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Actions without thought = disaster - my ending to kgardner's The Cheating Bride (7/2/11)
http://www.literotica.com/s/the-cheating-bride
A simple story. She's about to tie the knot. Her ex-boyfriend walks in as she's putting on her wedding dress. She blows him, she fucks him, and rushes out the door, fixing her dress, to get married. Brilliant.
A simple ending, not unlike another. Short & sweet.
There are too damn many intriguing stories that are never completed, or left hanging with disgusting endings. If I find a story that's been abandoned for too long, I'll give you my idea of an ending. Fair warning though, I don't write about total wimps. May not be BTB, all nuclear and shit, but no voluntary cucks, or whiny simpering wimps.
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" . . . man and wife. You may kiss the bride."
The minister's voice cleared through the fog of delicious after-sex that had enveloped me. I smiled and accepted my fiance's kiss. It wasn't any little peck either. He went for my tonsils. At least he did for a few seconds, before he suddenly jerked away.
"Karen? Care to explain to me why your mouth tastes like cum?" he asked softly.
I'll admit it. I was stunned. I was having difficulty coming up with an answer.
He leaned forward and smelled me. I could feel the blood rushing to my head. "And while you're at it, why do you stink of sex?" He was a little louder that time. Too loud, in my opinion.
The minister leaned forward. "Please sir, this is inappropriate under the circumstances."
"I'm sorry, but smell for yourself. She REEKS of adulterous sex."
Yes, definitely too loud. We'd be talking later, but I wasn't going to let his rudeness ruin my day.
The minister had the decency to blush, but the inhabitants of the nearest lawn seats were starting to chatter, and I heard gasps and giggling.
"Please, Errol," I whispered, trying to calm him. "It's not what you think. We'll discuss this later. In
private.
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Suddenly he was on his knees before me. I had a moment of relief, until he reached up my wedding dress, pulling the front nearly up to my chest. My efforts to push his hands away were ineffectual. His heart broken sigh was agony to my ears. "I'm concerned, Karen. It would appear you have someone's semen dripping from you. How is that possible? Could you explain that please?"
Dad stood up for me, bustling forward, for all of a few seconds, until he saw Dave's cum running down my leg. The look of disappointment on his face killed me. "Karen? Baby, what have you done?" he gasped, rushing forward to pull my dress back down.