HE WAS RAPUNZELED
She let her hair down, but not with him.
Preamble Ramble-
Some people hate my rambles but I like them. It gives me a chance to explain my thinking behind a story. Its the only way I have to communicate with people who read my stories. And those who do thank you.
THIS IS VERY AND I MEAN VERY LOOSEY BASED ON THE FAIRY TALE.
Someone wrote, 'writers aren't born. You become a writer.' Maybe one day I can call myself a writer.
My stories are narrative heavy which some consider lazy writing. I do include dialogue were I feel its necessary but I find this is my style.
Also, people say I need an editor. This will be the last time I mention it. If you want to proof read my stories and can get them back to me in a timely manner hit me up. I've sent request to everyone who complained about my lack of editing on my last story to ask for assistance only got one response. So if bad grammar bothers you it might be best to pass this by. I would love for you to give it chance though. I do the best I can.
The idea for this story is to weird to get into, but I was thinking about making a series of stories based on fairy tales. We'll see how it goes.
I hope you like the story. Oh yeah, its based in Greenville of course.
****************************************
I heard Sara walk in after work. I'm usually home at least a couple of hours after she was but I strained my back at work and left early. Me, I'm Devin Fletcher. 32 and work for Martin Plumbing here in the city. Have been for 8 years. Its not glamorous by far but it pays very well. I could be in the very high five figures in 5 years if I play my cards right. I'm not what you think of someone who is a plumber. I watch Jeopardy every day. I read Greek Classics and love Classical music. I'm not a nerd just well rounded.
Sara, my beautiful wife is 29 and works for the city library. She is the embodiment of the hot librarian you read about in stories or see in videos. She's 5 foot 10 inches tall which is an inch taller than me. Only weighs 130 pounds without a day of working out. She has been blessed with good genes. Not overly busty and a well proportioned booty. Also like the typical librarian she's very, shall we say very reserved. She's not very adventurous. Her style of dress is very conservative with her wearing her hair in a tight bun. Or as I learned a Chignon. When its not in a bun, I mean Chignon, it reaches to her waist. I like it either way. She very rarely wears it down. She has a dry almost British like sense of humor. She is very loving and caring. We have been married for 4 years having dated for 2.
She gave me a big kiss as she entered the kitchen. She's not always affectionate so I appreciate it when she is. "I'm surprised to see you home so early. Is everything okay? Carl didn't fire you did he"?
Laughing, "No I didn't get fired yet. I strained my back reaching under a sink. Maybe I'm getting to old for this type of work."
"How about I give you a nice back rub later on, maybe that will help."
"It should but you'll try to touch my booty." We both laughed. It was an inside joke between us about giving each other massages.
I had ordered dinner from a new Mexican place on Main St. Viva Tequis Taqueria and Cantina and was putting it out on the table. She only eats American, Chinese and Mexican food. We tried Thai and the new Ethiopian place Almez and found out she hated both. The library isn't the most exciting place so most of her stories were about funny things people asked about or having to chase out a homeless person, I'm sorry an unhoused person. They once found a woman passed out in a bathroom and had to call the police and ambulance. The worst was when a kid found a guy doing the Fenty Lean. I had to look that up.
My job is the same way. How many times can you talk about clogged drains and toilets. I once went to a house and when the lady answered the door she was only wearing a sheer robe and stockings. I had to reschedule because to me, only bad things could happen. I don't cheat on my wife and if I rejected her she could have said I tried something with her in anger. Better safe than sorry.
"You remember I talked to you about Tressa?" She had been there for a little less than a month. She was younger then everyone else at 24 and single. I hadn't met her but the stories Sara told about her made her sound very interesting. She sounds like someone between a 60's hippie mixed with a 80's new wave fan. She just moved to town from Columbia South Carolina. Sara said she was a very nice girl and people loved working with her.
'Yes, I remember her, why?"
We all decided to get together after work Friday and go to Whiskey Mill Gastonia on New Hope. She doesn't know a lot of people and doesn't get out much. Brent thought it would be fun if we all got out together and socialized away from the job." I knew the place. It was ten minutes from both the library and our house. Sara isn't a big drinker. She's a two glass of wine kind of woman. I don't know how her co-workers are. Two are around her age and four others older. Two of those are really old, well over fifty. This was the first time they had ever gotten together for an event like this. I wasn't worried about thing happening because I knew Sara's nature.
"Well that sounds like fun. I know it would be interesting to see how people act away from work. People can be someone totally different after hours."
"I don't think Judy is a big drinker and Jack is over his party days. Plus, I won't be there long myself."
That Friday came, Sara texted to remind she wouldn't be home until around eight. I had completely forgot about it told her to have fun. I didn't say 'not too much fun' because like I said, I know Sara's nature. I decided to treat myself to some Thai food at Kitchen Mae Kong. A coworker turned me on to the place. People always go for the Pad Thai which is a shame because there's so much more to Thai food. I got Pia Sarm Rod, fried fish, and a Singha Beer. You can only get them at Thai restaurants. Who said plumbers can't be cultured.
I got home around 6:30 and sat and watched a MAC game, Northern Illinois versus Miami on ESPN 2. Eight came but I wasn't worried. I mean I wasn't expecting her as the chimes rang. Than 8:30. 9 o'clock. At 9:30 I started to have some concern. 9:45 I texted her to see if she was okay and didn't get a response. 10 o'clock I was now very worried. This isn't like her. At 11:00 I was frantic still not getting a response on her phone. I drove to go by the bar. Its not a really big place. The lot was full which I expected being a Friday night. I drove around but didn't see her car. I went in and looked around but didn't see her or any of her co-workers that I might know. Now I was freaking out. She had never done anything like this before. We always communicate if plans change. On the way back home I called to see if there had been any accidents because that's all I could think had happened. There were none in my area. I had no other option but to go home and pray she was okay.
I guess I had fallen asleep on the couch. The TV was still showing Sports Center when the lights of the car pulling into the driveway woke me up. I jumped and ran to the door when I got my bearings. Sara was sitting in her car but didn't get out immediately. I was wondering what was wrong and glad that she was home and okay at the same time. When she opened the door she seemed to hesitate getting out. I reach back and turned on the porch light. Momentarily blinded by the light she let out a gasp. As soon as I saw the way she looked I joined her in that gasp. Her clothing was what only could be called disheleved and her hair was down and uncombed. I've never seen in like that except when shes getting out of bed in the morning. She always took pride in her appearance.