So here we are starting Episode 3 of my Literotica writing journey.
To date I have received 28 comments. A few were quite brutal and probably reflected the person making them! I have always considered the other person when writing to them and making such comments is rude and not constructive.
A number of the comments were long and very detailed and I found the advice very helpful. I will try and incorporate this in the future. Above all these people were very conscious of this being my first go at writing erotica and I thank you for that.
A number of responses did not like cheating stories, so why read one that may be?
A number saw this as a cuckold story, which it was not. It was intended to be recognising, that particularly at a certain age, that marriage is not necessarily monogamous and that both husbands and wives may be seeking what they are missing, exciting sex with people they are attracted to but will probably never meet again. I think particularly between the ages of 40 and 55 both sexes can feel they have missed out on exciting sexual liasons and women in particular can feel this, as I know my wife appeared to do.
I see the hotwifing experience as being one where the couple will discuss before the event, what they are planning and each agree they approve. I see this as better than allowing this to turn into a full blown affair which may destroy their marriages.
In terms of my own wife, the first bit in Girls Night Out is what my wife told me the day after and I think had she not been the designated driver that night, she may have taken it much further. That is where the story goes, but all is fiction, as the following stories will be.
So when it is Janets turn to talk, I have not repeated all the detail in my Girls Night out story. Hope my readers do find this too frustrating?
If a husband and wife are upfront with each other about their wants and needs sexually and discuss this before or after the events, then I do not see this as cheating. And if the husband wants to observe or join in, I do not see this as cuckolding. I see cuckolding as being a situation where the woman is dominant, the man enjoys being dominated and watching another man take his wife!
That is the end of my clarification so on to the episode 2 of the following story. Any future comments continue to be appreciated.
Episode 2 - The girls continue their lunch with more surprises
Sitting listening to Paige talking about what had happened at the end of the night out had the other 3 girls open mouthed, never expecting what she would say. She had dressed very sexily that night, but they all thought that was just to display her look but dont touch attitude to the men in the room.
Paige looked around the table and asked if that really had been too much information for the others?
Janet knew she was next so didnt speak. Lucy and Valerie were still to say if they had just been dropped at home or continued their evening elsewhere
Janet decided it was time to tell the girls about Tony.
Well she said, I guess I also have something to say. After I dropped you all off, I thought it wouldnt do any harm if I went down to the nightclub where Tony had said he and his mate were going. He was pleased to see me there and hugged me close, then gave me a kiss.
He took my hand and pulled me up to dance. It was a slow dance and I could already feel him hard against me. I know I should have pulled away but didnt. I couldn't deny I was interested and could feel the gusset in my knickers getting damp.
After a few more dances the club was closing. He asked if I would like to join him for a nightcap and I nodded. The rest is history.