Time and other events in my life have been a constraint on me completing any stories lately, but I just stumbled on this one that I started some time ago, but never got very far with. Then lo and behold, an ending crept up behind me and took me completely by surprise.
No depth, no character development, no sex whatsoever, no proper start and an ending that will not satisfy all of you.
But I'm happy with it, and hope that most of you will glean some pleasure from it.
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"Oh my God Mike," my lovely girl friend Debbie declared, raising her hand to her mouth in surprise. "You surprised me. I really wasn't expecting that."
"We've been going out for over a year now Debbie," I reminded her. "We get on so well and everything."
"I know Mike," she mumbled back. "But marriage! I just wasn't expecting you to ask me. Not yet anyway."
"No time like the present," I pushed her, a bit shocked that she hadn't leapt into my arms when I'd asked her to marry me a few moments before, expecting her to accept my offer with enthusiasm."
"I know Mike," she repeated thoughtfully, chewing on her fingernail, a bad habit that we both thought she had broken some time ago. "It's just that ......"
"Just what?" I demanded when her voice faded away, my own joyous mood beginning to crumble. "We've been living together for six months and hardly had a single argument. You tell me how much you love me five times a week."
"I do Mike. I do. I love you so much it hurts sometimes."
"Then what's the problem sweetheart?"
"I just don't know if I'm ready yet," Debbie replied, almost sobbed. "I do love you but I'm not sure I'm ready to make that commitment."
"It's a big step Debbie," I found myself encouraging her, my confidence returning once I'd discovered her hesitation was due to nervousness, rather than any doubts about me. "But we're in love. We suit one another. We both like kids. Both our parents would certainly approve. What could be more appropriate than us making it official?"
"The commitment," she replied simply, a single tear welling up in her eye.
"If we both love one another how can it be so hard to make the commitment to grow old with one another?"
"No trouble at all with that Mike," Debbie replied, her smile, uncertain though it was, the first that I'd seen since I'd popped the question. "I'd really like that."
"Then what's the problem?" I asked again, relaxing now that she was getting over the initial surprise and coming round to the idea of us getting hitched."
"That's not that commitment I'm talking about Mike," Debbie whispered.
"What?"
"I said spending the rest of my life with you is not the problem Mike."
"Then what is?" I asked, more confused than ever.
"Exclusivity Mike," Debbie continued in little more than a whisper.
"I don't understand."
"I'm guessing that if we married, then you'd expect me to commit to being faithful to you Mike, and I'm not sure I can do that. Not yet anyway. I'm simply not ready for a one man one woman relationship."
Gulp!
"You do understand don't you honey?" Debbie asked when I found myself unable to respond to her last statement, shocked into silence by the implications of what she'd just said.
"Faithful?" Was all that I could manage to stutter.
"Yes. You know. No other boyfriends or anything," she shocked me with.