This stared out as a 750 word story. The aim was to get as close to 750 then thin it down. When I did that, it seemed too thin, so I asked for some advice and decided to take that advice and publish the full story. I also gave me the chance to expand a little bit.
With short stories, some people complain there is no ending, a sort of FTDS. So, for those of you that want to know what happens there is an epilogue part 2 which I will publish in a few days' time.
Les
I was watching Kenneth Branagh in Henry V, he was just coming up to his Band of Brothers, St Crispin's day speech, one of my favourite bits. When my phone rang. It was my little brother, Stevie. That was strange, he was at a swish Golf Club function. We ran a small electrical company together and we had installed some lighting for them in the summer. I got invited to their Autumn Dance as a thank you. Not my sort of thing. I thought the management and the people we met were a bunch of pretentious pricks. I felt they looked down on working people like Stevie and me.
I answered it. "Hi Bro." He said he was several years younger than me, at times I thought he spoke a different language. "Where's Ginny?"
My wife Virginia, Ginny, was on a girls night out, whilst I babysat our two kids Mickey, seven and his sister Victoria, not Vicky. Eight and a half, not eight.
Ginny, five foot eight bundle of fun. A fantastic 36 28 36 figure. She was very pretty, but with a touch of make up she was gorgeous, and she had a smile and a sparkle that lit up any room.
"Sorry Dude, I think she's here at the golf club with a bloke."
"Shit, can you send me a photo?"
"I've already got one, here it is."
It arrived showing Ginny. The light wasn't good, but you could definitely see it was her dancing with this tall, slim, suave man with salt and pepper hair, looked a bit accountant lawyer type, she looked gorgeous, she always did, but I'd never seen that dress before.
They were dancing close, and you could just see him touching her breast. What the Fuck! My phone ββbonged again, and it was another photo of them kissing.
I had to find out what the fuck was happening. I wasn't thinking straight but I had an idea how to sort this out. Shock and awe.
"Stevie, can you watch what happens?"
"Better than that bro, I'll stream it."
A picture appeared on my phone, and it was of Ginny and the bloke at a table, they were holding hands over it.