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A wrongful revenge retaliation - my ending to simple49's Wrongful Revenge
http://www.literotica.com/s/wrongful-revenge
Simple49's story is another in the endless chain of The Troubador's "Hildy" (RAAC) wannabe's. Stories like Blue88's Ties That Bind (RAAC), K.K's It's The Same Old Story, Charlye Ace's June Gets Even (RAAC), DamonX's Danielle's Revenge, JPB's Alana Asserts Herself, Brian Was Bad, and Jumping to Conclusions. Stories where the wife decides for some reason to get revenge on her husband, ties him up and fucks someone else, usually his worst enemy, in front of him.
Does that kind of thinking EVER work out well? Not this time.
I like finishing stories. I guess I'm a little weird. Sometimes they are stories that have been abandoned. In cases like this, it's a story where the author has invited others to continue their work, as in The Troubador's & Patricia51's tradition. That or an invitational.
When offered the opportunity, I'll give you my idea of an ending. Fair warning though, I don't write about total wimps. May not be BTB, all nuclear and shit, but no voluntary cucks, or whiny simpering wimps.
Some of you won't like my endings. That's fair enough. I'm happy to hear your reasons. This is only one author's idea of a fitting resolution. You're welcome to try your hand at writing your own. I hope you enjoy this one.
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When Bob awoke in his hospital bed, he hurt all over. His head, in particular ached, and he reached up and felt the stitches. Whatever painkillers they'd given him weren't enough.
Once his eyes focused, he saw he had visitors.
"Mr. Sims? I'm Detective Mason, and this is Detective North. We'd like to ask you a few questions."
It didn't take long to get the story from him, and Bob didn't try to pull any punches. He explained the events of the night before, from the point of waking up, until he ended up in the ER. The detectives had a few questions, which he answered quickly and honestly. He also gave them the video he'd taken from the house, while leaving. With the corroborating story from the Halls who had dropped Bob off, they had all they needed. It was late morning by the time they had the paperwork in order, and a ten minute drive brought them to the address of the victim.
Carrie heard the knocking, and doorbell ringing that just wouldn't stop. She untangled herself from the pile of bodies surrounding her, her mind still fuzzy, her thoughts focused on how thirsty, sore and worn out she was. She grabbed the shirt the giant Scandinavian had been wearing, and wore it like a robe as she staggered to the door to stop the infernal racket.
She opened the door, the sight of the man and the woman on her doorstep finally clearing the mist from her thinking.
"Mrs. Sims? Carrie Sims?" The woman asked.
"Yes?"
"We have a warrant to search your home."
Carrie stepped backward, shaking, while they walked past her, barely avoiding a naked Asian man who exited one room to enter the bathroom across the hall. They paused in the hallway, taking in the scene, before walking into her bedroom.
Carrie followed them, and almost fainted when she saw the state of the bedroom. There was blood everywhere, the bed had collapsed, the posts were broken, and the ropes that had restrained her husband were bloodied and on the floor. The remains of the broken vase were laying where she'd left them.
"Do you want to tell us what happened here?" the police woman turned and asked the stricken wife.
"He cheated on me!" she snapped. "The bastard was fucking a woman in our bed. He deserved it."
Carrie's temper was a dangerous thing, and was coming back to the forefront, in spite of the evidence of her husband's injury. Sadly, she felt no remorse.
"So you tied him up, beat him, and made him watch you have sex with another man? Or should I say men?" the male officer sneered.
Danielle Mason examined the evidence. Everything seemed to fit the husband's sad tale perfectly. She nudged the vase with her foot. "This is the vase you hit him with?"
"I had to! Don't you understand? He was fucking that skinny ex-model whore in our bed."
Danielle sighed, pulling the handcuffs off of her belt. "Carrie Sims, you are under arrest for assault and battery, unlawful restraint, and attempted murder. You have the right to remain silent . . ."
Detective North walked down the hall, opening doors, telling the occupants to get dressed and come down to the living room. He called in the situation, and gathered all the witnesses together, while making sure none of them made a run for it. This was going to be a hell of a story back at the station. He wasn't looking forward to the paperwork.
Ben North noticed one of the men was skulking his way toward the back door. Ben cut him off, and directed him back to the couch, relieving him of the tape he was attempting to hide behind his back. The man argued vehemently, proclaiming his innocence, screaming he wanted to see his lawyer. The detective sighed. It was going to be one of
those
, he just knew it.
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The interviewing room was busy most of the day. The modeling gigolos had their turn under the lights, explaining their part in the fiasco. None were even aware there was a husband involved, other than the fact that the middle-aged wife wanted revenge.
Tom Jensen on the other hand, made every effort possible to lie, even when the truth would have served him better. He lied about his initial involvement, about having sex with Carrie, about inviting the male models over, even about filming the event. Why would a man lie under such conditions? It was the kind of man he was, part of the reason his business wasn't the success that Bob's was. Tom was a liar and a scumbag. Something that wasn't lost on North and Mason.
The detectives never called him on his endless lies, letting him dig his own grave.
Sophia Jensen was brought in, and she was in tears half the time she was there, taking longer to get her story out than anyone else, even though she didn't have that much to say. It hadn't taken long for her to figure out what had happened. She'd been bombed the night before, but she did remember her husband escorting her out of the Hall's home. She remember the sexy teasing, and her husband undressing her and getting her worked up before she passed out. Now, in the aftermath, she understood her husband had taken her next door and left her in another man's bed. Why he would do that she couldn't understand. She felt hurt, betrayed, and was devastated by her part in the assault on Bob. She also remembered that he had given her the best sex she'd had in years.
The Halls were brought back in, to see if they could shed any more light on how things started. They recalled the circumstances of Tom's reappearance, asking if anyone had seen his wife. With Sophia's statement about being escorted next door by her husband, it became clearer the entire situation was a setup by Tom Jensen. The big problem was that it wasn't illegal. Despicable maybe, but not against the law.
It was late in the day when they got back to Carrie. She was over her anger, and now afraid.
"So, Mrs. Sims, you knew your husband was drunk, and you saw him leave alone, while you were 'dancing' with other men. Did you think he came back and took Mrs. Jensen back to your home for sex?"
Carrie didn't like to think about it. "I don't know. When I saw him with her, fucking in our bed, I didn't really give much thought to how he got her there."
The detective nodded. "Mr. Jensen, your husband's competitor, asked you to go over to your house with him, to find his wife. Would you care again to explain what happened when you got there?"
Carrie was exasperated, having to repeat her story once again. "I heard them first. I knew those sounds. When I turned on the light, I saw them going at it. He was screwing that slut. She started screaming, and he pulled away from her. The vase was there, on the table, and I guess I threw it at him."
"And hit him. Hard enough to knock him out."
"I didn't think it hit him that hard. I had to do something," she snapped.
"You didn't think it hit him hard? He was bleeding and unconscious. He never woke up while you planned your infidelity with the man who set you up, then you tied your husband up, and beat him while he was unconscious."
"Don't you think he deserved it? He was cheating on me! Fucking that slut in our bed! I was angry, is that any surprise?"
The other detective spoke up. "You never spoke to him? Asking him what happened? You just tied him up, gagged him with your panties, beat him black and blue, and made him watch you cheat on him?"
"I didn't need him to explain anything. I
saw
him. There was no question that he'd cheated on me. He needed to see what it was like."