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Feedback Pt 03 Kitas Story

by hitchhier
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Kita's story

If you haven't read all the stories posted by Adam Shelley aka Hitchhiker on literotica.com over the last 22 years. You've now stumbled on a little literary erotica mine. Some of his earlier stories do have typos and errors, but get past the errors and enjoy the stories for what they are, hot!

Adam's imagination some would consider as filth, but he isn't like that as you will learn as you read the story from my point of view. "Anne and the Looking Glass" is IMHO his most erotic work; and we have role-played the story many times. wink wink!

Here's the link to the Hitchhiker profile.

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=63799&page=submissions

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Yes, I'm Kita, the young naive woman that came to stay with Adam and Mia as a lodger and ended up living with them, as number 2 wife or second wife as it would be referred to in oriental culture, that was now over 20 years ago. (Temus fugit!)

In this very short and fragile lifetime not very many people are even lucky enough to spend a long and productive time with one person they love.

So to be able to share my life with two people I love, is extra, extra special.

Recently Adam has been thinking about posting more stories on Literotica.com. The now 3 part story; 'The Enigma of Margaret Thomas', has received a few fans. But stories published today don't get anywhere near the hundreds of thousands of downloads they once did.

Adam told me his first story Magic Medicine, posted in November 2001, received 8918 downloads in the first 24 hours.

The story also gave him his first ever feedback and from that feedback the character of Anne was born.

There are a few other stories on his hard drive that have been there for over a decade or more. Domestic Harmony (WoW! That is one hell of a story if he ever gets it finished. It could become a classic in the Historic erotica section.

I am now helping and creating but we could use another couple of ladies,(I'll only ever want one man!!) that would like to work on the story themselves, writing from the point of view of their very own chosen character.

For dear readers, the story is getting complicated with many many interesting characters.

I know from some of the anon comments on Hitchhikers work, that there are ladies out there that would love to write but are too scared or nervous to have their own profile. Here's your chance to stay anon and yet play with people's minds.

That's why I will stay here and post under the hitchhiker profile. (Little message to those guys out there that bombard female profiles with photographs of dicks, DON'T its fucking rude!)

There is another story that will become a longer Series, that is, 'Lucy and the writer.' part 1, "Escape" already posted. Spoiler alert, the maid character was my idea.

But I digress, the Enigma stories are actually based on Adam's teenage years and his wonderful relationship with a woman 34 years older than him at the time!(yes!) As Adam says real life is stranger than fiction.

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Back to my story.

When I moved to Oxbridge to study for my degree and later Phd I was a very naive and fragile young woman of 23. My parents are from Japan and China. Both academics. They instilled in me a very stern work ethic, and I've always found it difficult fitting into normal society.

Hence I preferred to be alone, in my own company and concentrating on my studies. My study and research were my whole life.

The accommodation the estate agent had found me was horrendous, a dark and damp, basement flat. I'd been in the dingy flat for 5 months, through a very cold and grey, English winter. I'd had cold after cold. I also always felt cold living in such a dark damp environment. Black mould grew in the corners and I spent a lot of my limited money on cleaning the mould and heating.

To save on heating I'd spend hours in the library just to be warm, but at night I had to return to my dingy damp flat.

However, lady luck was going to smile on me when I saw the advertisement for Adam and Mia's room, so I jumped at the opportunity.

Accommodation near a university is always expensive and difficult to find, with too many students fighting over too few suitable places to live.

To get to their house required a 45 minute bus ride. I was nearly put off about taking one and half hours out of my day and I nearly cancelled the appointment, but I'm so glad in hindsight that I didn't cancel.

Mia had walked to the bus stop to meet me. I must admit from the first moment I saw her I fell in love with her, much as Adam must have done when he first saw her 34 years ago.

Mia is so different, full of life and very honest.

So you can imagine how nervous I felt when I first met her husband.

Adam is the most fascinating man I have ever met. Honest, enthusiastic about everything he's interested in. Many people would describe him as marmite (you either love him or hate him) He has a love for the earth that I've rarely seen in a person. Where trees are concerned he describes himself as a Dendromaniac.

They both welcomed me with such love and passion I felt as if I'd found another set of parents.

As we learnt to live together Mia and I became like sisters sharing our time and learning about each other.

Mia and I travelled to class everyday on the same bus, the buses had free Wifi so we could study whilst we travelled.

Mia was like a sister but there was also an attraction between us. We would touch each other quite intimately without noticing our closeness and we could talk about everything.

I was attracted to her and I thought she was attracted to me in the same way.

Adam adores Mia, he touches and kisses her at every opportunity and Mia enjoys all his affection. He would caress and fondle her quite openly even around me. But I felt he was being less tactile than if they were alone.

One day I walked into the kitchen, and Adam was standing behind Mia whilst she was at the kitchen sink washing-up.

He had his hands under her blouse fondling her breasts, whilst he kissed her head and shoulders. Mia was pushing her bottom backwards into his crutch and protesting that 'Kita' might come in! Her protests were weak, she was clearly trying to push back and feel if he had an erection.

I stood and watched and felt aroused by them making love in front of me. The sight of their intimate behaviour made me tingle. I walked up behind them and hugged them both tightly

It was so sexy.

That night I fantasised about actually being with them and making love.

I knew Adam was attracted to me and I wanted Mia.

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My imagination ran wild.

I imagined I had walked into the kitchen, stopped and watched as he ground his hardness into Mia's bottom, gently protesting that I might walk in at any moment. I stood there behind them. My fingers found their own way to my tingling pussy. Then I'd quietly walked up behind them in the kitchen and instead of putting my arms around them I'd pushed my hand between them and squeezed Adam's hard cock through his trouser.

I'd then said to him 'You could have us both, my Gir-gir is already wet.' Just the memory of it makes me wet right now.

As time went by, I became more and more attracted to Mia.

I'd had sexual relations with girls at school so for me to want a woman wasn't unusual.

Men have always scared me and I find Asian men so dark and hairy and they are always aggressive in their approach or so timid that they are like little boys.

Adam is very fair skinned, blond, and I did and still do find him attractive. He is also very loving and romantic towards his Mia. He's the sort of man I wanted.

At the time Adam had a job working nights as a security guard he drove over 160 miles each night looking after the security of businesses in and around Oxbridge. He had even caught a burglar with the police on Christmas day.

With Adam away from home nearly every night, Mia and I could be very relaxed together. It was late June and very warm. I had just a silk kimono and knickers on and Mia was wearing a thin blouse and knickers. She complained that even wearing just the blouse she was still too warm. I'd said I wasn't bothered if she took off her blouse as I'd be more comfortable in my knickers. We smiled at each other and bared our breasts to each other. All very innocent but not!

I'd been living with them for just over 2 months and it was the week after we'd been viewed as a family on a day out to the seaside.

A stranger had remarked that Adam's and Mia's daughter (me) was very beautiful, we all love compliments. After that, I walked between them pretending I was really their own grown up daughter, their little girl.

Neither of them had denied that I wasn't their biological daughter at the time and this acceptance was extremely profound as we walked along the seafront after the remark had been made.

It seemed innocent but I think for all three of us it was the start to our relationship becoming more.

Adam made love (and still does) to Mia at least 4 times a week and even though they were quiet I could always hear them in their passion. Their normal time was early in the morning when Adam came in from work. He would come home and get into bed and make love to her.

I would play with myself and try to come when they reached climax, some mornings I would imagine that Adam came up stairs and into my room; and made love to me instead.

In my imagination he would come into my room pulling back the duvet. He'd look down at my bare pussy my nighty pulled up ready for him.

In the morning Mia literally glows after they've made love. Still 20 years later their habits of love making are the same. Well the frequency any way, wink,wink!

Adam can and still does look at me; he looks at both of us. He compliments us; he can stare right into my soul, making my insides melt with desire. He still caresses us both equally, teasing us in the most delightful ways.

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Adam had gone to work. He'd not been happy at the idea and on leaving I'd watched him kiss Mia, and he pushed his hand between her legs rubbing her quim through her knickers "Make sure she's ready for me in the morning." He said in a husky whisper. Mia replied equally aroused "We'll have to see. I've got to wash my hair. Now go!"

A little while later I heard Mia getting into the shower. I waited a minute or two feeling very nervous about going to join her in the shower, but wanted her so much. Finally I plucked up my courage and undressed. I went into their bedroom, just wrapped in a towel nervously fearing rejection. I asked Mia "Can I wash your hair?"

Without a moment's hesitation she turned around and slid the shower door open and invited me into the cubicle. I took off my towel and stepped in.

We stood facing each other. The hot water pouring over our naked bodies made each other wet and caressed touching and stroking. My hands ran all over her body and Mai reciprocated. Touching my breasts and tummy, her fingers even touched my pussy and I found her pussy. To my surprise her pussy was shaved. It felt so sexy, all smooth and hairless.

"What's it like having no hair down there?" I asked.

Mia told me it was very sexy and she felt it was also cleaner. I asked her to shave me.

We washed each other's hair and then Mia went and found scissors and a new razor.

Mia came back into the shower, knelt down between my legs and started by snipping away my curly black pubic hair.

I'd never felt so naked and vulnerable in my life, my pussy gaped. I felt so open, so wanton, so utterly free, so sexy.

I wanted Mia to take me, to love me. I wanted to hold her and feel her to give her pleasure whilst she touched and pleasured me.

My pussy was so hot and wet as Mia cut away the wiry hair. She even kept a little tuft as a souvenir.

When my pubic hair was short enough she lathered my whole pussy right around to my bottom she rubbed me in all the right places, she even pushed a finger inside me. Looking up into my eyes.

With gentle long strokes of the razor Mia removed all the stubble making my pussy smooth and hairless.

(Shaving became a weekly ritual, but it isn't done in the shower, we do it on the bed. Adam shaves us both.

We are shaved one at a time. We have to lay right on the edge of the mattress, our bottom just over the edge,our legs wide apart, our feet on the posts of the master bed. It's so very very sexy laying there totally wide open and defenceless.

Adam makes a lather and applies soap to one of our little pussies. He always rubs the suds into all our folds. He tickles our clits, he pushes his fingers into our cunny and rubs our G-spots. Then when we are just getting turned on he'll start shaving away the stubble. Mia just loves it when he rinses her shaved pussy with a hot flannel and he'll do it 2 or 3 times.

He always checks there are no missed hairs and removes any with the razor. When we are both smooth and clean he'll start licking or fucking whoever was the last to be shaved.

I love it when Mia is second as I can suck his beautiful cock as he kneels on the floor to eat her sweet pussy.) Anyway, back to the story.

Mia rinsed my pussy. She ran her fingers across my smooth bare flesh. My own fingers found my clit and started to rub my little bud but Mia took my hand away and then to my utter delight and ecstasy I felt her mouth on my sex. At first she was tentative until I reassured her I approved of her sucking on my clit and outer lips

She must have been copying how Adam ate her as her tongue pushed into me. Her actions were forceful yet gentle. Then she pushed one, two and three fingers into my all too willing vagina.

Three fingers was a little too much and I asked her to use just two. I was struggling to stand in the shower. I lifted her up from kneeling between my legs, and we kissed.

'Can we get dry? I want to be in bed!' I asked.

We rinsed off and got out of the shower and dried our hair with the hairdryer. But we both couldn't keep our hands off each other.

We climbed into bed and began our love making again. Mia got between my thighs again and resumed her assault on my pussy and clit. After only minutes of Mia sucking my clit and pussy lips I experienced the most earth shattering orgasm I'd ever had. I thought I was going to faint with the sheer intensity of it.

I'd masturbated with a vibrator many times but had never experienced an orgasm of so mind-blowingly intensity.

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Mia crawled over my body placing little kisses on my tummy. She gently nipped my nipple's that had become so sensitive it was like tiny electric shocks coming from my nipple's as she lay on top of my body our lips met in another passionate kiss. I could taste my own juices on her face and lips. I sucked her tongue into my mouth wanting more of her.

I wanted to devour her, have her very being inside me. We rolled on the bed entwined, touching, stroking and kissing. I wanted to pleasure her with my mouth as she'd pleasured me.

But I wanted her mouth on my sex as well and so manoeuvred us into the 69 position. We spent what must have been an hour giving and receiving pleasure from each other until Mia reached over to the bedside cabinet and bought out a pink rabbit vibrator.

"Fuck me with this. I need to feel cock in me. I like what you've been doing but I need a hardness in me."

We were both learning new things. I took the toy and switched it on. It began to vibrate and twist as the beads inside the short shaft rotated. I took the toy and began to tease Mia's gaping. It was so open. At first I moved the rotating tip around her opening.

'Oh just fuck her, fuck her, fuck her please' she begged. 'Oh I wish Adam was here. He could have you as well.'

My imagination went into overdrive. The thought of Adam in bed with us made me come deep inside. A feeling of wanting I'd never felt before.

'You want to share your husband?'

'Well of course I do. It's bad enough I'm being unfaithful now. He is my love, my forever.'

Her absolute conviction for us to become 3 was so beautiful.

'He will be my first, then.' I said

'Oh? I know we should make it like the story with Jondala in the valley of the horses.' Mia said.

'Of course you've not read Adam's stories on literotica have you?'

I must have looked totally confused and amazed at this revelation of Adam having stories on the web.

'How many stories does he have!' I was now so intrigued.

'Oh I think it's 12 or 13 I'm not sure. Shall we be naughty and read some together?' Mia suggested.

We kissed and cuddled for a while more but I could tell she wanted me to see the stories and I surely wanted to read them.

We both put on dressing gowns and went to the computer.

Mia bought up Adam's profile page. It even had a picture of him with his shirt open. The poor quality of the picture made him look so ordinary and yet, to me anyway, so very sexy.

'Ah yes this is the story. EarlGrey and two sugars.' Mia opened the story.

As the text came on screen I began to read.

'Whilst you read the story I'll go and make tea.' Mia left me alone to read how Hitchhiker had made love to an emotionally injured woman, and showed her that not all men are shits. Rose then arranged for Hitchhiker (Adam) to deflower her virgin daughter. Wow I thought as I read the words.

Mia was proposing that Adam or rather the Hitchhiker deflowered me in a similar way.

My cunney yearned to have him, to have him whilst his wife encouraged him to make love to me.

Mia had returned with the tea and she hugged me close.

'Do you want him? Do you want to become one with us?' Mia asked me.

'I want both of you. I want both of you to be in my life.' Mia affirmed.

You can imagine by surprise, shock and sheer joy to be invited to be a part of Adam's and Mia's Mai's life and marriage.

'What does Adam think about your idea?' I asked.

'I haven't asked him but I'm sure he'll agree. He's often said jokingly he'd like two of me, so let's see how it goes.

I want him to fuck us both at the same time. Kita I love you and I love Adam and I think you love both of us too.'

My mind was in turmoil. I couldn't believe that Mia was putting into words my true desires. It was as if we'd seduced each other by intuition.

Mia admitted she had been fantasising about bringing a woman into their relationship for a few years.

I began to cry and laugh at the same time Mia also started to cry and laugh. We were so overcome with joy.

'What if he says no?' I asked.

'I doubt he will. I've watched him over the last few months and he has been hinting that he'd like you and I to make love and for him to watch. But I've been too nervous to say anything. When we are making love I often tell him to fuck her, in the third person. It's normally after he's eaten me and my orgasm is so intense I feel like a different person.

If he agrees I'll be able to tell him to you fuck you for real. Isn't that sexy?'

Mia lent forward and kissed me with such passion. Looking at me so intently she went on.

"So when you came into the shower tonight, you just fulfilled a dream, a fantasy.'

I pulled her towards me and we kissed and kissed. Mia led me back to bed and we fell asleep in each other's arms.

Before Adam got home from work Mia suggested that I return to my own bed just in case we hadn't read Adam's desires quite right.

Unfortunately Adam didn't come home at his normal time that morning, due to an incident at work so we'd both left for uni, before he arrived home.

Two days later I heard them making love. Their bedroom door was slightly open and I could hear everything. I could hear the slap of their bodies as they banged away.

I heard Mia cum then Adam as he pumped his hot semen into his wife's wanton pussy. I was wanking myself off just as passionately hoping it would be my hot quim to feel spunk shooting into me.

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