Another take on my 'I'll see you in the morning'. Same people. Different story but with a lot of similarities but from a different perspective. And it has a different outcome.
When I'm writing my LW stories. If I like the main characters, you get RAAC if not, it's a BTB.
It won't take long to work out what this one is.
Sorry, it is a bit long. I got carried away.
The Red Hart
The evening started well, we as a group of friends had arranged to meet in the Red Hart. Linda had told us they were going out to celebrate Jim's promotion and they were going to spend a night in town at the Red Hart. Our best local hotel, 4 poster beds and everything, you know with no children around. I remembered what Denise and I had got up to in those beds. I knew about Jim's promotion. Dee and David had suggested to all of us that we go and help them celebrate. I wasn't that keen myself, but I could do with a good night out. Dee as usual organised everything, she told us she wouldn't tell Linda until the last minute, a kind of fait accompli. The six of us, Dee and her husband David, Edward and Jane and me, Stephen with my wife Denise. We had been hanging around together for years. All the men played golf and the girls did whatever girls do when they get together, shopping and chatting that sort of thing. As with all groups of friends there can be minor annoyances, and one was Dee trying to organise everything, in most cases it worked. Dee and Linda had been friends since school. But for this get together I wasn't so keen to go, just let Jim and Linda have their night. But not wanting to be left out and to be seen as curmudgeonly, I agreed.
I saw them walk in, we had their drinks ready on the table. Linda looked stunning, and I really shouldn't say that. Jim was a good looking bloke, they made a handsome couple. Jim was heading across the other side of the dance floor when Linda dragged him our way, he stopped, and I saw them get their heads together and they carried on walking towards us. Jim may have smiled but his heart wasn't in it.
Jim put a brave face on it, he danced with Linda a couple of times, but he refused Dee when she asked him to dance. David wasn't a very good dancer. I heard him say he's only dancing with Linda tonight and they wouldn't be much longer down here. At that he smiled, and Linda smiled shyly back at him. It didn't take a rocket scientist to work out what they were thinking about. That big 4-poster bed. They had been there about an hour when Jim stood up and held his hand out to Linda, she took it.
I noticed somebody come through the crowd. It was our local football hero. I'm not much of a sportsman, I don't follow football. I play golf badly, I enjoy the walk. But I did recognise this man, it was said he was going to take us into the Premier League next season, his name was Marcus Vale.
I heard him say, and he wasn't quiet about it. "The most beautiful woman in the whole town is leaving so soon. Can I have one dance?"
Linda looked at Jim and said. "Just the one sweetheart please, it's Marcus Vale."
Jim said something but I couldn't hear what it was. Vale led Linda onto the dance floor. Jim was seriously not happy as he sat down. I asked if he wanted a beer, he probably didn't but I wanted to break into his sadness. He told me he wouldn't have time, it was only one dance. Then Dee as usual stuck her nose in as she does. She slid in next to Jim. "Oh, come on don't be grumpy, it's only one dance and anyway it's Marcus Vale."
I looked round at our friends, they were grinning, this wasn't right, something did not sit right.
This was Jim and Linda's night.
All of a sudden Jim noticed they were on their second dance and this was a slow one. Jim got up and went to leave the booth. Dee stopped him. "Don't go, I'll talk to her." Before he could say anything she turned and walked across to where Linda was dancing with Vale. I saw them talk together, Dee stroked Linda's arm and came back to us. "Just one more." Dee said to Jim. But it wasn't, when they continued with the next slow dance Jim pushed himself out and strode across to Linda and Vale. He didn't reach it, two blokes got between him and the couple. I don't know what happened when Jim came back, he had a thunderous look on his face. The two goons followed him till he got almost to the table. David, Edward and Jane started on how lucky he was, he might get tickets for the next game if Linda played her cards right. Jim sat down but was getting seriously annoyed. He stood up when Linda and Vale turned up, he had his arm around her waist, he was smirking.
She looked at Jim and said. "Just one night sweetheart, and then I'll be back with you for the rest of your life." She turned and walked away with Vale, as she left, she looked back over her shoulder, smiled and said. "I'll see you in the morning. It's just one night. I love you."
I was astounded. She had just ruined her marriage. I had known Jim for a long time, before Linda did. He would not stand for that. I don't know how for one second she thought she would get away with it. She must have had her head turned, probably by Dee.
Dee got in front of him. "It's one night, just let her have one night and she'll be back, she'll make it up to you. It's Marcus Vale."
David and Edward slid out of the booth and stood beside her. David put his hand up onto Jim's shoulder. Edward just stood in the way. "Come on mate, it's just one night." David said. That seemed to make Jim angrier.
He looked at David and said. "So, it would be OK if Dee went off with him and they spent the night shagging, you would accept that?"
"She wouldn't do that, she's not a sl..." He realised what he was about to say. He looked at Dee. "You wouldn't do that would you?" The silence and the look on her face spoke volumes. She would have. Then he realised just what he had said and he had basically called Linda and his wife sluts.
By now David had hold of Jim by the elbow and Edward was standing behind Jim. That did not stop him, he wrenched his arm out of David's grip then spun round knocking Edward on to the floor.
He stormed across the dance floor towards the exit. He got almost there when Vale's two goon mates turned up again. Jim didn't stand a chance. The shorter one of the two just stood close to Jim and Jim went down holding his ribs. I suspect he was punched.
The two goons just stood above him, they said something to him. The taller one of the two helped him up, turned him round and pushed him back towards our table.
He staggered across towards us. I noticed by now Denise had her phone out she had been recording it. Jim was playing with his hands. When he got to our table he looked at us and said, "You bastards, you are no longer my friends and give this to the cheating slut." He threw his wedding ring into the middle of the table, it just spun there for a couple of seconds, we all looked at it. Jim turned and headed towards the exit again this time as if nothing was going to stop him, I had no idea what he was going to do. The two goons saw him coming and stood in his way, this was completely unfair.
"Get out of my way." I said. "I'm going to give him a hand, he doesn't deserve this." I felt Denise's hand on my arm. She was pulling me back as I tried to stand up. I turned and glared at her, what did she know, was she party to this? She let go, she was still recording.
"Leave it be, there is nothing you can do." Said Edward. I tried to slide out the booth they wouldn't let me. David was sitting next to me pushing on my shoulder. I was not having this at all. People were sensing the commotion and were looking towards Jim as he hurried towards the two goons. He would need a hand.
I just tried to stand up, but the table was in the way. I grasped it underneath and tipped it over, complete with drinks and glasses, they went everywhere and I saw Jim's wedding ring spin off into the distance. All the sound stopped, even the band, the silence was deafening. Everyone was looking at me as I walked across the upturned table to help Jim. Jim had used my distraction to get past the two goons although one managed to stick his foot out and trip him up. He got up and carried on out of the ballroom. I caught him up just as he got to the hotel entrance. He had his phone out and started dialling. I assumed he was phoning Linda. It went straight to answer phone. I looked at him and said, "Come on mate, we've got to follow them."
He looked at me and said, "It's too fucking late for that, I'm going home to pack. She can do whatever she wants. We are done!"
"No mate, please as a favour to me help me stop my little sister ruining her life any further."
Because, yes, Linda was my little sister and if she went through with this, her marriage was already over, but her life would get worse, it would shatter completely. Mum and Dad would not stand for it. She worked in the family Kitchen and Bathroom selling and installation business. She would be out.
"Why the fuck should I?"
"As a favour to me and for Sean and Carrie."
He looked at me, scowled and said. "Git, using my kids against me, come on then, we are wasting time." We ran towards my car, I could just see the tail lights of Vale's Lamborghini. It had distinctive tail lights. My Ford Focus would keep up with the Lamborghini unless he pushed it. I had driven there taking Edward and Jane. Edward doesn't like taking his Overfinch Landrover out in the rain. We had planned to get a taxi home, all four of us. I was probably over the limit for driving. I would risk it for my little sister. It was not the first time I had stepped over the line for her, but if she went ahead with this it would be the last.
I helped her with her homework. I fixed her bicycle for her. That's what big brothers do for the little sisters they love. But I remember the time when she wanted to date Kevin Fanshawe. Dad warned her against it, strongly, but she was eighteen, it was her choice.
Dad told her he wasn't a nice person, and there were lots of bad stories going around about him. Fanshawe had that bad boy image that some girls get attracted to.
That Saturday I got a phone call asking me to pick her up. She was in tears. She had gone out with Fanshawe. And because she didn't put out, he dumped her Thirty miles away. I went and fetched her. She cried all the way home. Her dress was a mess. She asked me not to tell Dad. I didn't, but me and my mates did have words of Mr Fanshawe and he never bothered her again.
Linda tended to listen to Dad's advice after that.
I had known Jim for a long time. We went to school together. We were in different streams but met in the woodwork club. He got an apprenticeship as a carpenter. A couple of years after he finished his apprenticeship he came and worked for my Mum and Dad's business, Beaumont Kitchens and Bathrooms as a fitter.
That was where he met Linda. They hit it off straight away. He bought her out of her shell; she had been a bit withdrawn after the Fanshawe event, even though it was a few years ago. I know she wasn't his first nor was he her first, I believe. They married two years later.