This is a different ending to the GeorgeAnderson story "February Sucks". I think there's already been five or six. Every time I got close to trying to submit this, another one was published. I saw one commenter say to let the story die. I hope that doesn't discourage someone else from trying.
This is my first submission. This story intrigued me and bothered me at the same time. I did get permission from the original author and at least one of the sequel authors before submitting this. Thanks to both. It was requested that I add the URL here for the original. Frankly, when I am looking for a sequel, or an original to a sequel, I google the name of the title or the name of the author followed by "Literotica", and they always pop up.
I know it's too long, or maybe too short. I know there are misspellings. i know the grammar sucks. I know it's impossible for this to happen in real life. I know it's factually incorrect. I know it's in the wrong category. (There is no sex, but since all the related stories were in LW, I figured I would keep it here). If you're tired of the story line you should probably skip it. Of course, you know what this about by the title, and you're still reading.
I do not have an editor. I do not have a proofreader, I do not have a beta reader, or an alpha reader, or any other kind of reader. It's me and my iPad. Thats it, and my iPad is old. If it's that bad, I apologize, and you will know to ignore any future submissions by me.
In a subsequent email, it was suggested that I post the link this way, https://www.literotica.com/s/february-sucks. If this doesn't work, I'm sure it's my fault. If it does work, much thanks to GA.
Some of the things are probably not realistic, but in my world they would be. No need to fact check, I know it's fiction.
Quick recap:Jim and his very beautiful wife Linda go to a club with four other couples for what is supposed to be a 'special night' for them. Linda is approached at their table by a local professional football 'hero' and accepts his request to dance (even though she has refused to dance with any other of their friends, citing her and Jim's 'special night'). After returning to their table, Jim suggests that they, (Jim and Linda) head to their room to finish the night off. Linda says she has to use the bathroom first, and Dee goes with her.
My version starts in the club just after Linda leaves to go the bathroom with Dee. It most closely builds off the version given by Greenday0418, but takes a detour. Some of the dialogue is close, but with relevant changes.
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My wife and her friend Dee had gone to the bathroom together, and the conversation immediately turned to why women had to go the the bathroom in pairs or groups, but never alone. I wondered out loud what was taking Linda and Dee so long and the group seemed to pump up the conversation even more. I was just standing up from my chair when Dee came back. Alone.
"Where's Linda, is she OK?" I asked.
"Relax Jim," Dee said as she smiled, "Linda is fine. She just had something to do. You don't need to worry about her, She's a grown woman, you know."
My friends started teasing me about how much I worried about Linda. It's true, I did. I used to think she worried about me the same way. I put up with it for about three more minutes, and when Linda still hadn't returned, I'd had enough. I got up, pushed off Dees' hands trying to hold me back, and headed to the bar.
I got the bartenders attention and said, "excuse me, my wife went into the
bathroom about 15 minutes ago and hasn't come out. Could you send someone in to make sure she's OK?"
The bartender pretty much ignored me so I turned on my heels and went through the Ladies bathroom door. "Linda, where are you? You OK?"
A voice responded with "excuse me, this is the Ladies room and I think I'm alone in here, and I'm not Linda."
"I'm sorry Miss, my wife Linda was in here and I'm trying to find her."
"There were two women in here about 10 minutes ago and I'm pretty sure one was named Linda. The one with her was talking her into leaving with some guy."
"Fuck! OK, thanks."
I walked out of the door and practically walked over top of Dee. "Jim, she's alright. Come back to the table and I'll explain everything."
"Screw you Dee. The woman in the Ladies room heard your whole conversation with Linda and explained what happened."
"Jim, lets go to the end of the bar where there's a little privacy."
Once we got there she started. "Jim, Linda loves you. She loves you and your children with all her heart and more than anything in the world, and she always will\ and you know it. She will be home in the morning, but she is spending the night with Marc Lavalliere."
I stood there with my mouth open. I couldn't believe what I was hearing. I saw images of Linda sneaking out the back door with a smile on her face. Images of the Asshole dancing with my wife. My anger rose significantly. "So, on what was supposed to be a special night for US, she left me for another man!"
"Jim, she didn't leave you. She'll come home tomorrow and you'll have plenty of special nights together."
"How many are going to be just like tonight? You know, where she decides to end the 'special night' with a man other than me?" I could see the wheels turning. Before she could answer I started again. "So tell me, BITCH, Why would you help her do this?!"
"Because, I knew she really wanted to do this, and she deserved it," she replied indignantly.
I was really starting to lose my temper. I grabbed her by the upper arms and pinned her up against the wall. I angrily said, "are you fucking kidding me? She DESERVED to be allowed to cheat on me?! What you mean is that YOU really wanted her to want this, and YOU really think she deserved to be allowed to cheat on me! What you want is to turn her into a slut like you!"
Dees' husband, Dave, put his hand on my bicep and said "hey dude, that's my wife you're roughing up there."
I never looked at Dave, I kept staring into Dees' eyes. "I'm not roughing her up Dave, I'm trying to find out why she helped wreck my marriage."
Dave kept his hand on my bicep and said, "Jim, look, this isn't that big a deal..."
"Dave," I hissed, "if you don't take your fucking hand off me, I'm gonna punch you in your fucking throat!"
Dave was starting to realize just how pissed off I was and took his hand off my arm, but didn't move away. "Now Dee," I said, "before I really lose my temper and hurt someone, where did the asshole take my wife?"
"To his mansion."
"So tell me, after he's had his fill of fucking her, what's the plan supposed to be? Me being happy and proud that she was chosen, and fucked, by the almighty sex god?"