All characters engaging in sexual activities are 18 years of age or older.
Any grammar or spelling mistakes my own.
I would like to thank StoryTLR for permission to write an alternative ending to his story.
The link below takes you to the original story.
My ending is different, and I hope you enjoy it.
Tom, We Need to Have a Talk - Loving Wives - Literotica.com
"Do you want my advice?"
"Sure."
"Go back to your wife. You obviously love her, and she doesn't have a prayer in hell of dating a man while she is married to you. Talk to her and find out what's going on in her head and why she's not happy. Now are you going to buy me that drink?"
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"Hell no. You just tried to defend her and give me some bullshit excuses for my wife to be a cheating slut. YOU CAN TAKE YOUR FEMINIST BULLSHIT AND GO SIT ON A RUSTY FUCKING FISHING KNIFE!" Tom ended up yelling.
The bartender ushered the woman away from Tom and down to the other end of the bar. The bartender walked back down to Tom.
"I can't have you yelling at my customers again, you understand. I overheard your story and I'm sorry. The next beer is on me OK.
"Thanks." Tom said as he nodded.
He sat there nursing his beer and wondering how in the hell this all went to shit. Tom had just motioned to the bartender to bring him another beer, when his wife's brother Billy walked in.
"Oh for fucks sake." Tom said, as the bartender sit the bottle down.
"Is that guy gonna cause you any trouble?" he asked Tom.
"I hope not. Have the phone close by, just in case." Tom replied.
The bartender turned around towards Billy as he was walking towards Tom.
"I'll put three SIGs in your chest if you start any trouble, you understand me?" the bartender said pointing to Billy.
"Jesus Christ, I just came in here to talk to my brother-in-law, calm the hell down." Bill replied with his hands up.
"He's put up with enough shit for the day."
"Can I at least have a beer then?" Bill asked the bartender putting his hands down.
"Depends on what you got to say."
"It's none of your business old man." Bill said as he sat down next to Tom.
"What do you want Bill?" Tom asked.
"For my sister to not be a dumbass, but I think that might be asking too much right now."
"So I take it she told you the truth."
"Yeah. Karen and I were at mom and dad's when Kim came in crying."
That was when the bartender set an Appletini down in front of Bill with a smile on his face. Tom started laughing.
"What the fuck is this! I'm on his side old man."
"Oh. Well in that case." the bartender said, and he brought a bottle of Coors out from underneath the bar and set it front of him.
"At least we know you're not a pussy now." he said as he picked up the Appletini and walked away.
"What the fuck is that guys' problem?" Bill asked Tom.
"He heard me tell that woman down there what happened tonight." Tom replied pointing to the woman that he had yelled at.
They both laughed when they saw her drinking the Appletini.
"Anyway, she came in crying. Mom went over and held her while she cried. When she finally calmed down enough to talk so we could understand her, she told us about how she was going on a date with another man, and that you'd beaten her date up and left without your wedding ring."
"Accurate so far." Tom cut in.
"Mom just stared at her in shock. Dad and I were laughing, and Karen just told her that she was a moron. Kim started talking about how Laura said it would spice things up and that she deserved to have some fun without a husband for a night, and that's when Karen stood up and lit into her about what a piece of shit Laura is."
"She's not wrong there." Tom said taking a drink.
"No she certainly isn't." Bill replied, then continued. "That she'd probably just ruined the best thing to ever happen to her. They started jawing back and forth in that high pitch squeal women get when they start, so I couldn't understand it. The next thing we know, Kim throws her shoe at Karen."
"Seriously, her shoe?" the bartender asked out of nowhere.
"Jesus Christ!" Bill said flinching in surprise. "You're like Mr. Roper from Three's Company."
Tom leaned back a little bit.
"You know what, he does look a bit like Norman Fell."
"Hey now, Mr. Roper was key to that shows success."
All three of them laughed for a few seconds and Bill continued.
"Like I was saying, Kim threw her shoe at Karen. Before dad or I could get up from our seats, she was on top of Kim punching her."
The bartender slapped the bar and laughed out loud.
"You married a firecracker son." he said.
"Don't you have other customers to attend to?" Bill asked.
"Oh yeah...." the bartender replied.
"Trixie, get out." he told the woman at the end of the bar.
Tom and Bill watched as she smacked her lips together and gathered her purse.
"Fine, I was just gonna leave anyway." she replied and walked out the door.
Tom and Bill looked at the bartender.
"OK, go on." he told Bill.
Both Tom and Bill chuckled and took a drink of their beers.
"Between hearing the two of them yelling things like, "dumb slut" and "get off of me", dad and I finally got them apart. Mom was shouting at both of them, when Kim ran into the bathroom. Karen had a scratch on her head from Kim's nails."
"What about Kim?" Tom asked.
"Pretty sure she's at least got a broken nose. There was a nice little puddle on the sofa. Mom went to the hospital with her, and Dad sent me to find you."
"Wooooooowee son. Sounds like if you piss her off, I might have to really serve you an Appletini."
Some more laughter filled the air, as Bill replied.
"I've learned to pick my battles with her old man."
"How long ago did all of that happen?" Tom asked.
Bill looked at his watch, "About two hours ago now."
"Well, I should probably at least go check on her." Tom said, then chugged the rest of his beer.
As he stood up from his stool, Karen came through the door of the bar and started walking towards them smiling.
The bartender threw his hands up in the air.
"Well look who it is. Layla Ali is here."
Tom and Bill started laughing once again. Karen stopped dead in her tracks.
"Who is that?" she asked.
"Want a beer champ?" the bartender asked.
"No thanks, I'm just here to get my husband and brother-in-law."
"Well, I tell you what young lady. The next time you two kids have a date night, you come on back and your meal is on the house."
"Awesome!" Bill said as he slapped his hand on the bar.
"Well, that is so sweet of you, thank you! What's your name?" Karen asked as she extended her hand over the bar.
"The name is Charles Stevens, but everyone calls me Charlie" he replied shaking it.
"Nice to meet you Charlie. I'll happily take you up on your offer. I could certainly use a night out after tonight.
"So any update on my lovely fucking wife?" Tom asked, looking at Karen.
"She's got a broken nose. Mom took her back to the house to get some clothes then to their house. They are not happy with her at all." she replied to Tom.
"I'm sure they aren't." Tom said.
"Are you good to drive?" Bill asked.
"Yeah, I just had three or four."
"Well, I'll follow behind the both of you and make sure you get home." Karen said to both Tom and Bill.
Ten minutes later, Tom pulled into his driveway. Followed by Bill and Karen. When they got inside, Tom and Bill went and sat at the kitchen table. Karen disappeared down the hallway.
"So, what are you going to do?" Bill asked breaking the silence.
"Don't know for sure. Probably file for divorce. She tried to get me to accept her cheating on me. She's god damn lucky; I didn't split her shit too." Tom replied.
"I know you're mad Tom, but if you hit my sister, then we'll be dancing."
"No reason for him to hit her, I'll happily do it for him." Karen said sitting down.
"Where'd you go?" Bill asked his wife.
"I went and checked the bedroom. She took a couples days' worth of clothes, so she'll be back."
"I'll start packing the rest of her shit tomorrow." Tom said, crossing his arms.
"No reason to do that Tom. Maybe she'll understand how....." was all she got out, when they heard the front door open and close.
In walked Kim and Todd's father Frank. He walked over and sat down at the kitchen table with everyone.
"Well, Kim and Laura just had a fight at the house a bit ago. She told Laura to never talk to her again."
"Well it's about time. We've all told her that Laura is a horrible person." Tom said.