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February Sucks And Marc Learns

February Sucks And Marc Learns

by plenty_of_fisherman
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Derived from the work of George Anderson.

"February Sucks"

by GeorgeAnderson

Story Info - He took her because he knew he could. What next?

[:::: Authors Note ::::]

I started off writing some stories mainly to tell my adventures as a Fisherman of Plenty. I did not really think about doing much more. But there was an urge to write again. I used to do a lot of writing Wrestling based stories.

Basically the short version of an E-Fed is people come up with a wrestler who participate in weekly wrestling matches. They told a story and the writer who wrote the best story won the match. Also I was one of the people that wrote the weekly wrestling matches. I wrote several hundred of the short stories as well as several hundred matches. I was considered one of the better story tellers and considered one of the best at putting together entertaining and believable matches. The matches I wrote were generally 3-7 pages and the stories were 5 to 15 pages. Pretty much 10-20 pages or more of original content each week.

I have two stories that are not wrestling based and unpublished anywhere because they were just things I wrote and revised time and time again. I will be publishing them but I'm working on a new creation as well as an introduction of the Gideon Fontaine character..

This is a story topic that gets both a lot of love and hate. The February Sucks story by George Anderson posted on September 11 in 2020. It is probably the best story that is on Literotica because of how many spin offs, sequels, parodies, and revisions. And there are stories based on the spin offs and sequels to the sequels. I have several saved to my PSP in a text format. One folder has 74 and I started a second folder that has 21. There are about 7 I haven't converted to text files yet. This isn't even all of them. These are just the ones I personally saved for my reading enjoyment.

There were a lot of things that caught my interest enough to want to write my own version. My problem is I do not want to try and top some of the better writers and also there are so many versions it is a multiverse all by itself. I do not feel I need to improve on the way George Anderson wrote it. I consider it the official version and intend to reference it as canon barring the things that happen as a result of adding my characters to the story. I can't keep it 100% faithful to the source story because Gideon will be interacting with the people on that February night. Plus I dislike Dee almost as much as I dislike Marc. She is the B that BTB was created for. Also since I altered Marc's timeline there are ripples towards the main characters Jim and Linda because in this version other then the February in question Marc is never in contact with Linda ever again.

My reason for writing is Demarcus "Marc" LaValliere

In the February Sucks multiverse stories Marc has been killed many times in many ways. Mutilated and crippled. Ruined. Jailed. Almost every BTB scenario you can imagine including ones that you wouldn't imagine like vampires. To be fair after Twilight no one can do anything worse to the Vampire genre then that testament to bad acting, necrophilia, and beastiality. There is not a lot of sympathy for Marc because what he does is so cruel and ruined a lot of lives. When I see a new February story I look forward to see what BTB is crafted for Marc next. So far no one has loaded him into a space ship and shot him into the sun.

I prefer to write in a script style. Makes the Dialogue easier to follow and also I try and avoid big sections because I have found the longer the paragraph and the section the more likely readers go into skimming mode and do not read it.

The story started out as a rough chain of events in my mind. As I've thought on them I added, revised, and changed the way it was going. Plus with the dialogue I veered off in ways I never planned. I used to write collaborative tales in real time with other writers. Based on the reactions and ideas what was originally one idea occasionally ended up as something unexpected. The Christian Substance Abuse program was a lot longer then I intended but it was a fun way to get under Marc's skin.

As the story is being written there are some random things being added and at times a narrator comment. Not planned but sometimes the mind wanders and you gotta chase it. Kind of like when you are watching Dukes of Hazzard and then you hear the voice talking about what is happening.

As far as I know no one has decided to make Marc the focus of the story. Maybe this will be disliked because Marc is so unlikable. Maybe someone will see this like the story that made Dave and Dee the focus and do their own interpretation of the villain of the story.

In my opinion Marc was intended to be a throwaway character of no real importance. My interpretation is he is a spoiled man child because he is living a life of very little consequences. He is the basic spoiled self entitled celebrity thinking the world needs to cater to them. Because no one has ever called him on his bull shit he never had to be a decent human being. At the end he is forced to deal with his actions and being the villain in his own life story.

I hope this will be worth the read.

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The day Gideon finds out who Demarcus LaValliere is

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Fontaine Enterprises -- New York City Branch

Outside Gideon's Office

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There is the sound of crying in the office. Amanda is bawling. Amanda Merriworth is Gideon's personal assistant and an unbelievably efficient logistics person. She can supply Gideon with data on whatever he needs to know and generally in real time as he needs it. She will not only have a shovel in Gideon's hand when he needs it. She will generally have it waiting for him. She has been with Gideon through many events and been a rock for him. There is a very short list of people Gideon cares about and Amanda is a person he loves as a family member as well as an employee.

When Gideon sees Amanda crying he immediately is by her side to comfort her. He is by her chair kneeling beside her with a supportive arm around her shoulder for a hug. He looks into her eyes waiting for her to regain her composure to talk to him.

Amanda: Traci is in the hospital!! She tried to kill herself!!

That is a name that Gideon knows. Traci is Amanda's cousin. Amanda is also the god mother of Traci's two girls Francine and Florence.

Amanda: Her father heard her hit the floor after she cut her wrists. He broke the bathroom door and called for an ambulance while trying to stop the bleeding.

Gideon: Where was Trevor?

Amanda: He left her at her parents and said that Traci was dead to her. He was starting the divorce.

Gideon: What happened?

Amanda: She cheated on Trevor. The son of a bitch that seduced her sent videos of him taking her ass to Trevor from her phone.

Gideon: Why in the world would she do that?

Amanda: He is a famous football player. He told her that it would be the greatest sexual experience of her life. Her friends egged her on and said that Trevor would forgive her. It was just one night. She was stupid and thought she could have her fantasy and not ruin her life.

Gideon: I can't believe she could be that stupid.

Amanda: It was all a sick game to that bastard. It wasn't about sex. It was about humiliating the husband. He was taunting Trevor saying things like I stretched out her ass out for you and left you several cream pies.

At that point a dark anger crossed Gideon's face. His eyes turned very cold. There are not many things that provoke Gideon but this one hit several triggers. Amanda could sense the anger.

Gideon: What is his name?

Amanda: Demarcus LaValliere......................

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The day after Gideon finds out who Demarcus LaValliere is

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Fontaine Mansion -- New York City

Training room

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The man in the center of the room looks more like a model then a fighter. He has long blond hair which is always meticulously kept. Always clean shaven taking great pride in his appearance. He is 6ft9 and 281 lbs. Based on his size he can be intimidating but most do not know of the muscled physique beneath his attire.

Gideon is always sharply dressed. He almost always has a Black Armani Suit on. This suit has been expertly cut to his physical size and has enough flexibility to allow him to use his martial arts skills with no strain on the suit. He wears a black silk tie that matches the suit and mirrored sunglasses. He has diamond cufflinks and a custom made gold watch. The watch is capable of withstanding a sledge hammer. His shoes are made with custom soles to allow him the traction to use his moves in the ring. He occasionally has a Katana and Wakizashi at his side. On this day he has both swords.

Gideon: Demarcus you are in for more trouble then you ever imagined possible.

There is an eerie quiet as he stands in the middle of his training room. There are 10 ballistic dummies set up. Faster then an untrained eye can follow Gideon's right foot comes off the floor in a Muay Thai style shin kick at the side of the head of the first dummy. You can see where the skull cracks and starts bleeding out under the ballistic gel. The whole thing from the starting of the kick to the cracked skull took under two seconds.

Gideon: He is a linebacker for the Sharks. The owner knows me.

With a short side step a backfist at the head of dummy number 2 shatters the jaw. If you look at Gideon you can see the control is starting to slip. His eyes are showing the intense rage of a man that is doing his very best to keep the demons locked away. When Gideon gets in a mood like this he becomes the Osaka Assassin a vengeful ruthless killer.

Gideon: I need to calm down.

A pivot and then a knee to the chest of Dummy number 3 shattering several ribs.

Gideon: Amanda has done quite the work up of this bastard. His father walked out on him so big surprise he has daddy issues. He seems to suffer from Narcissistic traits but in my opinion he is just an entitled brat thinking the world revolves around him like most celebrities.

A smile crosses his lips as he withdraws two throwing knives concealed in his suit sleeves. It has been a while but they have a quick release that allows them to be in Gideon's hand with a quick twist and bend of the wrist. With a quick motion the knife from Gideon's left hand buries itself in the throat of Dummy number 4 and just as fast another knife imbeds itself to the hilt in the forehead of Dummy number 5.

Gideon: I can not wait to personally meet Demarcus. He will be in for an interesting weekend.

With a laugh you hear the sliding of steel as both swords are pulled. A glint of silver in the air as both swords are swung at their targets decapitating Dummy 6 and 7 simultaneously.

Gideon: I haven't been to the Morrison before. Demarcus thinks he is the Alpha male of this hunting ground. He is going to learn he isn't even close to an Alpha Male.

Now that the workout is ending there is a smile. It takes a bit of thinking but there are several plans now. They are going to be really easy to do. There are few things in life that are inevitable laws now. If you have the time and the money you can do anything you want. The difficulty only exists based on your morals.

The irony is that Demarcus LaValliere is going to be treated the same way he treats his victims. He thinks he can destroy lives for his amusement because he is a famous athlete.

He is right in the regard that the average husband can not do anything to the guy that stole his wife.

He will be equally unable to do anything about Gideon Fontaine messing with his life.

He will learn he is a target.

He will learn what it means to be a victim.

He will learn he can do nothing about a powerful man's whims.

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October is going to suck

October 12th

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Morrison's Parking Lot

Next to an Escalade

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You can hear the music from the club as a man and woman enter the parking lot. The man is Demarcus LaValliere and the lady with him is his latest conquest. Marc saw her husband and decided he was going to take her. It didn't take much effort.

Marc: Are you ready for the night of your life?

Before she can respond there is a chuckle and they see the large man in the black business suit in front of Marc's Escalade. They are startled a bit by this unexpected person.

Gideon: Miss 187 you might want to go back to your future ex husband now.

While not a wrestling fan she knows immediately who Gideon Fontaine is. He is very recognizable. If you didn't know him from wrestling he has been in movies and a very influential billionaire the world over.

Marc: She is my date for the evening. Who the fuck are you?

The lady is shocked at this unfolding. She gets picked by Marc to go back to his house and now is 15 feet away from Gideon Fontaine.

Gideon: It appears I have finally met someone that has no Internet or TV. My name is Gideon Fontaine. You can call me Mr. Fontaine. According to the dossier I have on you Demarcus it explains how incredibly stupid your life choices are but understates heavily how little you know about the world.

Marc: I don't know who the fuck you think you are......

With a smile Gideon holds up his hand to shush Marc like he is a child that is out of line. Marc is actually shocked silent that someone has shushed him.

Gideon: We established you do not know who I am. Obviously you do not know a lot of things or you would be concerned about the poor life choices that led you to meeting me. At least your father taught you to shush when an adult is talking. Miss 187 you should be leaving. I have a hunch that Marc might be losing his temper very shortly and there may be violence. Or more accurately a futile attempt at violence on his part.

The lady runs off, leaving an angry Marc walking up to Gideon and getting in his face. At this point Gideon is smiling with the glee of a child that has just opened his Christmas presents. That smile says 3 words. "Thank You Santa.".

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Gideon: You are coming up to me like you think you are an Alpha Male. You couldn't be farther from the truth.

That being more then Marc can tolerate he swings a right at Gideon who just dodges it. The mocking laughter from that failed attempt enrages Marc. A left hook. A straight right. An attempted takedown. All effortlessly dodged.

Gideon: You aren't an Alpha. You are a good little Beta that can run fast. You have no idea like the puppy dog chasing the car.

There are several more punches thrown and none even come close to hitting Gideon.

Gideon: Your best skill is running. Just like you stole another man's wife and ran. The husband was what 140 soaking wet and you snuck out like a coward. You couldn't look a man that works for a living in the eye. You just snuck away.

There is a crazed look of anger and frustration on his face. More punches are flying but they don't even come close.

Gideon: Your father would be so proud of his widdle Marc. Marky need his binky?

With a scream he lunges at Gideon trying to grab at his neck. If Marc was a trained fighter he would start to realize he was out classed from the start. Sadly he didn't even have a clue how badly he messed up.

Gideon: Time to put baby to bed.

If Marc was able to rationally think he would be learning several things. The first he could learn is that he was in grappling distance now and Gideon was on his right side. The second thing is that his right shoulder was now trapped against his neck and cutting off blood to his right carotid artery. The left carotid artery was being squeezed in a clinch by Gideon's arms. The clinch is squeezing against both arteries. The third thing is that it takes only 4.2 seconds to lose consciousness from the standing Head and Arm Choke.

Gideon: Marc if you only knew what you have in store for you.

Somewhere the Devil has grabbed a bowl of popcorn and grabbed a seat to enjoy the show. The Devil is a fan of Gideon's work and knows when the Osaka Assassin has a grievance he settles it in very inventive ways.

With a snicker Marc is stripped of his clothes barring his boxers and socks. After popping the trunk all the clothes and car keys are tossed in the trunk. There is a brief hesitation as Gideon considers locking everything in the trunk.

After leaning Marc against the side of his Escalade Gideon goes to the front and grabs a bag and starts emptying beer cans near Marc's unconscious body. One is even put in his hand. If someone were to look at this scene they would think that Marc had a mental breakdown stripped off his clothes and started binge drinking. The cans are even Marc's favorite brand Budweiser.

Gideon: I can't understand how anyone can drink this fermented cat urine. Though I still have to laugh at the recent outrage at the cans because of some person on the can.

After softly shaking his head Gideon gets out his phone to take multiple pictures.

Gideon: I always would have thought that people boycotting the beer would be over it's rancid taste and not a political issue that no sane person cares about.

The pictures taken Gideon walks away from the scene. A number is being dialed and there is a ring.

Gideon: Jerry this is Gideon. How is your wife Jessica?

There is a little chit chat and a smile as he prepares to drop a bomb on Marc's future.

Gideon: I'm going to send a few pics of your running back Demarcus LaValliere. He is drunk and passed out in his underwear and socks. You can see about a dozen Budlight cans.

Jerry: I know the guy has been out of control recently.

Gideon: Indeed. You know that recently a married woman he picked up tried to commit suicide after he sent videos of their hook up to her husband?

Jerry: You have gotta be kidding me. This is a joke right?

Gideon: I am not known for my stand up routine.

Jerry: I take it that is how he got on your radar.

Gideon: Yup. The woman is my Personal Assistant's cousin.

Jerry: Shit. I like Amanda. I should can his ass under his morals clause, but I take it that is not why you called me.

A soft snicker echoes in the parking lot.

Gideon: As much as I like to turn his life into a good old Burn the Bastard story book ending with the villain getting punished that would be too easy and a lot less fun. I need you to call him tomorrow and tell him this...............

There are a few words said after but Demarcus LaValliere will not find out until tomorrow about how his next 6 weekends will go. Some people when they live a horrible life and wrong so many people they become born again and find religion.

That isn't likely to be the case so Gideon will find religion for Marc.

Gideon will choke it down his throat whether he wants it or not.

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October sucks and so will a good chunk of November

October 13th

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Demarcus LaValliere mansion

Early morning

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To say Demarcus LaValliere is in a bad mood is an understatement. He is in the shower and he is doing an awful lot of cursing and swearing. You think after a nights sleep he would be calmer but he was angry the whole entire night.

He saw a woman he wanted. She had a tight waist and a great set of breasts. He danced with her. After he felt up those titties he knew she'd be taking her in every hole all night long.

That was not what happened.

Marc: Who does that asshole think he is!!!!

A smart man would have taken note of his name when he introduced himself. A person that had at least a passing interest in events would have recognized the name from various news stories. Unfortunately neither of those descriptions fit Mr. LaValliere.

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