Hello,
In 2 days, the original story we uploaded over 50,000 views and dozens of comments, some which sparked great controversy and lengthy replies. People were split down the middle with how it was written, and I'm submitting a version 2.0 per se, to satisfy the group of people who felt cheated out of a "real story."
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When David clocked into to work, he looked around in his office and couldn't help but feel the lack of excitement and enthusiasm he craved in the job description he applied for. Everyday was a flustered and grey lit introduction to stacks of paperwork that would accumulate on his desk, which clouded his ambition more than his tan cubicle at 2pm on a Monday afternoon; it was nothing more than a photo of his beautiful wife Lora, and a picturesque calendar of muscle cars, swallowed by a buzzing swarm of phone calls and the sound of a fax machine in the distance.
"Coffee," announced David to his friend Xavier on their lunch break. "It's the drive of this company, don't you think? I mean, the brake pads we sell, Hell, we're always braking with nothing driving us." He poured a second cup and handed it to Xavier.
Xavier was tall and handsome black man. His quick witted and outgoing personality overshadowed his professionalism, but in turn made him the desired 'wingman' of the office.
"You're damn straight! " Xavier chuckled. "Shit I'll tell you man," he said taking a sip, "ain't nothin' but 'heart brake' if you ask me. I need some love in my life, I ain't getting' it at home, and I ain't gonna find it here."
"How's your girl?" David said, cocking his head. "She still in outer space?"
"She just ain't right in the head. I come home and find her sittin' on the couch playing GTA, complainin' we can't pay the bills, so I've been looking around you know, online, trying to find something to give me that spark back."
David nodded his head and took a sip of coffee. "Well, gotta run," Xavier said. David stood there for a few moments sipping his coffee, envying Xavier's courageous quest to find new love.
David walked back to his cubicle and sat down in his rolling chair, crossing his fingers behind his head and letting out a sigh as he stared into the ceiling. "Got it!" he yelled inside his head. "I need this... I need... yes!" He quickly typed in 'craigslist.org' into his browser and hit 'post to classifieds.' Following the steps, he was brought to his destination, 'mw4m.'
David stood up to look around his office; he was clear. Nervously, he began typing.
"We are a happy couple seeking..."
Just a few minutes later, Lora's phone buzzed.
Once.
Twice.
Three times, four.
"How lucky am I!" Lora said out loud, as she finished the last strokes of her painting. "I bet my artwork is exploding on the internet right now!"
She set her paintbrush down and turned around to reach for her phone. "Oh, what is this," Lora thought to herself. "I don't remember posting my art for sale on Craigslist. Oh, I bet it's my ad for my old couch."
Lora opened her email, and stared at the phone blankly. Her mouth was halfway open and her eyes were fixed on the screen until it faded to black.
"I found one!" Exclaimed Xavier, who shouted at David over his cubicle and startled him enough to nearly drop his phone. David looked up at Xavier, squinting his eyes and shaking his head while mouthing the words 'what the fuck.'
"Oh," said Xavier, "I didn't know you were on the phone, my bad." Xavier pushed himself in his rolling chair into David's office, cautiously. He then whispered loudly into his ear, "psst... I found one.."
David hung up the phone and turned around, with a sullen look cast on his face.
"Yeah? You found what?" he said.
"I was just on Craigslist, man.. you know this fine bitch and her man is up on there, they say they're looking for a black guy to fuck his wife? At first I said, 'aw hell nah,' because I thought it was a scam to get your number, you know? But then I replied, and I got a reply back!"
Suddenly, David had realized what he had done, and he didn't know how to react. So instead he asked, "how good does she look?"
Xavier took no time to answer, "Bro, she is Grade A. I'm telling you, I mean there's no face on here, but look at these tits." Xavier pushed his phone in David's face. "LOOK at these tits man! TITS!"
David took one look at her and instantly recognized her as his wife. "Holy SHIT," shouted David.
"Hey man!" Xavier looked around, "Keep that shit down! You like her huh? Well that's too damn bad 'cuz I found her first!" Xavier started to dance weirdly in his chair, and began singing and snapping his fingers, "Cuz she's my bitch, whoa oh oh, and u wooon't snitch, to my girl, whoah oh." Xavier laughed.
David looked at him dumbfounded, but had nothing to say. He had asked for this, and now he was experiencing it first-hand what he had asked for.
"Well, I say... go for it." And as David said these words, Xavier jingled his chair out of his office, and David couldn't help but feel defeated yet excited at the same time.
"I see your CL ad. I'm looking at it right now," said the text, as David looked down at his phone. His stomach turned upside down as he imagined what his wife would say next.
"I know you've been talking about bringing in another partner to our bed, but I don't think I'm ready for that yet."
David replied, "It's okay, I already took down the ad. I'm just bored here at work and a little fantasy helps me get through the day."
There were a few minutes that he didn't hear anything but Xavier's cell phone in the cubicle next to his blowing up with vibrations.
"You sound like a woman in heat over there! Why don't you dial down your vibrator to a lower speed?" chuckled David with a grin.
"Man, I gotta go!" Xavier bursted out. "I hit my quota for the day. Hey, if you get a call from Robert today, tell him we hit the deal solid and I'll take care of the documents first thing in the morning."
David looked down at his watch. "Alright," he said. "It's 2:18 right now so you'll miss the announcement at 3, but I'll catch you up on Monday."
Xavier was already walking out the door with his bag slung around chest and jacket tucked under his armpit. He was in a hurry and he knew exactly what was going on. His heart began to beat faster as he anticipated what would happen next. Where would he go from here? Did he just put his marriage in jeopardy? David looked over at the smiling picture of his wife.
"Lora," he texted. "Did you get an email from any good looking men?"
"Not really, maybe just one or two, but I didn't reply back to anyone," she texted. "Why do you ask?"
"Well I wouldn't mind, you know... if you wanted to have sex with them, you know I would get off on that!"
David imagined the several times he had brought it up to Lora when they were fucking and dirty talking each other. It was a major turn on for him; she would whisper in his ear about how dirty of a wife she had been earlier that day, describing how she fucked the cable man or the pizza delivery guy. She would dig her pretty nails into his flesh and arch her back, and looking into his wife's eyes, he would instantly fall in love with her all over again. It was a fantasy that would now be a reality, but was it because Lora wanted to fulfill this fantasy for him? Or did Lora just want to have sex behind his back? The possibilities overwhelmed him.
"You don't have to worry," texted Lora.
"K," he replied, curious at her vague text. He stared blankly at his phone screen until it dimmed down and turned black.
"It's off!" shouted a man at David. "We hit our goals this week and you're free to go whenever you'd like. Just pick up one of these T-Shirts our vendor left us. They get pissy when we don't accept their offerings."
"That's because we're a mafia ran industry," David said with a wink. "Thanks, Don." Just then, David's phone buzzed.
"ml.pnk,,,.l" That's what he saw when he opened up the last text from Lora at 2:45pm.
",;m;llkjjj."
Lora giggled, as Xavier softly kissed the side of her neck and gave her a spank on the ass. He reached his hand around her back and slowly slid it down to cup on side of her ass cheek, and he gave it a firm squeeze. With the other hand, he pulled the curly light red hair from her face, showing her beautiful fair skin and an occasional freckle as beautiful as the stars in a night sky. He stroked her hair and she gave a shy smile, as she closed her eyes and accepting the kiss from a man she had just met.
"You're more beautiful than I could have imagined," Xavier said. "You have a very lucky husband, and I'm glad he's not with us right now." He pushed her onto the bed and unzipped his pants, and watched Lora's expression as she noticed his large bulge nearly bursting from his blue briefs.
Lora wasted absolutely no time to pull out his cock and immediately start licking his balls. She sucked one side at a time, and licked down the middle all the way up this cock, then took his shaft all the way in her mouth and back out again. Xavier quivered as she flicked the head of his cock with her tongue, and began expertly working every inch he offered. Learning into her, Lora reached back with her hand to gain better leverage and in doing so slightly pushed at her cell phone which was laying on the bed near her, causing it to flip, screen side down.
Buzzzz... buzzzz... buzzzz... David's phone began to ring.
"Hey honey, how are you?" said David.
He heard silence.
"Hello?"
Then a giggle.
