LAW OF THE HEART -- THE WITCH TEST
(Headhuntertales invited all writers to do an ending to his classic story. Nevertheless, I made the attempt to get permission from the author. I have no response after some weeks. So, I'm going ahead.
This effort uses the characters, and diverges sooner than most of them. It picks up in chapter three, when Jake is on the dock and sees Jill, his wife, bare breasted on the boat of the Mendoza brothers. Sally, her friend, and Steve and Meredith are also on the boat. Sally and Meredith are also bare breasted. People get off the boat. The women now have t-shirts on. The group walks toward Jake and his old companion Frank. Jake sees the Mendozas staring at his wife's ass as she walks. In the story Jake allows them to pass, and then follows along, sneaking around spying on his wife, until he sees her go into her room with Juan Mendoza. And later the brother Victor comes to screw Jill. The story got to many people, including me. Here's another take. Please read the original by Headhuntertales.)
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As Jill and Sally walked past me, I realized that she didn't recognize me. Juan and Victor then strode by, with Steve and Meredith. I got up and followed along. When they all got to the end of the dock, they stopped to confer as a group. Jill was standing next to Juan. He reached to hold her hand as they spoke. I notice that she was not wearing her rings. That tore it for me.
I walked up to the group.
"Hey, Juan, drop my wife's hand." They all turned in unison, but I was watching Jill. As she recognized me there was a fleeting look of disappointment, replaced quickly by a smile.
"Oh, Jake," she said, breathlessly, "we were all out for a boat ride."
"So I saw. A super duper ride, that old men with binoculars observe from the dock, so they can see all the tits. I borrowed the binocs. I saw the tits. In particular, Jill, my wife, I saw your tits. Wanna explain that?"
"Jake, it was nothing. Nothing happened. We were just on a boat ride. I was feeling free."
"Free of a marriage?"
Sally interrupted, "Jake, don't be a prude. Jill was having a good time."
I looked at Sally. "How much of a good time?" I looked at Steve and Meredith, "Same question to you guys."
Steve said, "Nothing happened. We smoked some weed. The girls took off their tops. That's all." Meredith nodded her head.
I looked at Juan and Victor, "Well?"
Juan said, "Much as I hate to say it, we never got beyond looking."
"I tell you what, Juan, I really don't care. What I saw was enough."
Jill gasped, "What do you mean? Jake, what are you saying?"
"Jill, did anything happen between you and these guys? Or any other guy?"
"NO!. NO!" She was starting to cry.
Juan said, "Leave her alone, man. You're overreacting."
I turned to Jill, "Why don't you and I go to the room. You do have a room by yourself, right?"
"Yes. Okay."
I took her hand, and we walked off. We made our way to a cabana along the beach. Jill opened the door.
I looked around. Housekeeping had been there. It was neat. Also, Jill hadn't looked spooked when we went inside. I saw no stray men's clothing. At least not in the open.
I motioned for her to sit on the couch, and I did an ostentatious search of the rooms, closets, drawers. Jill started to sob.
"Why are you doing that, Jake? I told you, no one was here with me last night. I didn't have sex on the boat. It was just fun."
"Tell me, Jill, if you had known that I was watching you on the boat, would you have taken off your top?"
"Yes.....no...I don't know. If you were on the boat....shit."
"What I think, Jill, my wife, is that you were feeling single and free. And, even if nothing happened on the boat, it would have happened tonight. What do you say?"
"I love you. Maybe I was feeling...free. But I wouldn't have crossed the line." She didn't seem all that sure.
"How long were you on the boat?"
"Since ten o'clock. Three or four hours, maybe."
"What did you do all that time?"
"Smoked weed, ate munchies, swam off the boat."
"Okay. Where are your rings?"
She looked at her hand. No rings. "I....Jesus. I must have left them on the boat. I took them off to swim. I'm so sorry. I can see how it would look to you. No top, no rings."
"Well, let's just pack up and go. We can spend more time with little Jake."
"I...I'd like to stay. With you. Have fun."
"What kind of fun do you think I can have, with Juan sneering at me and trying to get into your pants? No, we need to get home."
"Baby, if we stay, you and I can get some alone time. We need that. We could have alone time right now." She stood up and dropped her top, and her suit bottom. She wiggled at me. I got out of my clothes as fast as I could, with Jill helping. I picked her up and deposited her on the bed in the bedroom. I spread her legs and started licking her thighs. I moved from one to the other, then to her labia, and to her clit. She came in a minute or so, and I kept at it until she came again. Then I moved on top of her, and entered her quickly. She was bucking against me, and grunting. I felt her have another orgasm, very intense, squeezing and pulsing. I was pulled along and came deep into her.
We lay on the bed, next to each other. I wondered at her response, which seemed much more intense than our normal sex. I figured she had to be thinking of Juan. And, in some way, I couldn't blame her if she was. Juan was fit, tan, sleek, and handsome. I wondered if she had seen his cock when they swam off the boat. Something from the day had revved her up, and I bet it was Juan. But, the fact that she had no aversion to me going down on her, told me that she was telling the truth about the boat. No one had fucked her on the boat. And she kissed me willingly. So she hadn't given head, either. So far, so good.
I took stock of myself. I was pasty white and had gotten a little flabby. I wasn't as tall as Juan. I wasn't sleek, just strong. My cock probably wasn't as big, although it wasn't small. I didn't want to lose Jill, and become a part time father to little Jake. But if I had come down here to discover that she had fucked Juan, I would have kicked her to the curb, no doubt.
I said, "You know, if I had been a day later, you would have let Juan fuck you. And we'd be toast. No family. No marriage. I know you were thinking of him when we fucked, just now."
She was quiet. Then she said, "I can't deny that. That I was thinking of him. Sorry. He's very attractive and he's a dangerous boy. I don't know if I would have let him fuck me. If I thought I could get away with it? Probably. I guess we need to think things through."
I was sad, but also pleased that she was being honest.
"Why? We have a young child. We...I believe...we love each other. Why would you mess with that, for sex....?"
"I don't know. People aren't always rational. I'm not Spock. I'm Kirk. (She was a Star Trek fan). I can get carried away. And Juan....well.....he could carry me away. In a weak moment."
"Jill, I don't know what to do. I'm really jealous about this. I absolutely hate the idea that you want him so bad."
"I can just stay away from him."
"But he's not unique. There are other guys that would have that effect on you."
"You, too. What if your little assistant at work, Melanie, was out of town with you and snuck into your room to get fucked? You know you might do it, if you thought you could."
That little argument she made set us back quite a bit. I reacted quite negatively to it. I didn't think through why just then. I got up and took a shower. When I came out, there was a chill between us.
As I washed off, I considered her statement that I would fuck Melanie. I did like her, and she was very pretty and lively. I can't say I didn't fantasize about it, once in a while. But, I believed that I would NOT fuck her, even if the chance arose in a way that was safe from discovery. I would feel guilty. I would feel the guilt BEFORE it happened. And, I thought Jill would do it, and not feel guilty. She would regret it only if she got caught.
That was unacceptable to me. Yet I didn't know for sure that it was true.
"Are we going to the dinner and dance tonight?" She asked hopefully.
"Why not? What could happen?"
"I'll be good. You'll see. I'm only yours."
So, we went to the soirée. It was open bar at 7:00, dinner at 8:00, and dancing at 9:15. The reunion had set up snacks with the bar -- called canapes. Jill and I arrived at that room about 7:30. Steve and Melanie were there, talking to Sally. We walked up.
Sally turned, "Are you guys all over the boat trip?"
Jill said, "Sally, you're a trouble maker. Just leave it."
Steve asked if we needed drinks. I went with him to the bar. I got a white wine for Jill, and a lager for me. Steve did the same for Melanie and himself. As we walked back, I saw Jill and Sally off to the side talking with heads close. Melanie was a distance off. I went up to Jill, and she broke it off with Sally.
The very sight of that filled me with suspicion.
We had a nice ten minute conversation with Steve and Melanie about their family, and ours. Sally had wandered off. I saw her walk into the room with the Melendez brothers, one on either arm. The three were walking slowly, talking and gesturing. Victor's wife was behind them. Juan broke off and came up to Jill and me.