, but I liked to do my machine rotation and focus on my lower abdomen at least twice a week. So, I went to the gym and did my machines. On my cooldown, I usually walked a slow mile, but my mind kept drifting back to Vicki. By the end of my walk I had to sit for a couple minutes to try and reduce the swelling in my shorts, but it wasn't working. I couldn't shower yet, so, I went to my locker and pulled out my phone.
"Hello?" came her voice, kind of quivering and quiet.
"Hi Victoria," I said, and, detecting something in her voice continued, "Are you okay?"
"No Alex," she said almost whispering, "can you come here?"
"Is someone there, baby?" I asked.
"No, well, I think there is someone outside," she said, "I am so scared."
"I'll be right there, Vicki," I said, "make sure everything is locked. Stay back from the windows. I will call you when I am at your door so you know it is me. Do not answer the door for anyone. Okay, baby girl?"
"Yes Alex," she said with a whimper, "Please hurry."
I didn't bother to change, I grabbed my clothes and stuffed them in my gym bag, keeping out my wallet, keys and phone. I was about ten minutes away on a Sunday morning. So, traffic would be light. I would risk it and shave a few minutes off my time with speed. I timed it through the lights, going seven miles over the speed limit and was in the university district in about six minutes. Glancing at my radio display, the clock said seven thirty when I parked outside the house next door. Sure enough, there was a man trying to see in the window. He was youngish, maybe early thirties, dressed in dark clothes and carrying a camera or phone of something similar in his hand. I took his picture a few times with my phone and even got one good shot of his face as well as his attempts to look in the windows. I opened the car door and stepped out. Most truck drivers keep a stick in their cab for testing tires. I always thought something like that was a good idea. So, I kept a small bag of tools under my seat, one of which was a long handled, ball ping hammer. I slipped it into my hand and slid the keys between my fingers on my other hand, phone in my pocket and I walked forward.
He was rediculous. The opening and closing of my car door didn't even make him look. I was only about ten yards away when I said in a loud voice, "Hey!"
He startled and turned. Seeing me so close, he panicked and turned and ran. He was fast, and I didn't even try and chase him. I watched then traded the keys for my phone and snapped a few pics of him getting into a car and one good one of the license plate. Then I walked to the door and called Vicki.
"Hi, mija," I said, "I'm outside, come let me in."
The door opened and she slid backward with it, using it as a shield. "I heard the car door and peeked outside." she said as she closed the door. After bolting it, she turned and threw herself into my arms. "Oh my god, how could I be so stupid. It was a man I met and went out with a couple times. It didn't work out for me, but he said I was his..." then she broke down crying.
I held her and comforted her. She sobbed for a while before making a visible effort to stop. I dried her tears and said, "Do you feel better, Vicki?"
"No, I don't," she said, "I feel like I got that out, but I'm scared Alex, what if he comes back?"
"We'll work it out," I said, "In the meantime, you can come stay with me. I will call the cops and report the incident. I have some photos of him peeking in your windows and his face and car."
"Oh, but, won't that, I don't know, inconvenience you?" she asked, "I don't want to be a burden on you."
I teased her a bit, "You don't think daddy wouldn't do anything for his little girl?"
"Thank you, Alex," she said, relief in her voice. Then she kissed me, "Thank you so much."
I had her gather some of her stuff like she was taking a trip for a few days. Then, looking through her closet, I saw a hot looking medium dark blue dress and some matching heels. I had her put the outfit together in a separate bag along with jewelry and toiletries. I watched her grab stockings and a garter belt as well. She put on a pair of jeans over her nightshirt which was basically a huge mens tee shirt with a picture of Darth Vader on it. She also grabbed her uniform for the diner and shoes for that as well. She looked around the place and grabbed her iPod and chargers then turned to me.