Recently, I have posted many stories in different categories. These stories were written over many a month, but I posted them in a rush. They elicited many comments from readers. Thank you to the many commenters who offered constructive feedback. I have taken as much of your advice as possible! To those, especially anonymous commenters who only bagged the stories, well karma is a bitch!
I do not write these stories for a star rating, but simply for the joy of writing. I know many authors who submit here write for a similar reason.
I hope you enjoy this story. I tried to make it as realistic as I could, provide a better ending, a conclusive ending and I also added meaningful dialogue, all comments made by many readers of my other stories. Enjoy! (I hope)
ESP
My wife, Elaine, had ESP. No really! At first, I was also a sceptic, but over the years of married life that we shared, the number of times that she predicted something before it happened was too great to discount. She would know who was on the phone before we answered it. She would inexplicably tell me to take a different route on the highway, only to find later that the first way was blocked. Buying decisions were put off because she felt that something was going to happen to that particular product, which it almost invariably did. We both felt that her ESP was real.
Elaine was also a prolific dreamer. She would wake up almost every morning itching to tell me about the dream, or dreams she had during the night. Some were hilarious, but some were chilling in their accuracy. It was as if her dreams were another manifestation of her ESP.
We learned to live with these gifts of hers. We married, of course, and had two beautiful children, John and Mary. At the time of this story telling, they were both embarked on their university studies, leaving Elaine and me to our own devices at home.
Things became interesting when I noticed that Elaine had not bounced out of bed in the mornings to tell me of her dreams. This went on for nearly two weeks.
"Lainey, you haven't been telling me about your night-time adventures in dreamland lately. What's up?" I asked at breakfast.
"Oh!" she replied, a bit flustered. "They have been even too weird for me. I don't think you need to hear them," she added.
Now every husband knows when given that comment, it is just an invitation to push a little further. "Come on Lainey! I have been hearing about these dreams of yours for all our married life. Why would you stop now?"
"Because, because," she added hesitantly, "Because you may not like what you hear. There! I have said it, now please leave it be!"
I was slightly taken aback by this outburst from Elaine. It must be something very difficult for her to talk about for her to even entertain the idea of not sharing. Now, the topics of her dreams have always been fairly eclectic, so I never knew what I would get each morning. This was way out there though! The list of things that she didn't like to talk about went through my mind. Was it her parents' deaths? Was it the early scare with John straight after his birth? Was it the mysterious disappearance of Mary for one night when she was eighteen? Was it her past boyfriends? (Although we did speak about them, and my own girlfriends, often, early in our married life!)
I knew to let it be for now. I knew it would surface eventually and all I had to do was be patient! Like a good husband. Which, without blowing my own trumpet too loudly, I was, mostly! I had been an accountant all of my working life, and although the money I made wasn't fantastic, it was a stable steady stream of income which provided a middle-class lifestyle for our family. I could honestly say that I was a level-headed type of guy, slow to anger, but quick to appreciate the funny side of life. Our house was always filled with laughter and good-hearted fun. The times when I had to be tough, I was. Bringing up two children does have its difficult times, as well as the times of absolute joy.
Elaine and I enjoyed a very comfortable relationship. After the white hot passion of our early married life, we settled into a more sedate unspoken partnership where occasionally, the old passions emerged. We both accepted that. We often spoke about this change, but agreed that we didn't regret one thing about how our life was going. Money was good, health was good, the promise of grandchildren sometime in the future, and the ability to travel. All good!
Sure enough, this dream was really eating at Elaine. The non-telling continued for another two weeks, until one morning, while I was preparing breakfast, she rushed in and sat straight down. "Bill! I have to tell you about this dream. It is killing me!" Elaine was almost distraught. We had always discussed things with each other. Sometimes the telling was uncomfortable and brought on heated discussions. My level-headed nature balanced Elaine's emotion filled tellings perfectly. Our arguments usually didn't last long until we both settled on a compromise and ended up laughing about them, or enjoying some love-making.
I poured the coffee, waiting for the tale to begin. "This should be interesting!" I thought. I could see that Elaine was very nervous and did that wringing of the hands that she always did when she wanted to concentrate on something.
"Bill. I dreamt that I would see James before I die. Before my life is over."
"Holy crap!" I thought. "She has an inkling of her own death? This is new. Now I'm getting worried."
"Bill. I keep having the same dream every night. It has been getting more and more urgent. I just can't seem to shake it. You know who I mean don't you? James. James Sloop. The boy I met in New Zealand many years ago."
Now she looked at me with those desperate eyes which I rarely saw on Elaine. I knew James Sloop. I only met him once. That was the day after our wedding. The story is that when Elaine was eighteen, her, and one of her good friends joined a group that toured the two main islands of New Zealand for two weeks. It was an exciting time for her. Elaine had travelled many times overseas before, but always with her parents. This was the first time she was basically on her own. The tour group was basically a camping type where all the travel is done in a bus. Everyone spent a great deal of time with everyone else during the long bus rides. While not being restricted to eighteen year-olds, it was the age of the majority of the members. James was also in that group and he and Elaine got very close during the tour. I didn't know Elaine all that well way back then. We were basically just in the same school system. I did, however, see the pictures of the tour later and could see that they were obviously close during that time. By the time I did see the pictures, Elaine and I were a couple and I had to bury the hint of jealousy which tried to surface at the realisation that the now love of my life, was close (maybe intimate?) with another man. I had to rationalise it by realising that it was a past thing and the present was different. I also had old girlfriends and I had to bury those experiences as well.
I got a little pissed when, the day after we were married, we had to hold off leaving for our honeymoon until James could come over and give his wedding gift. I only agreed because all of Elaine's family insisted that we wait. He had taken a late flight from New Zealand and could only come that morning. He had actually missed the wedding.
"Poor James, flying all that way and not getting to see the wedding," Elaine's mum piped in. She knew about James and Elaine. More than I did apparently, but she was happy with our decision to get married. I always had the impression that Elaine's mum would have been just as happy if Elaine had married James. It was only a feeling though and never something said outright. They always treated me with the respect a son-in-law deserved and I always respected them. They were an easy family to get to know and I did love them like my own parents. A well-oiled wedding celebration was extremely important to Elaine's mum and for her to think that someone would come all that way and end up not seeing the happy couple, was almost unbearable for her. "Bill, you just have to wait a little longer. There's no need to rush off. You will have the rest of your lives together!