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Tenancy Pt 01 Intro

Tenancy Pt 01 Intro

by bunny1973
15 min read
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Characters

Mansoor - 34 years old, 5'8", main protagonist.

Sandesh - 35 years old, 5'8", pot-bellied, small time retail shop owner.

Shama - 29 years old, 5'6", 38-30-37, mother of Kusum.

Kusum - Shama and Sandesh's 16 months' old daughter.

Joohi - 24 years old, 5'7", 35-30-35, Shama's spinster sister.

Chameli - 48 years old widow, 5'5", 34-31-37, Shama and Joohi's mother.

Manpreet - 33 years old, 5'5", Mansoor's wife.

Summer

Mansoor had a hard time getting possession of the flat on rent.

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Sandesh was a not-so-ambitious businessman who was happy within his resources. When he had started his shop ten years back, he was the only guy the residents of the locality flocked to, for their daily needs. For three years, this monopoly established him as a fair, honest and helpful person. His increased eligibility got him a beautiful and educated wife, who recalibrated her ambitions from her own job to his household.

Sandesh didn't notice the changes in the society, and by the time his wife Shama realised the plateauing of his business, he had already lost the edge. The blooming education market in the town increased demands for infrastructure from temporary immigrants. While his clientele was almost constant, his profits declined.

When Shama quit her job on account of her pregnancy, Chameli came over to help out her daughter. As Shama was now home, she realised the situation, and convinced Sandesh to join the paying guest market to augment their income. All their reserves went into construction of a guesthouse with six two-room sets adjacent to his home, which he planned to rent out to students.

As Shama became a mother, and both she and the grandmother got involved with the baby and the connected social rituals and responsibilities, Sandesh inaugurated the tenancy and tried to manage it within his limited mental faculties. But he was not well prepared for this new field. By the time Kusum turned one, Sandesh was scraping the barrel financially.

This situation brought Shama's feminine aggression to the fore. She dispatched her mother back to her village as she could manage the home front alone, and became an equal partner in the routine affairs of her husband's enterprise, while indefinitely suspending her plans to rejoin her old vocation. But even after three months of efforts, the accounts had not broken even. Shama realised that the occupancy was low because of his rules- no single occupancy, only boy students, in pairs, not more than six months occupancy to a single tenant, no vehicles, three months' deposit, no physical disability. At first she tried to convince Sandesh to let go of the rules, but even after a month of discussions and arguments, there was no agreement. Instead, cracks appeared in their marital bliss. Finally, Shama went on the offensive, and took control of the Guesthouse by using her daughter's future as the bargaining chip.

Mansoor appeared on the scene at this time.

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Mansoor had joined a construction company after graduation, as a trainee. He had aging parents and two younger brothers to support. He had worked hard, and within three years, had risen to the post of assistant manager. With his revised seven figure annual package, he approached the parents of his college time girlfriend and sought their blessings for the marital union. The marriage was low key as his clan elders didn't endorse love marriages, but the families bowed to the wishes of the couple.

Things had unravelled suddenly. First it was the youngest brother who came under the sway of fundamentalist undercurrents, bringing the family under the scanner of the authorities. Mansoor had no political agenda or affiliations - he had a family to look after. To add to the prevalent tensions, while his parents had been making remarks at their desire for a grandchild, his wife was a rising star, and pregnancy was not an option. So they separated, and then hell had broken loose. Mansoor had become the pawn in the political grindstone between two local religious communities, and had come to the conclusion that the only way left to him was to emigrate. He abandoned his family and ran away across the sub-continent, to the thriving city of education. He had hoped that his qualifications and experience will outweigh his denominations, and once the storm settled in about a year, he would reconsider his decision.

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Mansoor's first aim was to get a dwelling. Walking through the suburbs, he saw a signboard indicating rooms available for hire. There was a small shop on the corner of the compound, manned by a woman. Mansoor took a deep breath and took the plunge. He had to start somewhere, and his instincts told him to trust the situation.

Mansoor : Namaste (greetings), Madam. Are these rooms available for renting?

Shama was pleasantly surprised at the query. The goddess of wealth appeared to have smiled. It was just the previous day that Sandesh had reluctantly agreed to let her handle the guesthouse. She looked at the handsome man's smiling face, and her feminine instincts told her that the man could be trusted.

Shama: Yes. How many people, and for how long?

Mansoor: I only. For at least one year. What is the rent?

Shama : Ten thousand. Three months' deposit.

M: I will take it. But I have only twenty with me at present. I'm yet to get a job.

S: What kind of job?

M: I am a construction engineer.

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S: OK, then against one month's deposit, you do repair work on the building.

M: OK.

S: Give the deposit and take your bags to Room number 3.

Mansoor gave Shama the agreed amount and entered the compound through the gate between the landlord's home and the building. He entered the first door, put down his bag, checked the room and bathroom and returned to the shop. But he found a pot-bellied, spectacled, slightly balding man instead.

Mansoor: Namaste, ji. Can I get a broom for cleaning the room?

Sandesh: What room? Who are you?

M: I am the new tenant in room number three. The madam sitting here has already taken the deposit.

Sandesh didn't like surprises. He was a simple man with a simple life. The last one week was out of the ordinary. Shama had forced herself into his domain, taken over the guesthouse, and relieved him from the shop during lunchtime so that he could devote some time with his daughter. This latest development was too much for him. He stared at the man in front of him for a few seconds.

Sandesh: Go inside and take it from my wife.

Mansoor walked up to the front door.

M: Madam? ( no reply) (loudly) Madam?

S: Kaun (who's it)?

M: Madam, can I get a broom for cleaning the room?

S: Take it from the back, and keep it there only once you have used it.

Mansoor walked out to the rear of the building. Before heading to his room with a broom, and a mop with a bucket of water, he noticed the clothes hung out to dry, and concluded that the landlord's family had a toddler, making it a nuclear family of three.

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Interlude 1

This story is set in a walled compound with two buildings. The building to the left (the guesthouse) is two storied, with three 1BH (bathroom+hall) on each floor. The staircase on the left of this building is separated from the 10 feet compound wall by an open space for parking. The front part of the compound wall isolates the ground floor rooms from prying eyes on the road. The building on the right - you guessed it right- is the landlord's dwellings. This single storied structure is separated from the tenant house by a green lawn. A small kitchen garden in the rear, and shuttered garage on the right of the landlord's home completes a picturesque rustic setup. The compound has a single entry opening facing the lawn, with another gate giving access to the guesthouse. A small shop extends out of the landlord's home till the berm of the street.

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Mansoor's luck held. He got a job. It was nearby, but the hours were long and the daytime heat was more than he was used to. But he persevered. After a week, the employer gave him the company uniform. Now he could have breakfast also at the site canteen. He skipped lunch to save money, as the rates for lunch were double those for breakfast. He kept to himself, lest he reveal his background.

But he didn't forget about the repairs he was expected to do as part of the rent deposit. So on his first weekly off, he surveyed the building and realised that the guesthouse was made of substandard materials, and would have major trouble with the monsoon rains. Over the ensuing week, he collected the items from the construction site that would be needed to preempt water induced damage, and stored them in the next room, with the intention to complete the job on his next weekly off.

Shama was alert to Mansoor's activities, but she didn't react to his use of the broom, or his ferrying of items. Since Mansoor was the only occupant of the guesthouse, and since he didn't lock his room when he was out, she was regularly checking on him. She would lock the gate to the guesthouse in the morning and keep the keys in the shop, and she would give them to Mansoor when he came back in the evening.

Mansoor's weekly off was on tuesdays. He was not aware that Sandesh went out of town for a jagrataa (a religious night vigil) every third Tuesday of the month. On his next weekly off, he got up early and started with the repairs on the guesthouse. He skipped lunch to save money, and continued nonstop. He didn't stop when Shama walked out of her home to go to the shop. He was still at it when she got back, and also when Sandesh left for his monthly commitment. Out of curiosity, Shama shut shop and came over to the guesthouse.

S: Hey mister, don't you think you should have asked me before starting this work? I am not paying for any of this.

M: Madam, I am just doing what we agreed on. One month deposit was against the repairs of the guesthouse. I'm about to complete the deposit.

Shama stood silently for a few seconds, then turned and left.

It was dark. Mansoor had completed all he had planned to do. He was tired and was taking a break before taking a shower. Shama walked through the gate isolating the guesthouse from the landlord's home. Mansoor was surprised and jumped up. Shama kept a grocery bag next to the gate and left, locking the gate. Mansoor picked up the bag and returned to his room. That night, he had home made food after a month.

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The variation became a routine. Every night when Mansoor returned to his room, he found the gate open and the same bag next to the gate. He would consume the contents and keep the empty utensils next to the gate, which were picked up when the connecting gate was locked for the night. He stopped having lunch at the company canteen.

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Interlude 2

Life is like water. It gets to a state of equilibrium along the path of least resistance.

Sandesh found the path of least resistance by giving more time and responsibilities of the shop to Shama. He still maintained the pre-lunch activities at the shop, opening before dawn and sitting through the morning. He would put down the shutters around 1pm, and join his family for lunch, where he would be an attentive father for about two hours. After his daughter went to sleep, he would also take an afternoon nap of an hour. Then he would join his two friends at the gym for about an hour. The trio would walk back to the shop, and chat through sunset till one of them decided to say good night. He would secure the shop for the night and retire.

Shama's daily routine was more fluid. House chores in the morning, and shop during the afternoon.

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It was payday. Mansoor collected his dues from the teller, and rushed back. As he approached the compound, he saw Sandesh at the shop counter. He walked up to him.

M: Good evening, Sir. (Sandesh looked at him with suspicion, and didn't respond). Here's the rent for the room. Ten thousand as agreed. Plus five hundred for the ten days that I had dinner given by you.

Sandesh took the money silently. Mansoor hesitated, then walked off. After a quick bath and change, he planned to go shopping for essentials.

As he came out of his bathroom, he heard knocking on the main door. Must be the landlord, he thought. He had a towel wrapped around his lower body. He shouted "coming", put on his vest and opened the door.

It was Shama. She had the dinner bag in her right hand.

S: Meet me in the shop on your next weekly off.

M: Anything wrong, Madam? Why don't you come inside, please?

Mansoor made way and invited his landlord's wife in. Shama hesitated, then walked past Mansoor into the room.

S: (extending the dinner bag towards Mansoor) I have a proposition to you. I want you to.........

Their hands touched as the dinner bag was exchanged.

It was Mansoor's subconscious masculinity that registered Shama's suppressed desire. In a fraction of a second, Mansoor's left hand had gripped Shama's right wrist gently yet firmly. The chauvinistic forwardness caused a flutter in Shama's whole being, and Mansoor's fingers registered an increase in her pulse rate.

Shama's eyes widened at the suddenness of the action. The contact sent a jolt throughout her body. She was muted and rooted by inaction. Then her peripheral vision registered some movement towards the base of the dinner bag. She glanced down to find a protrusion in the towel wrapped around the waist of her captor. The bulge increased in reaction to her gaze, and her eyes bulged at the increased erection.

Shama was hypnotised by the sight of Mansoor's hidden erection. Suddenly, she felt his lips on hers. Mansoor felt her tremble, and wrapped his right arm around her waist, causing the erection to dent into her saree and petticoat, as his tongue invaded her oral cavity.

She squeaked.

He flicked her tongue with his.

She tried to clamp down her lips, to eject the muscular intruder.

His force on her mouth opened it more.

Her attempt to retreat was not feeble, but not strong enough. As she bent backwards, her left hand landed on his head. And while this instinctive reaction was to prevent her from falling, it just sealed the kiss.

He regained moral sanity after fifteen seconds, and broke the kiss. Shama was panting.

M: Thank you

S: What is the meaning of this? How dare you?

M: I couldn't think of any other way to thank you. (staring into her eyes) You took me in when I was destitute (he distanced his lower body from hers), gave me a place to live (he took a small step back), fed me when I was hungry (he let go of her left wrist and took the dinner bag from her right hand), gave me credit on my words.

S: Is this the way to thank a married woman? What if my husband had seen us now? My marriage would have been ruined.

M: I'm sorry if you're surprised, but I am not sorry for what I did. You are beautiful, you are intelligent, you are hard working. You deserve more, much more. You are wasted on him.

S: Shut up, you idiot. He is the father of my child.

M: That's no reason to bind you to him. He is weak, and stupid. And you're wasting your talents, intelligence and beauty on him, when he does not cherish what you have given him.

Shama stared at him for a few moments, then wheeled around and rushed past him to her citadel. He made no attempts to stop her.

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