Author's note
It appears that my last chapter didn't quite hit the mark. While it brought kidnapping, excitement, and suspense, it seems to have divided opinions among you - some loved it, others not so much. The comments I've received so far have been a mix of "nice" and "ridiculous."
Taking these critiques to heart, I'm determined to bring this story to a satisfying conclusion as best I can with this last installment and an insightful epilogue. My hope is that I've managed to entertain you throughout this journey and that you'll consider delving into more of my writing in the future.
I extend my heartfelt gratitude to those who have supported me along this creative path. As a writer, I am constantly striving to improve, and I recognize that writing is both a challenging and deeply rewarding endeavor. To anyone who's ever contemplated putting pen to paper (or fingers to keyboard), I encourage you to give it a try -- the experience is truly enriching.
I've even toyed with the idea of crafting an alternative ending or welcoming contributions from others. If you have any ideas or suggestions, please share them with me. Your feedback is invaluable to any author, and I cannot stress enough how important it is in shaping the narrative.
Thank you, from the bottom of my heart, for your involvement and support.
Chapter 13: Love Lost Forever
Love lost Forever
In silence, lost, without your music's grace,
My song unheard, I wandered in a daze,
I pondered where the cosmos finds its space,
And what awaits at time's final phase.
An unopened message in a bottle, I became,
Adrift upon an endless, boundless sea,
My essence, silt within the water's frame,
My lips with tears of rue, now set them free.
Once selfish, now humbled to meet my fate,
To turn the clock and find my way to you,
Oh, do not perish, love, it's not too late,
Return to me, let love be born anew.
In every moment's grace, our love shall soar,
Together, hand in hand, forevermore.
The sight of my old house, a relic of my childhood, conjured memories that felt like wisps of a distant dream. It was a small, quaint house, frozen in the timeless charm of 1960s Ranch architecture. The front steps beckoned me toward a split-level first floor, to the left were bay windows and there, a living room with wide-open curtains allowed me to peer inside. My father sat in an easy chair, engrossed in a newspaper, while the world beyond blurred into a surreal haze.
As I approached, a delicate white picket fence magically encircled the front yard, and the gate creaked open with an ethereal whisper. With each step, the boundaries between reality and reverie blurred, until I stood at the front door, where my mother, who no longer existed in the waking world, suddenly appeared to welcome me, her presence evoking a sense of wonder and nostalgia that only dreams can weave.
"honey, oh, Anney it is so good to see you dear. Come in, your sister cannot make it, but your husband is here." She said, giving me a hug and a squeeze.
"Mother, Robert is here? How can you know him? You and daddy were long gone before I even knew Robert? "I asked incredulously.
"Oh, don't be silly Anney, we invited him for dinner. Now that you're about to start a family we want you two to come over more."
"Oh, Mom, how do you know we are starting a family? "I said, smiling.
She took both of my hands and hers, and looked me in the eyes. "Mothers know these things, dear," she responded.
As I entered the house with my mother, the scent of a freshly simmering Irish stew engulfed me, wrapping me in its savory embrace. There, in the corner, I spotted my father, reclining in his chair, a serene smile gracing his face. As I stepped further inside, he set down his newspaper, his eyes sparkling with excitement.
"Honey, come here, and let me look at you. You look beautiful." He said.
"Yes, daddy, I had an accident, and it was necessary to do plastic surgery, and this is how it came out." I said.
"Well, honey, I'm glad they finally fixed your jaw. I always thought you looked beautiful to me. Give me a hug" he said, holding his hands out
I embraced him to give him a hug. Tears came to my eyes as I remembered how much my father loved me. I missed him so much.
"Oh, daddy, I really miss having you with me, and hearing your voice and all your sage advice when things go bad.." I said, teary-eyed stifling strong emotions to cry.
"Now Anney, you know that you and your sister have never lost me. I have always been here with you and your sister. He said in the gentle voice caressing my hair.