TWO INCHES TOO FAR, ... A SEQUEL
By Blackheart93
I like writing sequels and alternate endings; I like dialogue and confrontation. This is a sequel to "Two Inches Too Far," by Rhein1. I felt that Rhein1's story cried out for a conclusion.
I attempted to contact Rhein1, but received no reply.
Rhein1 hasn't published anything on Literotica since 2014 so I don't know that he is still writing.
If he is, I hope he likes my follow-on story.
The Rhein1 story is about an easy-going gentle man named Jake, who had been sexually abused and humiliated earlier in the evening by his wife of 33 years and her young lover. Jake related his story to his longtime friend, Walt, in Walt's bar late in the evening. Jake thought he was going to be arrested soon because he used physical force to escape from his wife and may have hurt her.
Read Rhein1's original story first.
I appreciate the great editing efforts of Randi Black.
From Rhein1...
I stood up and stretched, trying to gauge how drunk I was, and then looked at my friend who understood my shame. "Don't worry about a cab, Walt. I'll just camp out in my car until the police pick me up. If you could call them and just tell them where I am, it would be appreciated." Turning to the door, I said over my shoulder, "Thanks for listening. I feel better than I have in months."
Onward...
I was just about out the door when Walt said, "Hold up a minute, Jake. Come back here and sit your ass down. You may have an option to being arrested."
I told Walt that I couldn't handle more drinking or I would pass out on his bar. He replied, "No more drinking for you. No more liquor at least. I'm going to make a pot of coffee for you."
"What do I need coffee for? I don't particularly want to stay awake, and I'm not going to drive."
By the time I sat down at the bar again, I could smell the coffee brewing.
"What's on your mind, Walt?" I asked, but Walt was not paying attention. He had pulled out a cigar box from under his side of the bar and was rifling through it. It was soon apparent that the box contained dozens and dozens of business cards.
"Here it is," he said as he laid a lone card on the bar and put the cigar box away.
"What do you have there, Walt? A get-out-of-jail free card?"
"Yes," he said, "that's a good guess."
Walt served me a large mug of fresh hot strong coffee and said, "drink up."
Walt left me for a few minutes to attend to some of his other customers. I picked up the business card and read it: "Thalia Starling, Attorney at Law." Further, it said, "Family and Criminal Law."
When Walt returned, he already had his cell phone in his hand. I handed the business card to him and he quickly dialed the number.
He was patient when a recorded voice told him that Thalia's office was closed and to please leave a message. However, the recording went on to provide an emergency phone number that Walt copied onto his hand and then dialed.
Apparently, Thalia answered immediately.
"Thalia, this is your personal bartender... I'm good. How are you?... Do you have a minute?... Yes, I know it's late... No, it can't wait. This is just your kind of problem."
Walt went on to give Thalia a quick and dirty version of the story that I told him. She apparently asked him whether or not he believed me. Walt told her we were very old friends. He also told her that I had terrible cuts and bruises on my wrists and ankles, wounds that will require the attention of a doctor soon.
"No, no. It happened earlier this evening, just a few hours ago."
"Okay, I'll keep him here. He was pretty blasted earlier, but I'm pouring coffee into him now."
When Walt hung up, he poured me a fresh cup of coffee and said, "She'll be here in thirty minutes."
I asked him, "Just who is Thalia Starling?"
"I call her a street lawyer. She is a friend of those who have no friends. When she's on your side, she is like a mama bear protecting her cubs. When she's not on your side, she will eviscerate you like a shark."
Walt pointed out an empty booth towards the back of the lounge and suggested I sit there and wait for Thalia's arrival. After I sat down, he put a pot of coffee on the table in front of me.
I kept my eye on the entrance to the bar in anticipation of seeing Thalia Starling as soon as she showed. For some reason, I imagined a big woman in a dark suit carrying a briefcase. That wasn't what walked through the door.
She was a slender woman of medium height, maybe 5 feet 4 inches tall. She had long dark brown hair that was tied up into a ponytail. Although she wore no makeup, she had an attractive face. She was wearing loose-fitting jeans, a well-worn baggy sweatshirt and flat-heeled shoes. I chuckled to myself because it looked like she was probably comfortably watching TV when she received Walt's call. Instead of a briefcase, she had a backpack slung over her shoulder. She walked with a very confident stride.
The first thing she did was to go to the bar to greet Walt. They both leaned across the counter to give a hug to each other. After another minute, Walt motioned to me in the booth and Thalia looked in my direction.
As she approached the booth, I stood up to meet her. She walked straight up to me and offered me her hand to shake. She had a firm grip, but made no attempt to show me how strong she was.
"Jake, I'm Thalia. I'm pleased to meet you. Walt thinks you have some legal problems that I might be able to help you with."
I replied, "I'm happy to meet you, too. Walt seems to think a lot of you. And you are right, I have some serious problems and I don't know what to do to help myself."
Getting directly to the point, Thalia responded, "Let's sit down. I want you to tell me everything that's happened to you. Start at the beginning and don't leave anything out."
As she was talking, she took out a voice recorder from her backpack, followed by a legal-sized tablet of lined yellow paper.
I forewarned her that some of what I had to say was very embarrassing and humiliating to me. I was not comfortable talking to her about it. It was hard enough describing the event to my old friend, Walt. It is even more difficult talking with a stranger.
Thalia had dealt with reluctant witnesses many times in her career. She reassured me that she was not judgmental and that everything I had to say would be held in the strictest confidence. Her manner calmed me and erased my apprehensions. Over the next hour, I told her my story.