Law of the Heart
What a MAN would have done.
This is my version of Headhunter's tale, "Law of the Heart"
www.literotica.com/s/law-of-the-heart-ch-01
I asked him permission to write my version but never heard back.
Since the beginning of time, nature has bred men through natural selection. The women made the natural selection. She chose men who were bigger, better, and stronger than her.
YOU HAVE BEEN GIVEN ONE JOB AS A MAN AND HUSBAND. THAT IS TO PROVIDE FOR AND PROTECT YOUR FAMILY. Sometimes, that means protecting them from themselves.
Men of the human species are the dominant APEX predators on this planet. That's right, men are predators. All mammals that are predators have two things in common. Eyes facing front, and a set of canine teeth.
The MC left his wife with a predator and stood by, watched, and did nothing. All her friends she trusted stood by, watched, and even rooted and egged them on. And that pussy set back and did nothing.
I contacted a couple of other readers on this site, and they agreed that it would never have gotten to that point. Somebody would have died before then.
I was so unhappy with how this story and the other follow-ups went that I had to stop another story midstream and write my version. THE MENDOZA BROTHERS HAD TO PAY!!!!!
I attacked the problem and threw in a new twist to an old story just for entertainment.
It starts on the night of the party, when the MC stands in the shadows, watching his so-called friends be cowards.
I will ignore some of the writing at the party and assume he wanted to know how the interaction between the twins and the wife went before he stepped in. I did not change the author's wording or modify any grammar or spelling.
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Juan's hands continued to move up and down Jill's sides. Stopping at her waist his fingers untied the knot that held the sarong at Jill's swinging hips.
Once untied, he used the large cloth like a sling. Pulling Jill forward, then letting her lean against it and slip away.
He jerked the fabric in time to the music. Pulling her closer, then letting her retreat, her bathing suit-covered buttocks cradled in the hammock made from her sarong.
It was erotic as hell, even I could tell that, as my mind shattered at the sight. Finally, Jill put her arms out against Juan's chest, holding herself away... in response, Juan pulled her hips in closer.
They laughed and enjoyed the parody of a woman playing hard to get on one hand while their groins finally pressed together on the other! And her suit! I had never seen it before.
It wasn't a string bikini like Hector's wife wore, but it was more revealing than any I had ever seen Jill wear. French cut.
Her long, shapely legs seemed to go forever before reaching the high-cut bikini bottoms. The front was narrow, the back exposing the lower part of her buttocks.
She looked very good, and I assumed she must have taken the time to get a bikini wax. Her exposed flesh was translucent and pink.
Juan held the sarong with one hand while literally ripping his shirt off his body with the other. Then he again used both strong hands on the colorful cloth to pull Jill forward, against him!
This time, her hands pressed against his bare, muscled chest as the dance continued. Jill's eyes were wild.
Her mouth was open, laughing and sucking in gulps of air to feed her gyrating body! Juan grinned smugly as he continued to grind his pelvis against Jill's. I knew that he was pushing his erection against her soft midriff.
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I had enough. Since none of my so-called friends were stepping in and putting a stop to this shit, I headed out of the shadows. I pushed through the crowd as they clapped and cheered them on without thinking of the destruction it could cause.
The Mendoza brother kicked the shit out me college for me taking Jill away from Jaun. They were going to have kill me to stop me this time.
I broke through the crowd seeing the one focal point for my anger, that motherfucker holding my wife.
I came from his backside, grabbed his shoulder, spun him around, and dove my fist straight into his solar plexus. That would cause momentary paralysis of the diaphragm and give him the sensation of having the wind knocked out of him.
He went down, trying to catch his breath as I straddled his chest and started pounding the shit out of him, and that's where I made my fatal mistake. Well, almost fatal mistake.
I became so fixated on beating the holly hell out of the bastard. I forgot about the other bastard. I heard a female scream out NOOOOOO! I think it was.........
I woke to the sound of beeping monitors and a nurse paging the doctor. As I awoke, I heard, there you are and then I faded back to black.
The next time I awoke, a light shone in my eyes. "Good, you're back with us, Mr. Roberts; I'm Dr. Hernandez. We've been sedating you for a couple of days to allow you to heal."
"Has my wife been in see me doctor?" I groggily whispered. I started to cough; suddenly, an agonizing pain shot through my body.
"Try not to move you. You took a serious beat down. He listed off a litany of my injuries. Then he replied, " No, Mr. Roberts, no one has been here to see you."
Well, she's history. Juan's won. Fuck her, he can have her, I thought. I said, "Doc, I do not want anyone in this room, you hear me."
"Unfortunately, Mr. Roberts, I was told to call the detectives when you awoke." He pointed toward my wrist. I moved it and heard the rattle of a chain. I was handcuffed to the bed.
"OK, doctor, nobody else," I responded. Unless I approve it.
"All right, I'll let security know. I'll get the nurse to give you some water and see if we can get a little Jello in you."
Two nights later, I was awoken by a presence looming over me sometime in the middle of the night. It was that bastard, Juan.
He snarled in my ear, "Listen, prick. If you had just let me fuck her, I would've sent her cum filled ass home to you. It would have been over. But nowwwww.... I'm going to fuck you over. I'm having you charged with assault and battery. And with my contacts in the prosecutors' offices and with judges I own, your ass is going away for a long time."
Juan smirked and chuckled, "I'll make sure you never get out, and I'll be fucking Jill for the rest of her life. And your kid won't even remember your name and will be calling me daddy. He reached over, lightly tapped me on the cheek, and said, "Sleep tight; don't let the bed bugs bite."
The following day, I was charged with assault with the intent to kill. I knew I was fucked. I hit the button for the nurse. Nurse, can I get my phone? The battery was dead, but the nurse gave me a charger, and within 5 minutes, it powered up. I had no messages from Jill, but the ones I had were mostly from her parents, Meredith, and my ex-best friend Steve. My parents were on a cruise so I knew I wouldn't hear from them. Yeah, none from her. It figured.
I called an old schoolmate of mine, Bill. "Hey Jake, how's it hanging? How's my crush, Jill, doing? If I were as good-looking and as smart as you. I would have taken her away from you."
"Guess what, you can have her. She's all yours," I spewed hate into the phone.
"HUH! OH," Bill replied.
"Bill, I'm in big trouble--big-time trouble. Do you have any contacts in Boston who are also licensed in Florida?" I went on to explain what was going on and what happened between Juan, Hector, and me.
Next thing I heard over the phone, "Mother Fucking SONS-OF-BITCHES! I'll come down there and kill them myself." Bill could do it, too. He played middle linebacker and was a headhunter by trade. In his mind, if you couldn't see a broken bone coming through the skin, you kept playing.
I warned him to stay put and went on to explain, "Juan and Hector are into some bad shit down here. Juan admitted he was paying off public officials, and I bet you he owns a few lawyers around here, so I don't know who I can trust.
"Listen, Buddy, if it weren't for you, I wouldn't have made it through law school," he replied. I would have ended up as a bouncer in a nightclub somewhere. Whatever you need, buddy, I've got your back."
I told him what I needed.
Three hours later, my phone buzzed. "Hey buddy, do you remember George Walker?" asked Bill.
"Yeah, I do. He was a year behind me. He graduated with your class, didn't he? We got along great when he was around, but I lost track of him after I graduated.
"Well, he works at MacMillian and Chambers and is licensed in Florida. He also said you two got along great and was a stand-up guy. He said he'd be glad to handle your case and that you recommended him for his present job."
George and I talked for a while, and then he gave me some news that floored me. "Do you remember Jarvis Jones from the class behind me?"
"I don't think so. No, I don't remember him."
"No worries. He works for Dade County DA. I have something on that bastard, and if it ever got out, his world would come crashing down his slimy ass. At one of our conventions, I took pictures of him coming out of the Hilton with a buxom blond."
"So," I replied.
Bill laughed. "But his wife is a redhead and with a bad temper. She would take his soul along with kids, house, and nuts."
"I am calling in my favor. He said he would pull your case and agree to get the five years with three and out for good behavior.
"Well, that's better than 20 to 30," I replied.
"By the way, as soon as he does, I'm rating his ass out. I took pictures. His wife is HOT!!!! She is so fucking good-looking. I hope she would be down for a little revenge fuck."
I started laughing and replied, "Bill, you're an asshole. And remember, hotness is directly in proportion to craziness."
"Lord, don't I know it?" chuckled Bill. I can't stand people who cheat after catching my dad. It destroyed my mother. I am sorry this happened to you, Jake. If you need anything, call me, and you'll get it.
"And when you get home, I would love you to come to work for me. We can work something out until the bar lets you practice again.