SWIB 3: The Truth -- Part 1
This story is a long (29,725 words) story. Originally, I was going to submit it in two parts, but both are finished, the length is the same, either way. Both parts are presented here.
The story is about infidelity and its aftermath. Part one is told by Dave Smith. He describes events, as he knows and understands them. Part two is in the voice of several of the characters introduced in Part one. As will become obvious, Dave's understanding and the truth often are a bit apart.
I have been writing this story for a while. The topic of the truth is fascinating to me. Truth is a common word, but something that doesn't really exist. For example, ask the US population if abortion is a woman's right or the killing of an unborn child? The population is almost split on which is the truth.
People who simultaneously witness the same event rarely remember it the same way. In the telling of this story, the various character's portrayal varies, due to their understanding -- or their truth. The story has some twists, because of these differing understandings, and the author freely admits to some accurate descriptions of misleading or anachronistic details, furthering these twists.
We say we value the truth and for the most part, try to be honest. But because we often share what we know, when we don't know the truth, or shade the truth for reasons both honorable and not, life is more complicated than it needs to be.
This continuing story is a part of the SWIB series. As will be seen,
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Dave Smith
I sat in my car. I was parked near the back of the lot of the Rivertown Diner. My parking spot was facing and adjacent to the Pines Motel parking lot. The paint, on the doors and the motel, was old and faded. It was a sad looking spot.
Oddly, I was thinking about Sue. We'd met when I was 8 and she was 9. Our family moved from the East Coast, where all my friends were, to Rivertown. I was crushed.
But as we moved in a pretty girl watched us from across the street. She came over while I just sat, watching the movers, and said "my name is Sue Redmond, what's yours?"
I smiled,
she is so cool
, my young mind told me. "I'm Dave! Dave Smith."
"It's great you're moving in Dave Smith" Sue said, clearly excited, "there are just no kids on this street, we can be friends."
And we were. She was in the fourth grade I was only a third grader. Sometimes her friends teased her about
hanging with kids
, but we became like brother and sister. She turned out to be quite the tomboy and we often walked the two blocks to the river bluffs and either explored the woods, climbed trees, or took our poles and fished.
We both had other friends through the years, but particularly in those early years, we were besties.
In high school things changed. Driving and dating become the big things in life in those years. She could do both, a year before I could. At first, we'd talk about her dates, which guys she liked and sometimes why. I found I didn't like that. We might have been close, like brother and sister, but it kept becoming more apparent to me, I didn't think of her as a sister.
Late in her junior, my sophomore, year in high school her parents were going away for the weekend. Sue was quite popular. Sue's mother was worried to leave her virginal daughter home alone. Sue promised she would not go on a date and would not go to any party while they were gone. Her mother said I don't want any of those boys coming over here, either. Sue promised they would not.
That Friday, as Sue was getting ready for school, she promised her mother she had not told anyone her parents would be away. She had turned Bobby, her current boy, down when he asked her out saying she and her parents had plans for the weekend. She told her mother she was sorry to tell him that white lie, but, after all they both did have plans, just not together. She would spend the weekend working on her tan, in the back yard, and look forward to seeing her parents Sunday afternoon.
Saturday, I was bored, bored, bored. Nothing was going on, so I decided to go across the street and see if Sue was not doing anything, too. I rang the bell and got no answer. Sue frequently laid on a towel in her back yard to tan. It was private back there between the hedge and many large, old trees. It was also grassy, and the sun shined on at least part of the yard almost all day. I went around back and sure enough, there was Sue. She was laying with her eyes closed and I said hi, long before getting close enough that I'd startle her.
"Hi, yourself, how's my little brother?"
"Good, good; better now."
"Why better now?"
"I've been bored, it will be nice to sit with my best friend."
So, we talked. I got hot, even dressed in shorts and a T-shirt. I took off the shirt. I really didn't think about it. I don't know if without my shirt I looked at her differently, or she looked at me differently, but suddenly and abruptly, she said she'd promised her mom, no boys while they were gone.
I was shocked, I guess and disappointed by her. I tried to tell her I was hardly a boy, but she'd have none of it. She sent me home.
After that we were still best-friends, but we drifted apart. I turned 16 and could drive. I started dating, and she dated all the time. Another year and she was out of high school, and I saw her even less. She started working to support attending the local community college. Our worlds no longer intersected.
The next year, I graduated with honors and got a full scholarship to UCLA. I worked in LA while going to school and other than Christmases, I didn't see the Midwest until after graduation. But Sue and I were destined to meet, again.
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I had been sitting in the diner's back parking lot for twenty minutes. Shabby as the Pines was it had one feature which made it popular. It was an L-shaped building. The office was in front, facing the road. The rooms were in a row, perpendicular to the road, with parking in front of each room. The office effectively hid the rooms and parking from the street.
Many, who had occasion to use a motel room for only a couple of hours, thought this
privacy feature
was wonderful.
It only seemed a great feature. The Riverton diner, next to the Pines Motel had most of its parking in front of the restaurant. But when the diner was busy, the front lot filled up and the over-flow parking was around back.
From that back lot, one looked directly at the rooms and cars in front of those rooms, at the Pines Motel. More than one skulking lover had been spotted by a friend, family, and even spouseβsome by accident, others by someone, like me, lying in wait...
I knew what I had to do. But didn't know when I'd have to do it. That didn't depend on me.
My thoughts wandered to California, UCLA, and Molly.
I was studying engineering. Most of the students in my classes were men. One very notable exception was Molly Thompson. She was gorgeous and more sought after than good grades in most every class we shared. While most young aspiring engineers pushed, shoved, and did all they could to be close to her, she had nothing to do with her classmates. She did date, but not from the pool of nerdy, needy engineers.
That changed when we were seniors. Unlike my classmates, I had never fawned all over her. She was too good for us, and I didn't like that, so other than talking about calculus, structures, thermodynamics and the like we never interacted. She dated in her circles, me in mine.
We were nearing our final semester and she asked me, "Dave? You've never asked me out, why is that?"
"You've always made it pretty clear you didn't like engineers."
"Yeah, I guess that's right. But, after spending all this time learning how things work, what makes them go, I am tiring of business types. You know what I mean?"
"Let me say this. I have thought you were the prettiest, most desirable woman on this campus since freshman year. I would have asked you out many times had I thought you'd consider it. So, if you're now considering it, how about dinner and a movie, Saturday?"
I thought I saw her eyes misting just a little, "You are sweet and made that much easier than I had any right to expect. I'd love to."
We went out. That first night she made it apparent she'd come back to my apartment with me, but I had real feelings about her. I wanted to know her a little bit and was afraid if I just jumped her body, my little head would keep my big head from doing much learning. We made out in my car for a bit before I walked her to her door.
"You are a curious one."
"And that would be because . . ."
"I thought we could get to know one another better, tonight, you know?"