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Turning the tables - my ending to edrider73's Yo-yo Chronicles Ch.02
http://www.literotica.com/s/yo-yo-chronicles-ch-02
I don't normally do this. I like to finish incomplete stories that have been abandoned, for years, or stories that have open invitations to be completed. I request permission out of respect for the original authors, and if denied, I don't post a continuation.
edrider73's story drove me a little crazy, when the second 'chapter' had nothing to do with the first. I know it affected many others that way. I will give him credit for at least moving his second chapter out of Loving Wives into an appropriate category. These are not LW, as chapter one was categorized; these are humiliation stories, with elements of non-consent, gay male, and fetish, whose only purpose seems to be to antagonize the reader. If he didn't write so well, it probably wouldn't drive me half as crazy.
In his chapter two, the story is even more disgraceful than chapter one. The husband is forced to suck two other men's cocks, before being publicly raped. He doesn't even give the poor bastard an out. The man hates it, is injured, sore for six weeks, and he doesn't do a damn thing. He stays with his wife, while he finds out that women all over town are watching movies of his rape. The only result for him apparently, is a distaste for balloons.
Personally, I think he should have gone postal immediately. No way he sticks with the woman for one minute after her complete betrayal. The author, however, immediately reconciles. At least he makes the wife somewhat penitent, although she keeps watching the video of his total degradation.
Because of how he left them, I won't go totally BTB on the wife. She'll have to pay, but everyone else is fair game. I mention that now, in case your wondering why the wife is still alive when it's over. Contrary to some comments, I work with what the original author's written. Their intentions, frankly I don't care about, but the written portion I do my best to stay true to. So she gets off a hell of a lot easier than she should.
This is part 1 of 3 in this conclusion. All are pretty long.
Thanks to edrider73 for his generous permission to provide a resolution to his original story.
There are too damn many intriguing stories that are never completed, or left hanging with disgusting endings. If I find a story that's been abandoned for too long, I'll give you my idea of an ending. Fair warning though, I don't write about total wimps. May not be BTB, all nuclear and shit, but no voluntary cucks, or whiny simpering wimps.
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I had almost put the event out of mind, as difficult as that was. I hadn't caught Ellie watching the video since that time, and I thought that it was in our past. The great sex helped. If I never saw another balloon in my life, or another yo-yo, that was fine by me.
Our one year anniversary is when it all went to hell. We'd been married a little less than six months when the whole fiasco started. It had been almost that long after, when I caught her watching that damn video, getting excited over my humiliation, degradation and gay rape. Three weeks later, I was preparing for our anniversary, and was hiding a bag with one of her gifts in the closet.
I was surprised to see another box hidden in the back. There was an anniversary card with it. I know I shouldn't have, but I had to take a peek and see what she had bought for me.
Moments after opening the box, I was shaking with anger. At first, I'll admit I was excited, there was lingerie in the box. It was when I held it up to see what it looked like, that my first concerns started. It was huge. Way too big for my wife. Looking into the box, I saw I had uncovered a strap-on dildo, the size of which was truly frightening. There was an industrial sized jar of lube with it. Some ankle and wrist restraints, a ball-gag, and a bunch of rope. It was the soft, colored kind, not plastic, sisal, or hemp. Decorative, but effective.
The anger I'd been trying to keep buried, instantly surfaced. Is that what she wanted? Tie me up and use that strap-on, on me? Make me wear that lingerie? How the hell could she even think that?
Maybe I was wrong. Perhaps it wasn't what I thought. But if it was, things were going to change, and in a big way. Enough was enough. Good sex or not, I wasn't going to be put through hell again. Not for Ellie, not for anybody.
I took a few minutes to do some preparations, just in case, and then packed everything away like I'd found it, and hid my own gifts somewhere else.
That Friday was our anniversary. Ellie was beautiful when she came down stairs, and I saw a look of excitement I hadn't seen the like of in six months. It worried me, but I put on my best act, as if nothing was wrong. Dinner was awkward, and I tried to play the loving husband, but I was scared. I didn't like what I was thinking, or what I suspected she was planning.
She was loving, affectionate, teasing. Telling me how wonderful the night was going to be, how much she loved me. She knew how to play me, and was doing her best. I barely contained my anger, but she didn't seem to notice.
When we got home, we had a bottle of wine, and exchanged cards and gifts. I was on edge, ready to explode if things turned out the way I expected. I gave her the necklace and matching earrings, along with the card which held a coupon for a spa visit. I was surprised when she gave me an envelope. Inside was a country club membership.
"I know you've wanted to join, but didn't think we could afford it," she said. "I've been saving for the last six months, and have enough for the membership fee. I think we can afford the couple of hundred a month dues, and it'll give us an excuse to go out more often. We haven't gone out in months, and I know why. I'm sorry, I hope you still forgive me."
Surprised? I was stunned. What the hell was with the stuff in the closet?
She climbed into my lap, kissing me. "I love you, Stu. More than you could ever imagine. Thank you for marrying me."
"I love you too, Ellie," I whispered, holding back the tears. I had been wrong about her. So wrong. I knew I'd have to talk to her about that stuff, but the next day was soon enough. "It's a wonderful gift. I plan to use it a lot, with my beautiful sexy wife."
She stood, took me by the hand, and led me to our bedroom. She undressed me, then sat me on the bed, and did a sexy striptease for me. She had new fancy panties and bra on under her clothes, the hottest she'd ever worn.
"You like?" she teased, shaking her body for me.
"I love it."
Ellie climbed onto the bed, pushed me backward and gave me the hottest, nastiest blowjob she ever had. She took me down her throat for the first time, gagging, her saliva dripping from her teasing mouth. She sucked my balls, and moved lower, tonguing my ass, another first. When she took me back in her mouth, her finger slipped into my butt, teasing me while she did her best. After only a few minutes I bellowed while I ejaculated into her hot mouth, her finger pumping in and out of me.
She sucked me to completion, then opened her mouth and let my cum drip down my cock. She looked up at me, and took me all the way to the root, sucking me clean on the way back. She'd never done anything like that, and she seemed to be getting off on it. She played with my cum a little longer, then turned and straddled my face, while she went down on me again.