THE THREE MUSKETEERS 2.0
A continuation of February Sucks in Greenville.
PREAMBLE RAMBLE; This takes place around 2 years after February Sucks, 4 years after Hal's Story Part 2. As I never planned on writing this or the February story there may be some continuity issues as far as the kids ages and Hal's business growth go. I tried to make it work. Many of the characters have appeared in both stories.
One comment made me think how the events affected the children. I haven't read all the FS stories so I don't know if anyone else have done it. I tried to convey that in this story. It was hard to think like a 10/12 year old White girl. I'm not a woman, I'm a 61 year old Black man. And honestly who knows how a woman thinks no matter what age or color they are.
This story is told from several characters perspectives so parts are repeated from their point of view. This will probably irritate some people.
This story hopefully ties up a lot of loose ends that people questioned. It might being up more questions.
Another question is this Greenville in North or South Carolina. Here's the thing. Its in North Carolina but its not the actual Greenville. I lived in Gastonia which is about 10 minutes or 90 minutes outside of Charlotte depending on when you drive in I85. Those who know know. Why I started with Greenville and not Gastonia. Greenville sounded more American. And I never thought I would be 25 plus stories into this. Most if not all places you can Google. I have visited Greenville NC, nice town if you like Purple and Yellow.
I read comments up to a certain level. Anything over twenty I stop because its usually the same thing over and over. Because they kind of repeat. I take what people write into consideration. I worried about ratings when I first started writing. I checked and have seen the progression of improvement over time. My first story is my lowest rated which ishould be expected. Romance stories rate higher then Loving Wives.
I do appreciate constructive criticism. Especially those that actually point out where I made a mistake (usually grammar) instead of just saying, you suck and need an editor.
I've never been a writer, always a talker. I'm a better story teller than writer. I've spoken in front of thousands of people. Talked to some very important during my years in the fire service. Putting words on the page is something I've thought about. Until I got sick. If it wasn't for doing this I don't know where I would be mentally. Its given me something to look forward to each morning. So, while I want people to enjoy my stories, I do them for selfish reasons, for myself.
Hope you enjoy the story.
TIA MARIA
"Tรญa Marรญa, necesitamos tu ayuda pero puede que no quieras hacerlo." (
Aunt Maria, We need your help but you might not want to do it.)
"What would you say that for Lita?" I responded to my niece. I love when they try to speak Spanish. She is almost fluent now. She wasn't my niece by birth but by love. Her, her sister Kira, her best friend Heidi and new sister Madison. Among so many other kids of coworkers who have taken to calling me Aunt. But those four are as tight as four people can be and not be related by blood. I know people call them the Three Musketeers 2.0. 2.0 because they call me, Jennifer, Kim and Ingrid the Three Musketeers also.
These people are my family. Jose and I have never been able to have kids. For some reason all the kids have gravitated towards me and Jose. Our house would be full of girls all weekend in the summer. I got calls when they had problems they didn't want to tell their parents. And being an only child I have those three ladies who have become closer than sisters. They didn't have to choose me as a hermana/amiga (
sister/friend)
but they did. I am truly blessed.
Back to what Lita wanted. "Its Madison's mom Tia, She's worried about her mother. She's been really lonely. She knows she messed up her marriage but all she does is work and stay home. She never goes out and is always sad. Its been affecting Madison and Sean for a while now. It's been two years and nothing has changed."
Madison's Dad married Lita and Kira's Mom, Kim who became one of my best friends, almost two years ago. She was cheating with a pro football player. The separation and divorce got ugly for a while. Zan, Madison's father, was violently beat up. They weren't able to prove it but everyone believed her lover had something to do with it. Zan had sued him for Alienation of Affection and ended up winning in the end. Zan works in our planning department as an architect and is a really nice guy.
I haven't had much contact with Olivia, Madison's mom. I do know Zan is a very active father. He has the kids every weekend and for most of the summer every year.
ยฟQuรฉ quieres que haga nena? (
What do you want me to do baby girl
)
"What you do best. Help us make a match. We think if she has someone in her life things will get better for her, Madison and Sean. There is a guy that works with music program that Heidi's mom runs that would be prefect for her. They are about the same age. He's a nice looking guy. Just moved into the area six months ago."
Just then the door burst open revealing the other Musketeers. Kira, Heidi and Madison. The three oldest would be starting their sophomore year in high school. Its hard to believe they were so young when we first met. Madison is a sixth grade herself. I still remember her trailing after the girls like a star struck fan. They could so no wrong by her. She had the big sisters she never knew she needed and they had the little sister they wanted. They came into each others lives at the right time. Madison really needed them after the divorce.