The Portrait
The Sequel
This is my attempt to add to Cindy'sBob's excellent story, "The Portrait." It is probably my favorite story on the entire site. I don't know why, exactly, except that I love the characters, love the way Leanne changed, and found her conversion incredibly exciting. My only quibble with it was that it needed more chapters. I've resigned myself to the fact that he isn't inclined to provide one, so, with his permission, I have tried my hand at a further chapter of Leanne's descent into slutdom. After reading his story numerous times I discovered that he was never specific about their children, nor did he ever reveal Mr. Ellison's first name. I have provided specifics in both instances, no particular reason for my choices, just what I felt like.
This is my first attempt at erotic writing. I know it is not worthy of his wonderful story, but I've done the best I could. I welcome comments and hope I can bear up under the burden of criticism.
Two further disclaimers: Much of this is probably illogical or, even, impossible. It takes place in my universe where such things can happen. Comments attempting to inject reality of planet earth into my universe will be futile. In addition, if you hate stories where the husband gets excited seeing his wife fucked by other men, you will hate this.
I hope you enjoy it!
Time went by. A couple months on I hadn't noticed any more bruises or anything to think that things were continuing like that.
One night, as we were getting ready for bed, I noticed that she was wearing a particularly heavy nightgown. Since I was in a rather frisky mood that night, I suggested something a bit frillier.
"No," she said, "I'm kind of chilly tonight."
"Nonsense, I'll keep you warm."
I grabbed her, playfully, thinking we could tussle over the nightgown for a little foreplay. Instead, I suddenly found myself being attacked by a woman, seemingly fighting for her honor against the world's most dangerous rapist, fighting, scratching, clawing at me in desperation.
I quickly stepped back and looked at her, alarmed at her ferocity. Breathing as though she had run five miles, she looked wildly at me, and then became somewhat sheepish as she saw the shock on my face.
"I'm sorry, I just don't feel like it tonight," she murmured.
A cold wave swept over me, and I starred at her as she slowly lowered her eyes to the floor. Slowly realization dawned on me. Blocking her so she couldn't possibly leave the bathroom, I said; "Leanne, I want to see your body."
"No, let's just forget it, I'll make it up to you tomorrow or the next day."
"Leanne," I said, "Do you desire to remain married to me?"
Her eyes snapped up to me abruptly, wide with shock and worry.
"Of course, how can you ask me such a thing," she said in a trembling voice.
"If that's so," I said, "Then I want to see you naked right now. I've noticed bruises on your face or neck a couple of times over the last few months, and I've never said anything because our life has been so good otherwise, that I thought your secrets, and I'm assuming you have some, should remain yours. However, when you attack me like that just because I want to love you, as we've done hundreds of times, something is going on that I can't just dismiss. Show me what it is you're hiding, NOW"
The last shouted into her face from a couple inches.
I could see the tears starting to well up in her eyes, as she looked up at me, then down to the floor again.
"it's really nothing that horrible," she murmured, "I just have a bruise fr -- from slipping against the washer today. I just didn't want you to get all excited about it. Can't we just forget it?"
"No, we can't, show me."
Slowly, reluctantly, she started lowering the neckline of the nightgown. She slipped her left arm out and lowered that side until it revealed the top of her left breast, on which I saw a dark bruise about the size of a thumb print, which was not lost on me.
"All the way down," I said, "down to your waist, NOW."
She recoiled, again, and slowly slipped the other arm out, holding the garment over her breasts.
"Please promise you won't be angry," she whined.
"I won't be angry at you," I said, "but if this is an example of your "slip" we're going to have to have a long, serious talk, now show me!"
She lowered the gown to her waist, and stood, face down, fingers nervously clutching and re-clutching the material of the garment.
I gasped in shock and for a minute thought I was going to black out as I looked at her body, naked from the waist up. Her beautiful breasts, that I had fondled and played with for our entire married life, were a mass of bruises and bite marks, more than I could quickly count. In addition, she had a band-aid clumsily stuck over her right nipple. Grabbing the band-aid and pulling it off, I saw another bite mark, spreading over her areole and nipple where the skin had just been slightly broken. Not enough to be a serious wound but enough to make me see red.