I heard most of the critics and everything was took into consideration, the main change was that I found an editor. Thank you "des67"!
For those who hated the dashs, that's how we make dialogues in my native language and I'm sorry, it took some time but I fixed this and next chapters.
For the harsher critics, I'm clearly not a native english speaker and that was my first story EVER but I hope you can enjoy it now.
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Rose woke up with her mouth dry, the alcohol was charging its price. She saw me snoring heavily, and decided not to wake me up. Still drowsy she left our room heading to the kitchen trying to be quiet. When she reached downstairs, she noticed the TV was still on, and she thought they probably forgot It in the heat of the moment. She headed to the kitchen and filled a glass with iced water in the fridge.
"Lovely nightgown!" Ben spoke behind her, and she felt a chill down her spine since she was still completely naked. She turned to him and instinctively tried to hide her pussy and boobs.
"Oh, sorry! I didn't mean to scare you, I just couldn't sleep."
"It's ok, I just thought everyone was sleeping, you did nothing wrong, and you kind of just seen everything so what a hell," she said relaxing her arms and exposing her body again, It made sense, but she still felt a tingling sensation.
"Mark's dead sleeping, he was really tired from his trip. But I've slept on the bus trip, and I guess the evening was way too interesting, and I just couldn't get some events out of my mind " he laughed.
"I'm sorry for compromising your sleep." she pretended to be offended, and noticed Ben was eating a can of Pringles.
"Let me at least make, us a sandwich." she was starving either and started preparing.
"Thanks, I was eating the rest of the snacks, because I always drink more than eat, and you have no need to be sorry, feel free to compromise my sleep like that any time you want!" she smiled and felt proud.
"I'll keep that in mind!"
"Seeing you like that, will make me a little HARDER to sleep " they laughed at his goofy joke.
"I'm a complete mess, you are just horny," she answered realizing her hair and makeup was messed up, some sheet marks on her face, and body from sleeping and she was pale so there still was some pink marks on her knees, arms and ass from sex and a dried glob of cum on her pussy.
"You are the one who made me horny, and even messed up you look incredibly sexy".
"Stop it, I was just giving the champion, his prize!" Rose winked.
She felt pleased she helped Ben winning, he was way nicer than Mark, it seemed fair the good guy winning for once. She settled on the stool next to him, and handed him a slice of the sandwich she made.
"That's delicious!" he enjoyed his sandwich.
"Horny, and hungry definitely! "she doubted again of his compliments, and they laughed, and she added "I'm always glad to ease your needs " Ben looked at her analyzing what she said.
"So, what is this... you, and Alan thing?" he was uncomfortable but curious about her actions.
"What thing?" she played unaware, while naked alone with her boyfriend's friend.
"You know, you getting naked, and teasing us" he was uncomfortable.
"Ah that thing" she pretended being surprised, and he smiled.
"Not complaining neither judging, just honest curiosity."
"I honestly don't know what is going on, we have never done anything like this but Alan, and I are both enjoying It.
"Yeah, I kind of heard you guys enjoying It, haha!" We were definitely not silent upstairs, and she felt a little horny instead of blushing hearing this.
"Oopsie!"
"But this is all crazy to me, I don't think I could ever let the girl I love do something like that, I admire Alan for his gut. " he sounded honest.
"He said It was all harmless fun, and he knows I wouldn't ever leave him for one of you guys, it's just for fun indeed."
"There are any limitations, what you can't do? If you don't mind telling me." Ben was testing the waters.
Rose felt comfortable talking about this, like they were discussing the weather, Ben had a way of making people open up for him, and everyone always felt secure around him.
"Well, to be honest, the only rule yet is not having sex." She quoted me again.
"Hmmm, I'm wondering if a blowjob counted as sex." he joked not joking.
She laughed, and thought about this possibility for a while.
"Well he did say sex, I guess oral sex is still sex, I'll have to check with him later. " she was thoughtful chewing her sandwich.
"I'm wondering what isn't sex!"
"Well, handjobs, are not sex." She smiled teasingly.
Ben swallowed hard his last bite, and choked a little in surprise he coughed, and she laughed at his reaction, offering her iced water to help him.
"Well you mentioned you were glad easing my needs I was hungry, and horny, and I'm not hungry anymore" he pointed to his empty plate smiling suggestively.
She smiled and finished chewing, and swallowed her last piece of sandwich. She stood up and kneel in front of his stool while Ben, looked incredulous seeing this naked beauty complying with a nonsense suggestion of a handjob. He helped her get rid of his sweatpants, and she could see his erection behind his boxers, she downed them and released his hard dick in front of her eyes. He was about the same size as me, perhaps just a little longer but quite thicker. Rose held his dick in her hand, and started moving. She saw some pre-cum forming on his tip, and she collected with her fingertips and tasted It.
"Hmmm, still not sex." she teased Ben.
His dicky reached full hardness, and she was feeling naughty playing with his dick in her hand. She thought to herself how slutty she felt being fully naked jerking Ben, while I was asleep. Her pussy started getting wet, and she also remembered Mark's dick. She had seen their both dicks now, Mark was about as thick as Ben, but he was soft when she saw it. She pictured herself jerking them both at the same time, one on each hand, and how I would be crazy watching It. Ben grabbed her tits and played a little, he was testing her limits and she not only didn't stop him, but she also inclined herself a little allowing him better access. He started pinching and playing with her nipples getting some soft moans from her and she sped up the pace jerking him.