Hi Everyone,
This one has been a long time in the making as it was one of the first stories I started. It uses a tired old plot device but I hope you forgive me. It has four chapters which were all submitted at once. I'll leave any further comment until the end of chapter four.
Thanks to Captain's Siren for the initial editing many moons ago and to Favored for polishing it after I'd pulled it apart and had another go.
Let me know what you think!
Cheers
CharlieB4
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I was waiting outside the court building, my solicitor had not arrived yet. The sun was shining, surprisingly warm for autumn. The wind was from the northwest, but only a zephyr. Other people stood in loose bunches around the entrance to the building, eyeing each other suspiciously.
A hire car pulled up to the curb in front of where I was standing. An immaculately dressed woman got out clutching a designer bag that matched her shoes, my soon to be ex-wife. With her was a tall, fat Frenchman with a shock of dark hair that seemed to stick out in all directions, her new partner. He was followed out of the car by her legal team; a queen's counsel, his associate, and a briefing solicitor. They didn't acknowledge my presence as they strode in through the doors, finding something more interesting to look at in the opposite direction.
My solicitor finally arrived just before our mediation was supposed to start. He waddled up the street towards me, apologizing as he got closer.
"Sorry, Jeff, parking's a real bitch around here!" He looked me up and down, "When I said dress down, I didn't mean quite that far down."
I looked down at myself, a Ralph Lauren shirt, pair of Levi's and RM Williams boots. I didn't think I looked too bad. Looking back at him, I took in the rumpled suit, the white shirt bulging over his pants, buttons straining to contain his girth. A stained tie hung askew around his neck which was flushed red like his face from the exertion of walking up the street.
"At least my clothes are clean and they fit me, Brian!" I shot back, poking my finger into his pudgy belly.
He laughed, "TouchΓ©, I see you still have the sharp tongue that won us so many debates back at school."
We shook hands warmly, then he pointed towards the door.
"Are you ready for this?"
"I'm not looking forward to it, but I'm ready," I replied.
"You know your offering them too much, it's no way to start a negotiation!"
"Let's just see how it pans out," I said as I walked through the doors.
* * * * * * * * * * * *
14 months earlier
I sat in the office on a Sunday afternoon going over our financial situation. It wasn't good. We weren't broke, the debt wasn't over my head but it was lapping at my chin. I was 49 and running my own accountancy firm that was doing well in a large country town. The problem was my personal accounts were being drained faster than I could shovel the money in there. A wife obsessed with appearances meant our three daughters had to go to the best private schools and the best universities. When the last one had been finishing her studies I was looking forward to a slowdown in the spending, but then the weddings had started.
I guess I can't complain too loudly, because I'd enjoyed the graduations and walking my beautiful daughters down the aisle. As I have already said, we were not destitute but I would be working well into my seventies to get my debts covered and enough put aside to retire. The last wedding had been the biggest, I had to re-mortgage our house to cover it, and so if anything went wrong with the property market or my business, I was fucked.
It had started to affect my health. I wasn't sleeping - I would wake soon after I went to bed and toss and turn with the figures rolling around in my head. I'd lost weight, my blood pressure was up, and my GP was worried about my prostate being slightly enlarged. It was all getting me down.
I left the office and headed for home. As I headed up the drive, I wondered whether Rachel would contemplate selling our house and moving into an apartment. We were "empty-nesters" now. We didn't need six bedrooms and five bathrooms. I walked into the side entrance next to the garage, calling out to let Rachel know I was home. I found her on the deck off the kitchen, sitting in the sun with a glass of wine.
"Grab a beer and come and join me."
"Isn't it a bit cold out there?"
"Nonsense! You spend too much time in the office, you need some fresh air."
I got a glass of water and went out to sit with her.
"Where is your beer?" she asked, looking up from the magazine she was reading.
"Doctor said I should ease up on alcohol till I get my blood pressure checked again next week."
"Surely one won't hurt!"
"It is only 3 pm, I might save my one beer for later," I snapped.
"No need to get cranky. I think you need a holiday."
"Yeah right." I stood and went to the rail around the deck, looking out into the garden.
"It says here that with the downturn in Europe you can pick up a villa in the south of France for next to nothing." Rachel said pointing an article in the magazine she was reading.
"Well, unless they are giving them away with airfares and food included we are not going."
"Marjorie from the hair salon is going on a cruise around the Greek islands for six weeks."
'So that's what this was all about,' I thought, but stayed silent.
Rachel continued, "She is only a hairdresser, and her husband mows lawns for a living. If they can afford it, why can't we?"