This is my forth submission. The idea came from a request of how flirting can lead to disaster and this was my take on that.
My previous submissions had feedback about grammar and tense. My goal was to work on the tense issues I was having while also producing something erotic, and I'm always working toward improving grammar and your feedback helps.
As always, I look forward to your feedback and please enjoy.
Lone
Marie was enjoying the bright sunshine and the warmth of that summer day. It was day one of the annual two-day company co-ed softball tournament and she was glad her husband Ken had invited her to be a part of their team and play. There were 2 games schedule and then the championship game would be held the next day as well as the game for 3rd place.
Marie had always been athletic and had played softball in collage and missed the competition. She had kept her firm body in shape by going to the gym three days a week and running the other two days so she felt very comfortable playing with the guys.
Ken and Marie had married about a year ago after a whirlwind romance where it was love at first sight or at the very least "lust at first sight." They met on the beach in Florida while each was on vacation, tanning and taking it easy. Ken had seen her playing paddle ball on the beach in her bikini and was in awe of her body and had to say hello. At first he didn't see anything becoming of it other than the possibility of hitting a great looking piece of ass. They met that night for dinner and there was an instant connection between the two. During the course of their conversation they discovered they only lived a couple of hours from one another, and she moved in with Ken after only three months of dating. Two months later he proposed.
Marie was feeling pretty good about herself and the way she looked. She tried the uniform on when Ken brought it home the night before and liked the way it fit. It was tight in all the right places and accentuated her best parts, her tits and her ass. She had tied her hair up in a tight pony tail, dabbed on just a bit of perfume, and some lip gloss rounded out her ensemble. She turned around and liked what she saw when she looked in the mirror before heading out the door.
Marie's playing ability and college experience was quickly recognized, and she was enjoying the attention of being called a "ringer" by her teammates and her diving catch to end the inning had both the girls and the guys patting her on the back but it was Tony, who boldly swatted her on the ass as they were running off the field.
Tony was new to the company, but was already making waves, in particular with all the women and he knew it. Standing 6'7" broad chested and a small waist, he was a gorgeous mountain of a man. With sandy light brown hair and blue eyes, he was the all American boy. He played two years of football at Notre Dame before blowing out his knee, and moved to Georgia after graduating last year. And with him being only 24 years old he had every woman from 18 to 80 needing to change their soaked panties when he walked into the building that first day on the job.
The coach had paired Marie and Tony together in the infield where surprisingly they worked very well together, but you could tell he was used to being center stage in everything he did. The guys were paying attention to Marie while the girls were starry eyed over Tony. In between innings and during warmups Tony kept telling Marie she played pretty good "for a girl" and he kept pretty close to her. His little comments and flirting kept progressing throughout the game.
After winning the first game, Tony and Marie were walking off the field when she turned sharply to catch Tony starring at her backside. What she found odd was he didn't try to hide it. In fact when she called him on it he didn't deny it and more importantly commented on how good it looked in her tight softball pants which in turn made her blush. There was no doubt Tony was a hunk of a man and being that he was 5 years younger made her blush even more. Her husband Ken was a good looking guy but there was something about Tony's confidence and swagger that made her breathe hard and caused butterflies in her stomach when he told her that her ass looked good.
When Marie had found her way back to the car looking for a drink, Ken was already there.
"Your boy Tony seems to be full of himself." She told Ken.
"Why do you say that? And why does he have to be my boy, I barely know the guy? The coach asked him to play on our team the day they hired him." Ken asked.
This softball game was a big deal at the company and gave the winner bragging rights for the year.
"Because I just caught him starring at my butt."
"Baby, a lot of guys stare at your butt, it's a damn fine butt." Ken replied smiling.
"Yeah maybe so, but none have balls enough to say so." Marie said sharply.
"What do you mean?"
"Well when I caught him starring when we were walking off the field, he told me how good it looked in these tight pants." Marie says almost gloating.
"I can't much say that I blame him and he's right. Your ass does look amazing in those tight stretchy pants." Ken says while still smiling. "And if I had a dollar every time I caught someone checking you out, we could both retire. And if I'm being honest, it's a turn on knowing I have the hottest wife around." Ken told her and stepped in to give her a kiss and grabbed a handful of her magnificent ass in the process.
When Marie took the field Tony was right by her side and asked, "You know it's not just your ass that looks good, I enjoy seeing you going and coming....and coming would be preferred." Tony's innuendo was rude and crude, but she couldn't help but feel blushed again and made her think, man this dude really has a major set of balls to just flirt with a man's wife who he barely knows, and again his boldness was a confidence that turned her on. She came to the conclusion he no doubt could and would back those words up.
Marie was up to bat and had just got a base hit and was standing at first when Tony followed up to bat. He hit a screaming line drive to the corner and Marie took off running. She was rounding 3rd base and heading home and Tony was close at her heels. She crossed the plate and Tony came in sliding.
"SAFE!" the umpire screamed. The whole team came out clapping and screaming to congratulate them.
They both get to the dugout and Tony sits on the bench close to Marie when Tony whispers, "You know Marie, me running behind you and chasing that cute, tight ass of yours causes me to run faster. You know you could slow down and let me catch you."
Blushing again, Marie tells him how flattered she is but she wouldn't think that her husband Ken would appreciate him talking to her like that or would he approve of letting Tony catch her.
Before the game had ended Marie catches Ken to himself and again tells him about the brash comments Tony kept making and it only brings more laughs from Ken.