THE THREE MUSKETEERS 2.0
A continuation of February Sucks in Greenville.
PREAMBLE RAMBLE; This takes place around 2 years after February Sucks, 4 years after Hal's Story Part 2. As I never planned on writing this or the February story there may be some continuity issues as far as the kids ages and Hal's business growth go. I tried to make it work. Many of the characters have appeared in both stories.
One comment made me think how the events affected the children. I haven't read all the FS stories so I don't know if anyone else have done it. I tried to convey that in this story. It was hard to think like a 10/12 year old White girl. I'm not a woman, I'm a 61 year old Black man. And honestly who knows how a woman thinks no matter what age or color they are.
This story is told from several characters perspectives so parts are repeated from their point of view. This will probably irritate some people.
This story hopefully ties up a lot of loose ends that people questioned. It might being up more questions.
Another question is this Greenville in North or South Carolina. Here's the thing. Its in North Carolina but its not the actual Greenville. I lived in Gastonia which is about 10 minutes or 90 minutes outside of Charlotte depending on when you drive in I85. Those who know know. Why I started with Greenville and not Gastonia. Greenville sounded more American. And I never thought I would be 25 plus stories into this. Most if not all places you can Google. I have visited Greenville NC, nice town if you like Purple and Yellow.
I read comments up to a certain level. Anything over twenty I stop because its usually the same thing over and over. Because they kind of repeat. I take what people write into consideration. I worried about ratings when I first started writing. I checked and have seen the progression of improvement over time. My first story is my lowest rated which ishould be expected. Romance stories rate higher then Loving Wives.
I do appreciate constructive criticism. Especially those that actually point out where I made a mistake (usually grammar) instead of just saying, you suck and need an editor.
I've never been a writer, always a talker. I'm a better story teller than writer. I've spoken in front of thousands of people. Talked to some very important during my years in the fire service. Putting words on the page is something I've thought about. Until I got sick. If it wasn't for doing this I don't know where I would be mentally. Its given me something to look forward to each morning. So, while I want people to enjoy my stories, I do them for selfish reasons, for myself.
Hope you enjoy the story.
TIA MARIA
"TÃa MarÃa, necesitamos tu ayuda pero puede que no quieras hacerlo." (
Aunt Maria, We need your help but you might not want to do it.)
"What would you say that for Lita?" I responded to my niece. I love when they try to speak Spanish. She is almost fluent now. She wasn't my niece by birth but by love. Her, her sister Kira, her best friend Heidi and new sister Madison. Among so many other kids of coworkers who have taken to calling me Aunt. But those four are as tight as four people can be and not be related by blood. I know people call them the Three Musketeers 2.0. 2.0 because they call me, Jennifer, Kim and Ingrid the Three Musketeers also.
These people are my family. Jose and I have never been able to have kids. For some reason all the kids have gravitated towards me and Jose. Our house would be full of girls all weekend in the summer. I got calls when they had problems they didn't want to tell their parents. And being an only child I have those three ladies who have become closer than sisters. They didn't have to choose me as a hermana/amiga (
sister/friend)
but they did. I am truly blessed.
Back to what Lita wanted. "Its Madison's mom Tia, She's worried about her mother. She's been really lonely. She knows she messed up her marriage but all she does is work and stay home. She never goes out and is always sad. Its been affecting Madison and Sean for a while now. It's been two years and nothing has changed."
Madison's Dad married Lita and Kira's Mom, Kim who became one of my best friends, almost two years ago. She was cheating with a pro football player. The separation and divorce got ugly for a while. Zan, Madison's father, was violently beat up. They weren't able to prove it but everyone believed her lover had something to do with it. Zan had sued him for Alienation of Affection and ended up winning in the end. Zan works in our planning department as an architect and is a really nice guy.
I haven't had much contact with Olivia, Madison's mom. I do know Zan is a very active father. He has the kids every weekend and for most of the summer every year.
¿Qué quieres que haga nena? (
What do you want me to do baby girl
)
"What you do best. Help us make a match. We think if she has someone in her life things will get better for her, Madison and Sean. There is a guy that works with music program that Heidi's mom runs that would be prefect for her. They are about the same age. He's a nice looking guy. Just moved into the area six months ago."
Just then the door burst open revealing the other Musketeers. Kira, Heidi and Madison. The three oldest would be starting their sophomore year in high school. Its hard to believe they were so young when we first met. Madison is a sixth grade herself. I still remember her trailing after the girls like a star struck fan. They could so no wrong by her. She had the big sisters she never knew she needed and they had the little sister they wanted. They came into each others lives at the right time. Madison really needed them after the divorce.
"Did you ask her?" Kira, Lita's sister asked expectantly.
"¿Nos podrÃas ayudar tÃa, por favor?" (
Will you help us out aunty, please will you.)
Madison says in very poor Spanish but she tries so hard its cute. How can you say no.
"Of course I asked, what do you think I was just doing. I'm waiting for her to say yes" Lita says.
"What makes you think I'm going to say yes? I have a business to help run ya know. I'm a very busy person. Yes, very important busy person." I say trying not to laugh.
"Tia Maria, you sit back and boss other people around who do the real work. How hard can that be?" Heidi said with a too hearty laugh that the others soon join in.
"Oh really little girl. I make sure your father does even less then me. So what makes you think this guy, whats his name, is good for Maddie's mom? Besides being cute of course."
"Mr. Gregg, He's a really nice guy, He plays the piano and kids love to take his classes. He's never been married and doesn't have any kids. From what other people say he doesn't go out to clubs or drink alcohol. He moved here from Colorado and doesn't know a lot of people." Heidi explains. "Mom speaks very highly of him.
"Okay, he seems like a nice guy. The key to match making is having something in common that can bring each other together. For most of the couples we've matched its always been at the barbecues, like you did with Heidi's mom and dad. (We don't use stepfather when talking about Hal and Heidi) If you can arrange a blind date that might work. But they both have to be open to dating. It doesn't sound like Olivia has any interest in that, unless there is something I don't know. Would she be interested in that Madison?"
Madison looked thoughtful for a 12 year old. Like it was the most important thing in the world. Maybe for her it was. I knew she loved her mother obviously. She also loved Kim, she called her M2 for Mom 2. So far Kim and Olivia got along as far as I heard. And I hear everything. "I don't know. Its not something we really talk about."
"So the introduction is the key huh?' Kira said. 'How about we get Sean to say he wants to take drum lesson at the music school. Get his mom to take him on a tour and accidentally meet Mr. Gregg."
"That could work except how do you get them to talk to each other? What if he's busy? He doesn't teach drums so it might feel like a to obvious set up. There's a lot that could go wrong. I recommend you talk to your mom Madison. See how she would feel about dating. Even let her know you know a nice guy she may like."
I could see all four pondering how to get this done. Finally Madison said she would talk to her mom and see where her head was at. The girls fled out the office like a herd of buffalo saying bye to everyone in the office. It gave me a chance to go back and actually do my job.