WARNING! WARNING! WARNING! This is a rewrite of a story I wrote and published a while ago, under a different pen name! The last time I did this I was accused of plagiarism. I never submitted this story to Literotica but it was published on another site, so if you think you read this story before, you very well may have.
I have rewritten parts of it and thought I would publish it here. I hope you enjoy the story and like always, I appreciate your comments.
Thanks,
Laptopwriter
CopyrightΒ© 2013 by Laptopwriter
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A light, misty rain hung in the air as Carl drove his Lincoln along the slick country roads wondering which was colder, the near freezing temperature outside the car, or the freeze he was getting from his wife inside the car.
"Are you sure you're okay to drive?" she asked, finally breaking the tense silence. "You're going a little fast for this kind of weather aren't you?"
"I'm fine;" replied Carl. "I've had only three beers all night. I'm not drunk, just pissed."
"You have no reason to be pissed, we were just dancing, that's all. You had no call to confront him like that. It was embarrassing. I doubt very much if Mary ever invites us to another party; not if you're going to go around threatening to beat up her cousin all the time."
"I didn't threaten to beat him up. I simply told him he would have to prove himself a better man than me if he wanted to continue putting his hands all over you like that.
"Look, honey, the man was constantly trying to cop a feel. He had his hands all over your ass, for crying out loud. I'm still trying to figure out why you let him do that. You said I embarrassed you? How the hell do you think I felt, when in front of most of our friends, you let that asshole put his paws anywhere he damn well pleased? You don't think I was embarrassed? Hell, I had to do something, my pride was at stake; yours too, even if you didn't realize it."
Bev turned her head and watched the tall pine trees pass by the passenger side window. Quietly she thought about what her husband just said and gave a small conciliatory sigh. Thinking back to the man's actions she knew her husband was right. She really did regret the embarrassing situation she had placed him in. Her eyes lifted upward to gaze at the large, yellow moon glimmering through the murky haze. Its face seemed to be scolding her as it followed along.
"I'm sorry," she said in a soft, apologetic voice. "I guess he was getting a little fresh. I suppose you had every right to do what you did; but you know me, once I get on the dance floor I just like to have fun. I wasn't even thinking about where his hands were. He was a good dancer and I was concentrating on our moves."
"I know, honey. Unfortunately, he was concentrating on putting some moves on you. I watched for a little while, thinking you would put him in his place, but when you didn't I had to step in, that's all there was to it."
"Alright, I really am sorry. I should have been more aware of what he was trying to do," she said, again with a small sigh. "I really screwed up, didn't I; and right in front of our friends too. I really do apologize, honey. Forgive me?"
Carl knew his wife very well and knew she was telling the truth. She wasn't flirting or being promiscuous. She wasn't even paying attention to the asshole, only to his dancing skills. "Of course, honey," he replied.
"When we get home I'll make it up to you," she said reaching over and laying her hand on his thigh.
"Now you're talking," he said. Just then the inside of their car was suddenly illuminated by a pair of headlights from behind. "Damn, you think I'm going fast, this car behind us..."
"CARL, LOOK OUT," screamed Bev.
Carl's eyes were diverted from the rear view mirror to the on-coming panel truck skating sideways into his lane. There was no time to think or maneuver around the vehicle, all he could do was react. Carl hit the brakes and swerved toward the white, wooden guard rail that separated the edge of the road from the steep embankment that lay beyond.
The powerful automobile lost traction on the slick pavement and slid head on, smashing into the protective barrier, angrily sending tiny scraps of lumber exploding out in every direction. The impact hurled them both forward, straining against their seatbelts. With the sound of a large caliber gun shot, the airbags detonated with such forced that the blast stunned them both and prevented even the slightest chance of Carl maneuvering the heavy vehicle back onto the road.
They felt the car's rear-end spin sideways then start to tip over. Among the sounds of crunching metal and shattering glass, the last thing Carl heard was the terrified scream of his wife as the car rolled down the ridge.
Barry Westchester veered his classic Jaguar to the shoulder of the road, narrowly avoiding the truck. As it passed, its driver regained control and steered back into his own lane as he continued into the drizzling fog.
The expensive sports car came to a stop at the hole in the fence where its young driver had seen the headlights disappear from in front of him. As he ran to the edge and looked down he saw the overturned vehicle precariously perched on a small ledge that kept it from tumbling the rest of the way down the steep bank.
"ARE YOU OKAY DOWN THERE?" he yelled, but got no response. Barry turned to retrieve the phone from his car but stopped when he heard the scraping of metal. The wreck slipped a little further down the hill. He looked again for any sign of movement. Shit, he thought, it sounds like that damn car is getting ready to go over the cliff. If they're still alive they won't be after that. He knew there was no time to wait for nine-one-one. I've got to get them out of there now, he told himself.
Barry could feel his pulse racing as he anticipated climbing down the treacherous slope. He could see his breath as he exhaled with a heavy sigh to gather his nerve. Carefully Barry started his descent. He bent over and tried using his hands for support but slipped with his first step on the icy hill and was sent hurtling down the incline. His painful cry broke through the cold night air as his fall ended abruptly with his knee smashing into the side of the twisted wreckage.
He grabbed his leg with both hands and rolled on the frozen ground, his face twisted in agony. "Damn!" he cursed out loud. He lay there a minute knowing he had to overcome the pain. Then the smell of leaking gas warned him of a new urgency. He forced his attention back to the couple imprisoned within the crumpled mass of steel.
Every window was busted and there was broken glass everywhere. Carefully he inched himself to the passenger side window and found Bev's unconscious body suspended from her seatbelt. She was scraped up but appeared to be breathing. He reached in and felt her neck looking for a pulse. Thank God she's still alive, he thought. He looked across and saw another person, a man in the driver's seat, also unconscious. Assuming they were husband and wife he scoured the rest of the car as well as the immediate area, not knowing if any children had been in the back seat. After a hectic search he concluded the two in the front were the only inhabitants. Now all he had to do was get them both out.
The way the roof was smashed it was impossible to get them through the side. His pulse quickened even more. He knew the only way to get them free was for him to crawl in through the broken windshield, which of course, would be putting his own life in grave danger.
In spite of the cold he could feel his palms sweat, his heart was pounding in his chest. He was scared to death, but had no other choice; he knew he'd never be able to live with himself if he let them die. Barry took a couple of deep breaths and carefully scooted through the broken glass and prickly pine needles to the front of the wreck.
Briefly he froze in fear as he felt the wreckage rock unsteadily from his actions. The brave young man lay on his back, reached up and grabbed the sharp edge above him. He pulled with both hands while using his good leg to push at the same time. He could feel the jagged metal shredding his thin jacket and cutting into his back as he forced himself through the opening.
Finally able to reach the female victim, he used one hand to support her then released the buckle of her seatbelt with the other. Still bracing her body to keep her from being cut as much as possible, Barry carefully maneuvered her from the vehicle. With his knee unable to bear much weight, he grabbed her under the arms, and languished through his pain, limping backwards as he pulled her clear of danger.
Once she was safe he left her lying on the ground to go back for the man.
"Hey, what's going on down there?" he heard someone holler from the road above.
"There's been an accident," he yelled back. "Help me, there's a guy still trapped in a car down here and it's just about ready to fall the rest of the way down the ravine."
"I'll call for the ambulance," was the man's only response.
Undaunted and with no regard for his own safety, he returned for the driver. Determining he was also still alive, Barry again, lay down among the jagged edges of broken glass and used the same technique in getting to the man as he did the woman; but the man was bigger and heavier. Now the smell of gasoline became more pronounced and the terrifying thought of fire cross his mind. Desperately he struggled to untangle the man from behind the steering wheel. He worked fanatically as he felt the steel coffin around him shift and start to slide closer to the edge of the sheer drop-off.
Barry was so close to getting the man free; he couldn't stop now. With stubborn determination he used all his might to push the broken steering wheel out of his way.
Once again, with a terrible creaking noise, he felt the car starting to slip and knew this time it was going down. Holding on to the man as tightly as he could with one hand, Barry fought the excruciating pain in his leg and hurriedly crawled from the shifting wreckage, but the wounded driver got caught in his seatbelt and was still inside.
The thought of his own death brought tears to his eyes but Barry refused to let go as the battered wreckage continued skidding downward, pulling him with it.
A large tree root growing out of the ground provided his last hope. He grabbed for it with his free hand, then with his last ounce of strength, yanked Carl from the jaws of death just as the doomed vehicle slid from the ledge and crashed end over end, bursting into flames as it finally hit bottom.
Operating on pure adrenaline, Barry pulled the man further up the hill to safety and laid him next to his wife.
"The ambulance is on its way," declared the man from the road above. "Is everyone alright down there?"
Barry was in shock and too exhausted to answer. He was just thankful to be alive. His breathing was labored and the pain in his leg was throbbing. There was no way he could climb back up that hill so he lay down himself and decided to just wait for help.
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Carl thought he heard voices but they sounded so far away. What's that smell, it's so strong, he thought and why is he having trouble breathing..."What the hell is going on?" he said aloud without realizing it.
"Doctor, he's coming to."