Derived from the work of George Anderson.
"February Sucks"
by GeorgeAnderson
Story Info - He took her because he knew he could. What next?
[:::: Authors Note ::::]
I started off writing some stories mainly to tell my adventures as a Fisherman of Plenty. I did not really think about doing much more. But there was an urge to write again. I used to do a lot of writing Wrestling based stories.
Basically the short version of an E-Fed is people come up with a wrestler who participate in weekly wrestling matches. They told a story and the writer who wrote the best story won the match. Also I was one of the people that wrote the weekly wrestling matches. I wrote several hundred of the short stories as well as several hundred matches. I was considered one of the better story tellers and considered one of the best at putting together entertaining and believable matches. The matches I wrote were generally 3-7 pages and the stories were 5 to 15 pages. Pretty much 10-20 pages or more of original content each week.
I have two stories that are not wrestling based and unpublished anywhere because they were just things I wrote and revised time and time again. I will be publishing them but I'm working on a new creation as well as an introduction of the Gideon Fontaine character..
This is a story topic that gets both a lot of love and hate. The February Sucks story by George Anderson posted on September 11 in 2020. It is probably the best story that is on Literotica because of how many spin offs, sequels, parodies, and revisions. And there are stories based on the spin offs and sequels to the sequels. I have several saved to my PSP in a text format. One folder has 74 and I started a second folder that has 21. There are about 7 I haven't converted to text files yet. This isn't even all of them. These are just the ones I personally saved for my reading enjoyment.
There were a lot of things that caught my interest enough to want to write my own version. My problem is I do not want to try and top some of the better writers and also there are so many versions it is a multiverse all by itself. I do not feel I need to improve on the way George Anderson wrote it. I consider it the official version and intend to reference it as canon barring the things that happen as a result of adding my characters to the story. I can't keep it 100% faithful to the source story because Gideon will be interacting with the people on that February night. Plus I dislike Dee almost as much as I dislike Marc. She is the B that BTB was created for. Also since I altered Marc's timeline there are ripples towards the main characters Jim and Linda because in this version other then the February in question Marc is never in contact with Linda ever again.
My reason for writing is Demarcus "Marc" LaValliere
In the February Sucks multiverse stories Marc has been killed many times in many ways. Mutilated and crippled. Ruined. Jailed. Almost every BTB scenario you can imagine including ones that you wouldn't imagine like vampires. To be fair after Twilight no one can do anything worse to the Vampire genre then that testament to bad acting, necrophilia, and beastiality. There is not a lot of sympathy for Marc because what he does is so cruel and ruined a lot of lives. When I see a new February story I look forward to see what BTB is crafted for Marc next. So far no one has loaded him into a space ship and shot him into the sun.
I prefer to write in a script style. Makes the Dialogue easier to follow and also I try and avoid big sections because I have found the longer the paragraph and the section the more likely readers go into skimming mode and do not read it.
The story started out as a rough chain of events in my mind. As I've thought on them I added, revised, and changed the way it was going. Plus with the dialogue I veered off in ways I never planned. I used to write collaborative tales in real time with other writers. Based on the reactions and ideas what was originally one idea occasionally ended up as something unexpected. The Christian Substance Abuse program was a lot longer then I intended but it was a fun way to get under Marc's skin.
As the story is being written there are some random things being added and at times a narrator comment. Not planned but sometimes the mind wanders and you gotta chase it. Kind of like when you are watching Dukes of Hazzard and then you hear the voice talking about what is happening.
As far as I know no one has decided to make Marc the focus of the story. Maybe this will be disliked because Marc is so unlikable. Maybe someone will see this like the story that made Dave and Dee the focus and do their own interpretation of the villain of the story.
In my opinion Marc was intended to be a throwaway character of no real importance. My interpretation is he is a spoiled man child because he is living a life of very little consequences. He is the basic spoiled self entitled celebrity thinking the world needs to cater to them. Because no one has ever called him on his bull shit he never had to be a decent human being. At the end he is forced to deal with his actions and being the villain in his own life story.
I hope this will be worth the read.
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The day Gideon finds out who Demarcus LaValliere is
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Fontaine Enterprises -- New York City Branch
Outside Gideon's Office
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There is the sound of crying in the office. Amanda is bawling. Amanda Merriworth is Gideon's personal assistant and an unbelievably efficient logistics person. She can supply Gideon with data on whatever he needs to know and generally in real time as he needs it. She will not only have a shovel in Gideon's hand when he needs it. She will generally have it waiting for him. She has been with Gideon through many events and been a rock for him. There is a very short list of people Gideon cares about and Amanda is a person he loves as a family member as well as an employee.
When Gideon sees Amanda crying he immediately is by her side to comfort her. He is by her chair kneeling beside her with a supportive arm around her shoulder for a hug. He looks into her eyes waiting for her to regain her composure to talk to him.
Amanda: Traci is in the hospital!! She tried to kill herself!!
That is a name that Gideon knows. Traci is Amanda's cousin. Amanda is also the god mother of Traci's two girls Francine and Florence.
Amanda: Her father heard her hit the floor after she cut her wrists. He broke the bathroom door and called for an ambulance while trying to stop the bleeding.
Gideon: Where was Trevor?
Amanda: He left her at her parents and said that Traci was dead to her. He was starting the divorce.
Gideon: What happened?
Amanda: She cheated on Trevor. The son of a bitch that seduced her sent videos of him taking her ass to Trevor from her phone.
Gideon: Why in the world would she do that?
Amanda: He is a famous football player. He told her that it would be the greatest sexual experience of her life. Her friends egged her on and said that Trevor would forgive her. It was just one night. She was stupid and thought she could have her fantasy and not ruin her life.
Gideon: I can't believe she could be that stupid.
Amanda: It was all a sick game to that bastard. It wasn't about sex. It was about humiliating the husband. He was taunting Trevor saying things like I stretched out her ass out for you and left you several cream pies.
At that point a dark anger crossed Gideon's face. His eyes turned very cold. There are not many things that provoke Gideon but this one hit several triggers. Amanda could sense the anger.
Gideon: What is his name?
Amanda: Demarcus LaValliere......................
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The day after Gideon finds out who Demarcus LaValliere is
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