Derived from the work of George Anderson.
"February Sucks" by GeorgeAnderson
Story Info - He took her because he knew he could. What next?
https://www.literotica.com/s/february-sucks
[:::: Authors Note ::::]
I got a fair amount of feedback and some of it was good and some of it rather harsh. It was still an over all good experience.
My reason for writing this follow up to the other story is still Demarcus "Marc" LaValliere.
While I felt I did a good job with the character there were things I didn't do and loose ends I didn't address. The 3 year gap after his beatdown by Neil Whittaker was a spot that if I took the time could have gotten in several stories. Also I could have had an aftermath of the last meeting with Marc and Gideon.
Marc is still someone that destroyed lives. That is why out of about 100 stories there is a wide variety of BTB endings that creatively punish him. For some reason the concept of Marc LaValliere dealing with the consequences of his actions appeal more to me then having him buried under a Mulberry Tree.
Also I am going to write it in the normal style rather then the script style which some people hated.
I hope this will be worth the read.
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March Sucks
Marc goes for number 188
Marc's BMW
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As Stephanie and Marc walk towards the BMW he sees Gideon with a container of popcorn. He also sees Neil Fracas. With a smile Gideon starts the conversation that will change Marc's life.
"Hello Marc. Marc meet Neil Whittaker."
You can see the concern on Marc's face. Neil is dressed like a biker. Massive shoulders and very muscular. If you are familiar with pro wrestler Brock Lesnar in his prime you can visualize the build. And Neil is a 7ft2 359 pound version of that build.
"You brought in this guy?"
There is a chuckle as Gideon sees that Marc hasn't figured it out yet.
"I know this is a stupid question but are you ever heard about someone named the Black Widow?"
"The Marvel Comic character?"
"No the wrestler."
"Oh yeah. She was famous back in the late 90s. Bigger skank than Tammy Sytch. Boned half the guys in whatever fed she was in and got knocked up by one of them."
You can see the look of horror on Gideon's face and Neil suddenly becoming very concerned. Marc is confused by this as Gideon suddenly drops the popcorn and tackles Stephanie to the ground as she was about to attack Marc. It was just a blur and Marc didn't even realize that he wasn't the target before he was saved from the lady beside him. She is almost frothing at the mouth with rage.
"LET ME GO!!! I'LL RIP OFF HIS DICK AND SHOVE IT DOWN HIS THROAT!!!"
If you ever tried to restrain a cat in a frenzy imagine it being a very very pissed off woman that used to be a pro wrestler. Gideon is a big guy at 6ft9 and 281 lbs but Stephanie is in a rage. She is only 5ft7 and 130 pounds but you wouldn't know that from the effort it is taking to restrain her. As Marc watches stunned Neil clears his throat and that gets Marc's attention fast.
"Gideon saved your life."
To say Marc doesn't understand what is going on is an understatement.
"LET ME GO!!! I'll FUCK HIM UP!!! YOU HEAR ME YOU PRICK!!! I WILL BEAT THE HELL OUT OF YOU!!!"
"Calm down. Let Neil handle it and now we have no popcorn."
"What the hell is she pissed off about."
With a dry chuckle Neil starts talking.
"She is the as you said "Bigger skank than Tammy Sytch. Boned half the guys in whatever fed she was in and got knocked up by one of them.". Kinda pissed her off."
"Oh shit. Can't be her. Black Widow must be pushing 60........."
At those words she starts thrashing and Gideon can barely contain her rage.
"I AM ONLY 43 YOU FUCKWITTED WALKING ERECTION!!!"
"You have no idea how badly you fucked up son. You want to take a wild guess who the wrestler that knocked her up and married her is?"
As he is looking at Neil cracking his knuckles and the look in his eyes shows that there is definitely going to be violence.
"I have protection and they are armed........."
"Had protection. Gideon dropped the first 2 in a heart beat and the other 6 just decided to end their services. Time for your beating."
With that being said Neil grabs Marc by the throat and choke slams him on the hood of his BMW. As Marc is laying there stunned on the dented hood that right hand releases Marc's neck. Neil open hand slaps Marcs chest so loudly it sounds like a gun shot echoing across the parking lot as Marc screams in pain. There is going to be a discoloring in the shape of Neil's hand on Marc's Sternum.
*** For those needing a visual idea of what the aftermath of that open hand chop looks like Google "what does Walter's open palm chop do to the chest". Horrifying to look at and sounds like a shotgun going off. ***
"No permanent damage Neil."
"No promises. He is going to remember this for the rest of his life."
Stephanie is calming down and Gideon lets her up but watching her carefully.
"Hope your kidneys are in good shape."
Taking Marc off the dented hood Neil locks Marc in a Muei Thai head clinch. Then he lifts a knee into Marc's stomach driving the wind out of him as he drops to his knees. Marc is pulled up and there is another knee and then another. Marc is crying in pain as Neil drops him to the ground. Neil drives a shin into Marc's ribs as he is curled up in the fetal position.
"Enough. He has to be conscious to hear this."
The whimpering is heard as Gideon bend down to sit Marc up. Marc is in severe pain struggling to breathe.
"We knew you were too stupid and arrogant to control yourself. You didn't even come close to reading the situation."
With a smile Neil stares into Marc's eyes.
"I don't dance."
"Still think you are 4 times the man her husband is? Hell if it wasn't for me saving you Stephanie would have kicked your ass. Let me help you here with what you will tell the police. You came out and you were mugged. You tried to sneak off with the wrong man's wife."
"By the way I owe Gideon 50 bucks since I lost the bet."
"I kind of took advantage. Neil didn't think you would be that stupid. I already knew you were."
"And you owe me 100."
"Yeah. Don't rub it in. I bet her that she would have to lie to you at some point to make you believe Derrick was her husband and not see the trap we set. I honestly thought you were smarter then that but you disappointed even my low faith in you."
The 3 of them walk off leaving Marc hurt and whimpering on the ground.
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March Sucks
Hospital food sucks even more
Hospital Room 7C North
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You can hear the beeping of heart rate monitors. Marc is in a lot of pain. He is on a Morphine drip currently. If you have never tried it before I highly recommend it. It doesn't get rid of the pain it stops you from feeling. Your brain knows the pain is there. Marc's chest is on fire from that open palm slap. His ribs are making every breath feel like daggers plunging into him. He is lucky. Broken ribs number 5 6 and 7. Several are cracked. The broken ribs will heal since they are part of the rib cage that is more stable. Marc's eyes start to move even though they are shut.
"Good news you are still alive."
As Marc opens his eyes he is not seeing things as positively as Andy does. He is starting to register what is going on and realizes he is in a hospital bed. He sees Andy and he is looking up from the cell phone.
"How did I get here?"
"Ambulance. The police will want to talk to you."
"................ Crap."
On the table beside Andy is the medical chart. He starts reading it.
"Broken ribs number 5 6 and 7. Several are cracked. Hand shaped hemotoma on your chest. Possibly permanent scarring and muscle damage to the pectorals. Badly bruised kidneys. You are likely going to be peeing blood a while."
"Any idea what the morphine level is and can I get more?"
"I pretty much already know the answer. I told you that even 8 security wouldn't stop Gideon. Why the hell didn't you run?"
"Never got a chance before that big fucker was on me."
"Big fucker? Oh no...... You didn't. Tell me you didn't. Holy crap Marc. Hold on a sec."
With that Andy Googles Neil Fracas and shows Marc.
"Was he the big fucker?"
He nods sheepishly while Andy shakes his head.
"Tell me the story. This aught to be a Darwin Award acceptance speech."
"I was at the Playhouse and I spotted a hot Latina chick sitting next to a mousey accountant. She was doing a lot of dancing. I introduced myself and started dancing with her and grinding on that sweet ass. Her ass was firm tight and in those yoga pants I had a raging erection immediately.........."
"Well at least I know why your brain wasn't stepping in."
"Hell a dead man would have gotten hard seeing that ass. So I asked her to ditch her loser husband and I'd show her what a real man is like."
Andy holds up a hand to stop Marc.
"Let me see if I have this straight. You see an incredibly hot woman and try to steal her away from her husband despite knowing that Gideon was still pissed off from the last time you did it. Hell he nearly killed that Dave guy because he was so pissed off."