Based on:
Law of the Heart by Headhuntertales
Headhuntertales stated at the beginning of Chapter One of his story that, "I decided to try something new, a story with several alternative endings. These ending will vary quite a bit, from the romantic to the hardcore. I know the set-up is long, but it needs to be, for all the various possible endings to make sense.
"Also, any authors out there are invited to write their own ending!"
Premise:
Husband asserts himself after seeing his wife being unfaithful at law school reunion
Author's Note:
There is probably no stronger emotion a man can feel than the love/hate conflict inside himself when he finds out that his wife has been unfaithful. I like stories with well-developed characters, extensive dialogue, strong emotion and contention
This is one of the first stories I started for Literotica. I will try to make it as well written and grammatically correct as possible. I admire the prior submissions by the original author of this story, as well as those who have submitted alternate endings. This is my alternate ending.
I will start with a synopsis of what has happened so far, so that this stands as a complete story. I urge all readers to start at the beginning with the original story and read all of the other alternate endings.
This version of Law of the Heart presupposes a number of slight changes to the original story. The alterations I will make to the original story are these: Jake took pictures and videos with his I-phone of the events that happened at the reunion. Also, as well as his placing Jill's wedding rings in the wedding album, he also placed the boarding pass for his flight to Miami. Finally, Jake picked up the blue sarong that Jill discarded during her erotic dance with Juan at the Luau and hid it under his shirt.
I also like to think that Jake could afford something better than a room at the YMCA. I choose to believe that he rented a one-bedroom efficiency suite in one of those hotel-like companies that rent by the week.
What has bothered me most about the ending of the original story and the other alternate endings is that: (1) the appropriate type and amount of revenge has not been exacted from the antagonists: Juan, Hector and Sally. (2) Jake has not been able to regain his total inner self-respect and (3) If he loses Jill, the antagonists win.
As always, special appreciation to my editor, BlackRandl1958.
Characters:
Jake Martin: Lawyer, public defender for the city of Boston
Jill Martin: Jake's wife and a corporate lawyer
Sally Campbell: Jill's roommate in law school and longtime friend
Bill Allen: Fellow law school classmate who hooked up with Sally for the reunion
Juan and Hector Mendoza: Twin brothers and law school classmates--both handsome and charismatic as well as wealthy through their Cuban family heritage. Jill had briefly dated Juan during law school.
Steve and Meredith Carter: Best friends to Jake and Jill. Steve was best man at Jake and Jill's wedding. Steve organized the reunions and served as the unofficial host.
Paul Evans (New Character): Jake's original law partner before Jake was hired away by the city of Boston to become a public defender.
Girard Giadino (New Character): Big time real estate investor. Client of Paul Evans/Jake Martin law firm, who are defending him for arson of a waterfront warehouse.
Henry Williams (New Character): Retired fireman and contract employee of Girard Giadino.
Synopsis:
Jake Martin, a lawyer and Public Defender in Boston, thought it was fortunate that he was able to wrap up a case in time to join his wife, Jill, at their annual law school reunion outside Miami. He arrived just in time to see Jill associating provocatively with Juan Mendoza, one of two wealthy twin brothers who Jake disliked with a passion. Rather than interfere with Jill's un-wifely deportment, he decided to watch and photograph what happened. He saw her spend the day with Juan, his brother Hector, Sally and her escort Bill Allen. After the barbeque and around the bonfire, Jill and Juan and Hector and his wife Maria participated in an erotic dance in which Jill threw off her blue sarong and danced in an unseemly way with Juan. The sarong was blown over to where Jake was standing, he picked it up and put it under his shirt. Later in the evening, Jill, Juan, Maria, Hector, Susan and Tom were in the resort hot tub on the beach patio of the resort. The women were topless and the men kissed and caressed their breasts. Toward midnight, Jill allowed Juan to escort her to her bungalow. Jake, watching from a hidden location nearby, saw Jill give her hand to Juan and invite him into her room. Brokenhearted, Jake made the decision to return to Boston in the early morning.
When Jill returned home on Sunday evening, Jake could hardly contain his anger. He asked her leading questions about her activities. Jill never admitted to anything. She didn't make the connection between her activities in Miami and Jake's hostile demeanor, not even after Jake said he was moving into the spare bedroom.
Jake challenged Jill as to the whereabouts of her wedding rings. Jill stated that she had left them with Sally for safe keeping. In reality, she had taken them off in Juan and Hector's 70-foot luxury power yacht,
The Seductress
. Jake found them during a period of time after it had docked and the partying participants had disembarked. At that time, he took his own wedding ring off and tied it to a leather lace around his neck. He told Jill that he would put his ring back on when she puts her rings back on.
That same evening, Jake heard Jill on the phone talking with her best friend, Sally. He heard the phrase, "Yes, it was amazing". He interrupted that to mean that Sally knew of Jill's infidelities and that Jill had agreed with her that the sex was amazing. It hurt and hardened Jake even more.
Jake, still reeling from the knowledge that his wife had cheated on him with his worst enemies, became more distant and made the decision to move out of the house and into an efficiency suite near his office. He was torn in half. He missed both his child, Little Jake, and his wife, Jill, but he could not reconcile the betrayal he felt with the love he had for Jill. He threw himself into his work. He avoids seeing Jill even though it also means he does not get to see his son.
The Story continues:
The story picks up when Jill comes to visit Jake in his office building, claiming to have found her wedding rings.
Onward...
I didn't go home over the weekend. I slept at the Marriott Suites and spent the rest of my time in my office. I didn't have any other place that I wanted to go. Plus, the deserted building kept me from having to interact with anyone else. In my own way, I was beginning to accept the situation. I was able to keep my anger under control and address the situation in a more methodical manner.
Late Sunday afternoon, my office phone rang. I was using the day to catch up on old case files. There were tasks that I had been putting off for months. Without thinking, I answered the phone.
"You're there!" was Jill's brief reply to my "Hello".
"Yes, I'm here," I sighed. I was not depressed, but rather, for the first time, I was calm.
"Ahhh, ummmmm," Jill stumbled. Finally, she said, "Jake, I'll meet you in the lobby of your building in twenty minutes. Please meet me there. okay?"
"Why?" I asked.
"Please. Meet me there. Please just be there," she seemed to plead and then hung up the phone.
I stopped by the bathroom to make sure my hair was combed and I didn't look too bad. I had become pretty casual about my appearance. I hadn't shaved in two days. I needed a haircut. I had lost weight.
I was sitting in the marble lobby of the County Office building. Only the security guard and I were there on Sunday evening. We both turned our heads with a start when we heard the door open and the sound of heels on marble. I saw Jill walking toward me.
I turned to the guard. "Joe, I'll be escorting this visitor while she's in the building, okay?"
"No problem Mr. Martin," he replied. "Is she a public defender like you? She sort of looks like a lawyer."
"Yeah, she's a lawyer but she is not a public defender. She works for a big law firm."
I met Jill halfway across the lobby and escorted her to the elevator. She looked tired and frightened. She was wearing jeans and had on her heavy winter coat. Her hands were jammed into the deep pockets of her coat.
We were silent as the slow elevator creaked up to my floor. Once in my office, Jill finally unbuttoned her coat and flopped with a sigh into the one worn chair that faced my battered institutional green metal office desk.
I looked at her expectantly. She finally spoke.
Another Alternate Ending begins here.
"You will be happy to know," she said, "that I have my engagement ring and wedding ring back."
Jill took her left hand out of her pocket and held up it up to display her rings.
I was surprised and confused. Did that mean that she had finally looked through our wedding album and found them? I wasn't sure, because if she had she would have found the boarding pass to Miami I had left with them. Her demeanor didn't seem to match what I thought her attitude would be if she realized that I had been in Miami at the time of the reunion.
"Where did you find them?" I asked as I feigned a happy smile.
"Sally had them all the time. I had given them to her for safekeeping when I was on the tour boat," she explained.
I knew she was lying to me--again. First of all, I knew that she did not take the tour boat with her other classmates, rather, she had been on Juan and Hector's yacht,
The Seductress