Note: This is the fifth installment in a long story about 5 couples that decide to make an adult film together and then have to deal with all of the issues that the project creates. There will be an accompanying story called "The Beach House" that is supposed to be the movie that these 5 couples create.
The different sections of this story won't make much sense on their own. It is recommended that the story be read in its entirety. It was decided to post it in pieces rather than as one massive work to make it easier to read.
The fifth installment sees major progress on the script and one of the husbands gets a visit from his wife while at the office.
Enjoy.
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It was late March before Robert and Susan were able to get together for another writing session. They'd both been working on the story on their own so they had a lot of new material to go over as they sat down in Robert's home office and opened the files that they had been doing their writing in.
"Wow, I thought that I'd done a lot since our last session. You've done even more than I have." Robert said.
Susan smiled.
"That's just the teacher in me; I hate unfinished homework. I probably also had more time to work on it than you did with tax season coming up." Susan said.
Robert smiled.
"Well let's go through what you wrote first and then we'll go through what I wrote. We'll probably have to describe where we picture each scene playing out and what part of the movie it's in." Robert said.
They went through what Susan had written. It was mostly just general dialogue for the parts of the movie that didn't involve sex. Robert really liked most of it; it really fleshed out the story of the weekend and provided a framework for all of the sex scenes. He found that there were several areas where what Susan had written overlapped with something that he'd written.
"I think that in a case where we both wrote either the exact same scene or very similar scenes we should put both side by side and either pick which one we both think is better or take a little of both and make one superior scene." Robert said.
Susan nodded.
"That would be a good way to handle it. We are writing this movie together; we can write different parts on our own, but we can also blend our ideas together into one. What do you think of what I wrote?" Susan asked.
Robert smiled.
"I really like most of it. It's pretty easy to come up with hot ideas for the sex scenes in a movie like this, but coming up with believable dialogue that both fits with the story we want to use and helps set up the sex scenes is much more difficult. Most of what you wrote is really good; there are a few lines that are ridiculously cheesy though. We want this to be a believable movie, not a cheesy porno." Robert said.
Susan nodded.
"I know that there are some really lame lines in there. Some of what I wrote was simply to get me past an area where I didn't know what to say. Those lines aren't something that I necessarily thought would stay in the movie. I was hoping that you'd help me figure out a way to make it work." Susan said.
Robert smiled.
"I'll certainly try if you'll do the same for me." Robert said.
"Of course." Susan said.
After going through Susan's work they went through Robert's work. They were both pleased that they'd come up with so much different material. They went through the few areas where their work had overlapped and blended the two together into one scene that both of them liked.
Robert pulled up the master file that was going to become the script. They went through and put the different scenes and other bits and pieces that they'd written into the right order.
"Okay, now we actually have the start of a script not just character information and ideas for sex scenes." Susan said.
Robert nodded.
"Yes we do. We've actually got a lot more than I was figuring on; we're by no means done, but we've got a lot more than just the sex scenes that we had last time we met." Robert said.
"Speaking of sex scenes, John has requested that we give him more scenes so now that we've got all of this put together, how do you think we should accommodate him?" Susan asked.
Robert smiled.
"It should be pretty easy to come up with a few more scenes for John considering the four beautiful women that we have in the movie. There's one scene that I thought of early on that I wasn't sure how to put into the story that we had so I just dropped it. It would fit if we expanded things to either a 3 or 4 day weekend." Robert said.
"I always had this pictured as a 3 day weekend anyway, but I suppose there's nothing keeping us from making it a 4 day weekend. What was the idea?" Susan asked.
"Do you remember during our first writing session I had the idea for Troy and Emily to make love on the beach in the middle of the night; I dropped the idea early on because of the time constraints of a short weekend. If we bring that back that's immediately one more scene for John, and it helps further emphasize the difference between the two of them and the other girls." Robert said.
Susan nodded.
"Okay I like the idea of putting that scene back in, but it sounded like he wanted more than just one additional scene." Susan said.
Robert smiled.
"I've thought about that and I think the solution to that is to make the scene on the beach one part of a larger arc that fills an entire night." Robert said.
"What do you mean? How do we fill an entire night?" Susan asked.
"We've agreed that Troy is basically a sex crazed maniac in this movie right? He planned to be fucking Emily the whole weekend before he found out the friends were coming. So we have a scene of Troy and Emily fucking when they go to bed. I don't mean the love making scene that we already have, I mean really going at it...not even being quiet. Hell...we could tie the scene of Rachel masturbating into it. We could have her be staying in the bedroom next to Troy and Emily and be masturbating to the sound of them fucking. She could have her light on and her door open and Alison could be out in the dark hallway masturbating to the sound of Troy and Emily fucking and from watching Rachel masturbating." Robert said.
Susan smiled.
"That might be difficult to shoot with 3 different things happening at once, but I like it. How does the beach scene tie into that though?" Susan asked.
"After they get done fucking Troy and Emily go to sleep naked. Troy wakes her up in the middle of the night and takes her out onto the beach to make love down by the surf. She's kind of nervous about going outside naked, but she goes with him to try to make it up to him for messing up his plans. They go right down by the water and the waves are just washing over them as they finish making love." Robert said.
Susan smiled.
"Okay...I like that. It would be two more scenes for John." Susan said.
Robert smiled.
"I'm not done. When they're done Troy takes Emily for a nude walk up the beach. Emily's really nervous being naked outside so eventually she asks if they can go back. As they're walking back she notices Troy's cock is hard so they fuck on the beach again before going back to the house. It's all one night so as far as the movie goes it would flow as being one scene, but it would be 3 separate scenes for John. All 3 would be with Emily...the wife, which would emphasize their relationship compared to the other girls." Robert said.
Susan smiled.
"I like it. It would also give us a good lead in to the hot tub scene with Heather and Emily. After a night like that Emily would be too tired to go to town the next morning so Heather would volunteer to stay with her while the others went to town. They'd get in the hot tub to relax and she would seduce her." Susan said.
