When I plan a story in my head, it sometimes looks amiss once it's underway. I usually walk away and pick up something else for a bit or have a drift around other stories looking for a spark. When I was writing
Losing Your Head Over Love
I hit a bump and needed to find a way around it. I read
Gone in Minutes Chapter 3
by
Vandemonium1
which led me to creating a couple of characters called 'Mafi' & 'Osa' which let me pave the way to finishing Losing Your Head Over Love. But Vandemonium1 had created those Gone in Minutes stories as mere introductions for others to complete. This one intrigued me, and my imagination started to build a story up to bring it to a close.
I've written it in a way where you could get away on skipping the first part, but you're missing out if you do. Go click the link above and have a read of the first part of Chapter 03. This follow up takes a darker turn, so bear that in mind. I have run this past Vandemonium1 as it relates to his work who has had a look through it with CreativityTakesCourage and returned it with some suggested edits. I didn't expect that and am exceedingly grateful. Tim1135 and Frankfiredawg06 chipped in too for editing and some nudging along the way. Of course, a final tamper here and there before posting - those errors be mine!
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Gone in Mere Minutes 3 - Part II Eye 4N Eye, Wife for a Wife
I sat on the bench, watching as the kids are hanging on for dear life as another kid spun the roundabout as fast as he could push it. Their carefree laughter in complete contrast to my abject misery. Why? What brought on this sudden change in my life?
Just earlier today, I'd confirmed my worst suspicion. My wife was fooling around on me, confirmed when I'd found her having sex with a donkey. Not like those shows rumored to go down the other side of the border, but a human donkey who happened to be the son-in-law of the local mob boss. They didn't see me as I recorded their rutting earlier. I'd sent two messages. One to a number, I had no idea who actually received it. All I knew was that my message would not go unchecked. The other, to this local mob boss, Andrew Falconi. Sitting deep in thought, I'd not clocked the couple in their fifties slow down, then sit either side of me. I recognized them, Mr. & Mrs. Falconi's pictures appeared in the local press often enough. No idea how they found me but, I think it's time to make a move.
"Kids, time to go!"
They moaned, but were giggling, over emphasizing their giddiness as they lurched their way back to the park bench once the roundabout stopped. Mrs. Falconi turned, despite looking at me, it was as if she was looking through me, as she started speaking.
"My, what a happy pair of young rascals. Don't you agree, Andrew?"
Mr. Falconi just looked straight ahead as he answered her.
"Yeah, they sure are. I think they deserve a treat before they go home, don't you? I tell you what. Maria, why don't you go and buy them whatever ice cream they want from the van over there? What do you say to that, Mr...?"
The children were positively squealing at the notion they were on the precipice of having any ice cream they wanted as they pleaded and clambered all over my lap. I knew who he was, and I was fairly confident he knew who I was. I turned to look at him.
Not taking my eyes from him, I spoke.
"George Marino, Mr...?"
He smiled, like a crocodile.
"Falconi, Andrew Falconi, and this is my wife, Maria."
Turning to look at me again, this time she smiled, then spoke.
"It's a pleasure to meet you, Mr. Marino. We have recently had our first grandchild; I hope they grow up as joyous as your two plainly are. Your house must be full of love."
You had to give it to them. They sounded like your couple of average grandparents who just happened to be out for a stroll in the park. I knew different, after all, they did have a Sicilian connection. I gave a half snort, along with a fake smile as I replied somewhat sarcastically.
"Sure, it was, until earlier today."
Speaking directly to my kids, Mrs. Falconi decided to test me.
"Come on kids, let's go find the biggest ice cream we can. You don't need your daddy for that, do you."
As she stood, the kids shifted to the next level of boisterousness. Staring into my eyes, she held out a hand for them each to take. They looked at me slightly unsure, waiting for my approval for this unusual set of circumstances.
"Trust me, Mr. Marino, we'll take great care of your kids for you, won't we Andrew?"
Her steely gaze never shifted from me when he answered.
"She's the best mother in the world, and it won't be long before the grandkid is old enough to fully appreciate her too. They're perfectly safe."
Oblivious to the threat, they took her hand as they skipped away. They had barely gone five paces before Andrew Falconi gave an instruction.
"OK, Mr. Marino, you sent me a cryptic message earlier today asking to '
take a walk
', let's do that. Once around the boating lake should be enough."
As we started walking, I asked him a simple question.
"How did you know where to find me?"
"You stupid dipshit. I'm Andrew Falconi. It's my business to know everything, especially if it could become a problem. We keep track of people that may be a problem, you weren't until today, when your number came up. We tied it to Tommy's latest slut's husband, which is you. To be honest, he was getting bored with her, I sometimes pick up some of less well used ones, your wife's borderline for me, maybe a little too used for my liking. But hey, when you get to my age, you either have to work harder to catch 'em or have some stud like Tommy snare 'em in the first place.
"As to your question, we know where your kids go to school, somebody followed you when you picked them up, then told me where I'd find you so, here we are."