I appreciate all of the feedback to chapter 1. I also wanted to say that I appreciated the feedback to Escape Velocity, even though it was pulled. I'm still not sure why because I think I was writing within the guidelines, but someone thought I wasn't. That said, I will be seeking an editor or two to review it with that in mind to see what they think, and if it can be changed without significantly changing the point of the story, then I will try and post it again. Otherwise, I will look on it as a lesson learned. But again thanks to you all for the feedback to both stories. Good and bad, it is appreciated.
There are a lot of writers on this site that are spectacular, and I have become fans of a lot of them. I don't, however write like any of them. I tend to take my style from the paperback novels of the sixties, seventies and eighties, from sci-fi to porn. This last is where I get my love of excruciatingly detailed sex, the wetter and drippier the better.
I also like letting my characters talk. And they do...a lot. But part of that is because I am like that. Conversations like that are what I know. If that bothers you, or you don't like the way I write sex scenes, then feel free to skip. It won't hurt my feelings.
I'm moving this second chapter into Loving Wives because it is about a growing relationship between people who are already sleeping with other people and will need to deal with that. If the powers that be feel it needs to be somewhere else, just let me know.
It will also touch on incest themes, and a brief jog into the world of the Celebrities & Fan Fiction category. In that same section, I want to give a shout-out to jezzaz, who is outstanding at writing spy fiction on this site. One of the characters that appears briefly is borrowed from one of his worlds as an homage. I wrote asking for permission, but never got a response. I ask that he please contact me either way if he would be so kind, and I will of course change it should he rather I not use the character.
With that, and the usual caveat that this is a work of fiction, with all that entails, please enjoy.
Chapter II - You Had Me From Hello
My first thoughts as Jason drove me back to my place was, "Holy shit..." I felt achingly good, like I had just completed a two-hour extreme yoga session and two runs through a Camp Lejeune obstacle course, followed by two hours of in the ring doing impact conditioning. I was physically worn to a nub and had never felt better.
I again began to question the emotional and mental impact of the weekend. I mean, I was done with love, right? Never again! I would not allow myself to love that way... to trust that way again! Nothing was worth the heartbreak and heartache that waited at the end of such a connection.
Yet how could I go back to a life without her? That world was dreary, drab and seriously joyless. Didn't I owe it to myself to at least try?
Of course, the answer was yes. She was like a drug, and I knew I was hooked. I was in love like I've never been in love before. So, I was going to stay the course. I was headed toward the best years of my life, or a heartache of galactic proportions. More likely, a little from column A, and a little from column B. I had no idea how much of each, but I knew that I had to make the journey.
When I got home to my little two-bedroom condo, I spent an hour stretching, took an ice-cube bath, and then a mildly warm shower, and finally rubbed down the harder worn parts with an arnica and clove oil salve that I got from a local herbalist. I'd have to let her know that it worked wonders on my cock, so she could advertise it as a sex recovery ointment too.
I fixed myself a bowl of left-over bouillabaisse, which wasn't half bad, and popped open a bottle of 12 Dogs of Christmas Ale, which is one of my favorite seasonal beers from Thirsty Dog Brewing Company out of Akron. I had already caught up on the weekend's reports for work and was reading Carlo Rovelli's
The Order of Time
.
I realized that I had read the same page multiple times, and still couldn't tell you what it said, which is a sure sign of distraction. I looked at the time and saw that it was a little after 8:00.
"Fuck it," I said to the empty room, and dialed Marina's number.
When she answered, I suddenly felt lighter, as if somehow in the last few hours, weight had been piled on me that I didn't notice until it was suddenly gone. She simply said, "Hello?" and life was instantly better. If I needed an indication that I was toast, it didn't get clearer than that.
"I'm sorry to call early, but I just couldn't wait."
"Don't apologize, Sweets. I was counting the minutes myself. How are you?"
"Wishing I was wrapped around you."
"Curling up in front of the fire with you and a good book sounds lovely, doesn't it?" She sighed. "I didn't expect to miss you so much so fast, Jack. And it's not the sex...or more correctly not just the sex. That, both the fucking and making love, are addictive, and I can't wait to have you again. But I'm talking about something... I don't know... deeper, somehow. Even if we just sat watching television, or reading, I just want to be in your presence."
I nodded, even though she couldn't see it. "I know just how you feel. I was eating dinner and reading, and I thought how perfect it would be if we were doing that together."
"So, what did you have?"
It took me a second, then I said, "The last of last week's pot of bouillabaisse. And you?"
She laughed. "Pizza. So, you like to cook?"
"I do. I wouldn't say I'm passionate about it, but I've learned to enjoy cooking things that serve large numbers of people, because these usually store well, so I can eat them several times over the course of a week, and it allows me to explore all manner of cultural and historical recipes."
"Sounds delicious. Will you cook for me?"
"Of course, baby. How about you? Do you cook?"
"I do, and I enjoy it. I wouldn't say I'm great at it, not like my mother or my sister, but I'm not bad at the things I like to cook, and like I said, I love doing it."
"Like what? What are some of your favorites?"
We went on to discuss our favorite kinds of foods, from the pedestrian (old fashioned American meatloaf) to the exotic (Ethiopian). This of course led to a discussion on food sex, which she was a fan of, and with the exception of playing with whipped cream and honey I've never done.
I learned that she loved to ski but was even more a fan of the beach. I asked her if she had any time off over the next few months to go with me to the beach in Mexico and we made tentative plans for mid-February.