I am a first time author here. I decided to write my first story as a 750 word story.
I finished the first part and felt I had more story to tell, It turned into a four part story with each part having 750 words.
I provided two endings so you can pick your poison.
I am publishing this without an editor looking at it. I know it is a bad idea to do that, but I couldn't find one. I attempted to find an editor using the "find editor" tool, but received no response. Either I did it incorrectly or no one was interested. Rather than wait, I'm letting it go as is.
If you would like to volunteer to be a beta reader or an editor, please contact me through the site.
As a first time author, positive feedback would be greatly appreciated.
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The sounds coming from my bedroom were unmistakable. My wife Katie was usually quiet and passive in bed, but right now, she was so filled with passion that she was screaming at him to pound her harder. She was on track for a massive orgasm.
It was a clichΓ©. I'd forgotten my lunch-- leftovers of a tomahawk ribeye I'd shared with Katie the night before at Kazinski's Steakhouse. We'd gone there to celebrate my promotion. After years of hard work and determination, I hit pay dirt. I won the fifty million dollar Landen contract away from the competition and delivered the transition project on time and on budget. The folks at Landen were delighted and executed their final sign off last Friday.