GONE IN A MATTER OF MINUTES 2
Written by
Vandemonium1
Edited by CreativityTakesCourage
This is the second in a series of very short stories where all the action takes place in timeframes of seconds to mere minutes. Consequently, there is bugger all character development and no long, in-depth ending, so if they are your thing it's probably best if you give the stories in this series a miss.
If anyone wants to flesh them out with consequences, you have my happy permission. I've deliberately been vague with some details to give you more scope. If you're a new writer I will help as much as I have time for.
The idea for this one came to me while reading Wieliczka's fine tale, '24 hours, 5 years, 10 months'.
It been independently rated at 2.5/5 pickaxe handles.
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I knew this was the moment of truth. Crunch time. The ultimate decision-making moment. The moment I'd been dreading for weeks. Contradictorily, it was also the moment exciting me beyond anything I'd experienced before. A strange place to be the most excited I'd ever been perhaps; the rather rank toilets of a seedy bar.
"Well, are you going to do it?"
That was my friend, Lucy, and I knew that one way or another her words signalled I was at the commit or flee moment.
I really should explain what's been happening to get me to this point, shouldn't I?
I've been happily married for eight years to a great guy. He was well worth me giving up my wild ways for and we have a fantastic marriage. The only thing marring our happiness is my inability to bear children, but our marriage is satisfying in every way, regardless.
Then, my old college friend, Lucy, came back to town and reminded me how simple life used to be. Simple and fun. She didn't let the fact she was married stop her having fun, 'It just slows me down', she would constantly say. Whenever her hubby was out of town, and he travelled a lot, she would hit the bars in the seedier end of town. Let's just say, she never had to buy her own drinks and never left alone.
Her stories of having rough, anonymous sex up against a wall, in some bushes, in the back seat of some guy's car in the carpark or back at his place re-awakened fond memories of the old days. Lucy's tales involve having long, loving farewell sessions with her husband in the morning, then being spit-roasted by two bikers in a cheap motel the same evening. They left me squeezing my thighs together and panting.
Over several months she legitimised it in my head. I began to think I deserved what she had. She'd been doing it for years and never been caught, how hard could it be to keep it secret? I tried to resist; I really did.
I tried to encourage Dave to be rougher, more selfish when we were in bed, that way I could close my eyes and pretend it was someone else, but Dave was just Dave, passionate but gentle. The bastard actually cared whether or not I climaxed.
Then, my husband announced he was going on a rare, week-long business trip of his own. Lucy constantly telling me her stories pretty much led me to be continuously horny and five days without sex while Dave was away had me boiling. So, when Lucy suggested I use Dave's absence to take the opportunity to join her on one of her expeditions, my hormones overruled my common sense. I'd kidded myself that I'd just be her wingman for the night but who was I fooling?
Arriving at the bar and being plied with drinks by just about every single guy there loosened me up for some serious dancing. Dancing where I was mashed, mauled, groped, fingered, and every other seedy verb you can think of.